Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 17th, 2021/Warn Emilia

Testing out the format and characters. I'm probably doing it the hard way or something, but the templates are tricky for me. It's interesting though. --Villenia (talk) 07:05, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Yeah, they get a while to get used to. I use a spreadsheet for an easy copy and paste and bolden up parts of the code that aren't meant to be changed. Once I copy it to the site's editing tool, any color, bolding or whatever other changes I do with text editor won't matter so there's no change in the end product. I'm sure there's an even easier way but I'm just starting to understand how the templates work myself.

As for your final product, I'm liking where this is going. I feel like you got the character personalities right. Laura pretending to be angry to trick Emilia makes it fun, and just like in my own original plans for the route I'm trying to have time to start writing, they cannot find anything fun to do at beach so they plan on leaving. Wouldn't change a thing.

The only real question I have at this point is how Emilia will manage to break the rules. By herself it's easy to imagine that she would make a mistake, but the presence of her friends complicates the situation. The way I imagine things, Emilia is still easily influenced by her friend's behavior and guidance, and I'd imagine them trying to stop her if she wanted to run away or break the rules, basically try to get her to calm and slow down. Emilia of course still FAR less experienced so such tactics by her friends would likely be ineffective. Maybe fear could still win her over and she would end up making an irrational decision, maybe it all just happens too quick for her to make any kind of rational decision. Anyway, interested to see where this'll go. I'm sure it'll turn out great as well. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 11:10, 12 September 2021 (UTC)