Talk:Ecstasy Island/The Kensington Family/7

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Feedback: I like it! Pacing is good, maybe a little rushed at times, but overall decent. Not sure where it should go. Is his appearance going to change to better match his self image or change him however he wants to make it easier to lay his dad? Because given where they are it would make the most sense for him to be disguised as another villager. Whether you wanted to go full blown hermaphrodite or good old sissy boy is up to you! --Villenia (talk) 22:30, 4 January 2022 (CET)

Yeah, I'm trying not to rush things, but that's not one of my strengths. I was hoping this one would be a little shorter than my normal fare so I could actually finish it. I'm definitely a fan of sissys...but I'm also really a preg fetishist at heart. With Alex it's probably going to be a transitional affair to reflect his comfort with his own sexuality. He'll likely start on the sissy route, transition to trans woman, and finally end up as an incest-pregnant futanari...just going by my fetishes. --Elerneron (talk) 03:04, 5 January 2022 (CET)