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Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there. | Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there. | ||
It's also a convention to start a new paragraph every time you change speaker when you write dialogue. | |||
Revision as of 16:46, 29 December 2019
Don't take this the wrong way, but you could really do with making your paragraphs shorter. Big blocks of text are pretty hard to read - you need some white space in there.
It's also a convention to start a new paragraph every time you change speaker when you write dialogue.