Talk:This Time Round

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Interesting premise, one question and two suggestions. The question is, In your rules you say the standard setting involves no magic, mind control or supernatural elements, you also allow for authors to create other settings, so can these posses those elements.

Suggestions:

Put a return link on your about page that returns the reader to the front page.
On your jump page, if you want it to be the start page, don't have the names be the links. Have them be titles with the new jumps linked underneath. Otherwise someone is liable to just start writing on the next link page and ruin the transition page for other jumps. You can see examples of this in the start pages for "Disciplinary Action" and "Mother's Helping Hand". For example:

Caleb Wright Age 26, School District IT worker.

This time around Caleb went straight to work.
This time around Caleb stayed home and played with his neighbor.

--Telgar (talk) 15:11, 22 March 2020 (CET)



Good suggestions.

Yes, the concept of a time loop can be completely open. If you make a new character they don't need to exist in the default world.

As for the first character page, that page should be a bio. I had not written that part. From there you will have two links the first loop link and the base loop start page link.

I will still insist on using the words "This Time Round" for links to branching options.

So,


This time round Caleb stayed home and played with his neighbor.

--Quiller (talk) 16:30, 22 March 2020 (CET)