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Yes this is what i like now both paths are very different and i love where this is going Stella being smart but to eager and Heidi noticing it i perfect and you even resolve the issue of Stella wanting Emilia to herself about the options both are kind of similar in one hand she tries to investigate but get discovered im guessing by the dad or the mom since the dad is waiting for her and the mom was just around that area a moment ago and in the other hand Heidi truly believes Stella wont hurt Emilia so going with the dad is a bonus for her. to be honest the first option makes the most sense but the second option makes sense too since she is the type who would like to get advantage of the opportunity to bang the dad and she may not have so many chances to do so normally she even have the approval of Stella. Love it thank you for your great work. --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 03:46, 10 October 2022 (CEST)
Yes this is what i like now both paths are very different and i love where this is going Stella being smart but to eager and Heidi noticing it i perfect and you even resolve the issue of Stella wanting Emilia to herself about the options both are kind of similar in one hand she tries to investigate but get discovered im guessing by the dad or the mom since the dad is waiting for her and the mom was just around that area a moment ago and in the other hand Heidi truly believes Stella wont hurt Emilia so going with the dad is a bonus for her. to be honest the first option makes the most sense but the second option makes sense too since she is the type who would like to get advantage of the opportunity to bang the dad and she may not have so many chances to do so normally she even have the approval of Stella. Love it thank you for your great work. --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 03:46, 10 October 2022 (CEST)
Fun! I'm assuming the sneaky option is Heidi's perspective on the sauna action with an interruption and the second just keeps Heidi away so the fun "completes". Based on that I kinda want the second one just to find out the rest of Stella's motivation here. Perhaps just a conquest she can rub in Heidi's face, but nothing wrong with that! --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 07:00, 10 October 2022 (CEST)

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Ok this was clever the two pages are practically the same but with very different results, i love it is like a mass effect game type of choice, now about the options i love this one a lot, Stella is growing on me really quickly. nothing against the teachers but you know they sound like the responsible adults so sounds a bit more boring. but Stella seems to be the bullyish character and i love her already, and boi is she desperate she must really like her little friend there the things she was proposing to do holy shit. Emilia is in for a treat now the question is she gonna wait until Heidi leaves to take advantage of that black star maybe fuck Heidi a little and then Let Emilia stay with her (since she doesn't want Heidi to know) or she is just gonna do it the moment they are in the cabin and make Heidi watch or something. or i could be super wrong and I'm assuming incorrectly either away and I'm super excited Great Work and thank you for all the effort you been doing so much effort thank you a lot. --Xephion (talk) 22:43, 7 October 2022 (CEST)

This path is more fun I think. Stella's motivation isn't laid out too clearly, but it makes more sense here since she's kinda switching gears. Like she could get even better revenge on Heidi by messing with her black star strumpet friend. Part of me wants to tweak the dialogue on the other path to align with that, because on that side Stella thinks she's getting exactly what she had wanted, which is Heidi. Happy to do so if you'll allow me! Otherwise I'm just as happy to leave it. My thanks as well! --Villenia (talk) 22:59, 7 October 2022 (CEST)

On this path, I think it would also make more sense for Stella to assume that Heidi knows about Emilia's black star. Emilia is barely covering it and since she and Heidi went out together then it all fits. So the fun part would be that Stella thinks that Heidi doesn't know that Stella knows about that star, which is what would force Stella to be more sneaky about taking about advantage of it and keep Heidi from claiming Emilia for herself (and of course give Heidi her comeuppance by doing to Heidi what Heidi did to Stella) when in reality it's Heidi that doesn't know. Anyway, I'm sure you've thought this out already, but I like this path the more I think of it! --Villenia (talk) 23:15, 7 October 2022 (CEST)

Yeah, since some things were always going to happen here directly after Emilia's realization, no matter what, it made some sense for me to do a bit of copy-and-paste action to write a similar preview of both 😅 feels lazy in hindsight, but whatever. Stella's motivations are a bit of a blur indeed. Maybe it's because she really has no grand plan to begin with and is just going by the flow, or maybe she was never that angry in the first place! There is definitely room to expand the dialogue in any and all directions, meaning that you, Villenia, can make some changes on the other page if you want. I would prefer to make my own changes on this page later, as I want Heidi's little torture to last a little bit longer, for example. The whole dynamic about Stella thinking Heidi knows also sounds like a fun idea to expand on early.

"How to get rid of Heidi" is something of a challenge for me at this point (and even more so for Stella) and trust me, I haven't decided on how to untangle that mess at all! My original idea here was for Stella to leap in to "save" Emilia from being seen, which would've left Heidi with her pink star and pants down for the teachers to take advantage of, an act of revenge against Heidi in itself! 😂 I'll be away from keyboard for a decent chunk of the weekend anyway so I'm happy to leave that sauce to simmer and take a break from writing here. Anyway, all the ideas mentioned are on the table right now (plus one additional one which you haven't guessed yet) and it's probably gonna be the next crossroad in this route. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 00:07, 8 October 2022 (CEST)

Well whatever you come up with sounds exciting anyway because to be honest this path have been pretty fun to read so far, But.... since you are talking about ideas... ill throw one of my classic ideas you guys know i do like the situations where some get a bit bullied and ends up liking it, Stella knowing about the black star is so exciting to me and i mean Stella seems to have in her mind that Emilia is like a lover of Heidi or someone Heidi truly cares about or fucks around with so i can totally see her using Emilia to get revenge on Heidi and we know how kinky Stella is already i mean she even suggested the collar so i can totally see her trying to get Emilia to be hers to get back to Heidi and making Emilia hers by treating her like a pet (with consent of course but Emilia would like to be bullied lets be honest). Because Stella has the delusion that Heidi and Emilia are more than just friends or just because she is a friend or Heidi when she was just used and left behind (without actually knowing that Heidi and Emilia are just friends and not lovers or fucking well at least not on a romantic way) but of course this is just one of my perverted ideas that i have to try to get Master/pet situations going so feel free to ignore it but i like this dynamic of throwing ideas, is fun to think about stuff's and truly inspiring. I really wanna write something one day ill wait till my life is a little bit less chaotic and when inspiration hits me (is there but i wanna have more context before trying). I hope you enjoy your weekend or at least don't stress too much about it in the case is work and not fun --Xephion (talk) 00:35, 8 October 2022 (CEST)

Yes this is what i like now both paths are very different and i love where this is going Stella being smart but to eager and Heidi noticing it i perfect and you even resolve the issue of Stella wanting Emilia to herself about the options both are kind of similar in one hand she tries to investigate but get discovered im guessing by the dad or the mom since the dad is waiting for her and the mom was just around that area a moment ago and in the other hand Heidi truly believes Stella wont hurt Emilia so going with the dad is a bonus for her. to be honest the first option makes the most sense but the second option makes sense too since she is the type who would like to get advantage of the opportunity to bang the dad and she may not have so many chances to do so normally she even have the approval of Stella. Love it thank you for your great work. --Xephion (talk) 03:46, 10 October 2022 (CEST)


Fun! I'm assuming the sneaky option is Heidi's perspective on the sauna action with an interruption and the second just keeps Heidi away so the fun "completes". Based on that I kinda want the second one just to find out the rest of Stella's motivation here. Perhaps just a conquest she can rub in Heidi's face, but nothing wrong with that! --Villenia (talk) 07:00, 10 October 2022 (CEST)