Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 17th, 2021/Daniel brings Heidi and Milka to his cabin

Right, so I decided to just publish this raw and uncensored without a thought put into "toning" any bits or parts of it down. Probably the furthest I'm ever willing to flirt with breaking the story rules, walking on a tightrope around the "no rape" rule, but if there are any strong objections or desire to tone this down, I'm open to suggestions here as well. I'd prefer to not make any major changes, but at the same time… I guess it's whatever. I tried to make Danny's and Milka's little war of words feel more like an ideological disagreement rather than a good vs evil thing, even though admittedly, I totally intended for Danny to be the bad guy on this page. I don't want him to be wholly evil, though. That would be boring, in my honest opinion. Maybe I did a good enough job at it, maybe not. Anyway, in the spirit of the story meant to be a happy one and not a depressive one, Milka will of course get over it and be fine! Or, well, as "over it" and "fine" as a child struggling with depression can be. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 19:14, 2 November 2022 (CET)

Not where I was thinking it would go! I was thinking Milka might accept a punishment she felt she didn't deserve, sort of sacrificial like Emilia, then felt betrayed by Danny for making her do that. This totally works though. I'd definitely like to expand/tweak a few things if I may. I think it makes even more sense for Milka to be hurt in the way she is that could be "exposited" on here. And I think you're right that Danny doesn't have to be pure evil or anything. He's just selfishly looking for his own bit of fun to tie into her punishment. If anything, he could also feel betrayed by Milka as he thought the two of them had an understanding around such things and she didn't respond the way he expected her to.

One question I have would be why Milka would want to "get back" at Danny at all given how it ended. Would she want to have anything to do with him again? I certainly wouldn't think it would be anything playful, and maybe that's not where you're going with that idea. And that's fine if not, just curious, in part so I can tie in/leave open options, but I'm not looking to make any crazy changes. I can throw my tweaks in and see what you think (and eventually work on other branches again, lol) --Villenia (talk) 00:11, 3 November 2022 (CET)