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At this time I have to request that you stop editing my work, I asked politly before that you not change description, dialog or anything else you hat was not specifically related to grammar, punctuation or spelling. Yet you continue to do so.
I write what I write for a reason and I want it there. I used pre-teen because that is the term I want to use. A pre-teen is anyone under the age of thirteen.
--[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 18:49, 26 April 2020 (CEST)

Revision as of 16:49, 26 April 2020

Dannie is referred to as a "preteen" numerous times in this narrative. Since he's only six years old, I didn't think that was accurate. To my mind preteen is a child between ten and twelve.

I made a lot of changes on this page and I hope you approve. I've no doubt I'll come back to it and change a few more things. That said, I do really like the whole premise of having a teenage boy fucking the little girl while his mother helps.

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At this time I have to request that you stop editing my work, I asked politly before that you not change description, dialog or anything else you hat was not specifically related to grammar, punctuation or spelling. Yet you continue to do so.

I write what I write for a reason and I want it there. I used pre-teen because that is the term I want to use. A pre-teen is anyone under the age of thirteen. --Telgar (talk) 18:49, 26 April 2020 (CEST)