Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 17th, 2021/Daniel brings Heidi and Milka to his cabin

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Right, so I decided to just publish this raw and uncensored without a thought put into "toning" any bits or parts of it down. Probably the furthest I'm ever willing to flirt with breaking the story rules, walking on a tightrope around the "no rape" rule, but if there are any strong objections or desire to tone this down, I'm open to suggestions here as well. I'd prefer to not make any major changes, but at the same time… I guess it's whatever. I tried to make Danny's and Milka's little war of words feel more like an ideological disagreement rather than a good vs evil thing, even though admittedly, I totally intended for Danny to be the bad guy on this page. I don't want him to be wholly evil, though. That would be boring, in my honest opinion. Maybe I did a good enough job at it, maybe not. Anyway, in the spirit of the story meant to be a happy one and not a depressive one, Milka will of course get over it and be fine! Or, well, as "over it" and "fine" as a child struggling with depression can be. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 19:14, 2 November 2022 (CET)

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