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Glad to see more from you! I had an idea for this branch in the cabin but I don't want to steal anything away from you. If you wanted to advance one of those options a little or give some insight into where you wanted to bring it I could build off of that.

--Villenia (talk) 13:56, 20 March 2023 (UTC)


I have some plans already, so I'd like to maintain control for now. If you want to write for any of the paths not taken, I'd love to read your take (pardon the pun). I also appreciate any ideas you want to share.

I plan to take the 'Leave her to the wolves' path where, after some shenanigans, Emma convinces Yulia to sleep in her underwear. Then you once again wake up early to find she took off the underwear sometime in the middle of the night so she is now splayed out on her sleeping bag butt-naked. Later at breakfast or maybe lunch, Auntie Grace offers to watch the kids at the river if you want some time to yourself.

Your "solitude" in the cabin is eventually interrupted by May bursting in to tell you "A fish stole my panties!" I'm not sure what else happens during the day, but in the evening, Aunt Debbie asks you why she ran through camp naked and looking for you. You explain she lost her underwear in the river. Some back and forth and Auntie Grace joins in, then Aunt Debbie agrees if they want to swim they'll have to do it naked, so they don't lose any more clothes.

Then Asha gets sick in the cabin after eating the berries you told May not to eat. After helping set up the tent, you rejoin the adults. Returning to the tent, you walk in on whatever it is the kids get up to that night. Given they have been sleeping in underwear and Aunt Debbie gave her girls permission to skinny dip, you are not too concerned if the worst of it is running though the woods naked or even stripping each other like B&B did earlier in the day.

I'm very curious what happened in the tent the night Beth slept in your cabin. I also want to know the fall out of the parents learning what happened. Given the existing perversity of this family, is there any world where the secrets get revealed at just the right rate that Jay diddling his cousins comes out looking like a minor issue?

--LukeJ (talk) 15:28, 20 March 2023 (UTC)


I can definitely work with the defend her path here. What happens in the tent can be as mild or wild as you want it to be. Different people in the tent will definitely change what happens. You being there could change a ton. I'd say Nicole is more likely to be there in this branch, especially if you are. So the tent is even more crowded, or some kids choose to bunk with their parents for the night. But in the B&B branch, Gem lets slip to someone that her step brother was rubbing his penis again. She doesn't share any more than that, and I won't say there isn't more to it, but Wade is already known as a perv and his step mom had assured people he wouldn't be out there anyway. That's enough to make the parents question sleeping arrangements, wonder what else might have happened, but not wanting to overreact when they don't get more details. Mostly everyone is satisfied with Wade being out of the equation.

I'd say there are sympathetic parties in the family, but Jay sure wouldn't want to get caught outright. His mom already shut him down pretty hard in one branch for less. But a select few might give him a pass given the severity or circumstances. The teens wouldn't pose a problem. Auntie Grace could turn a blind eye if it wasn't too bad. Uncle Mike might even let something slide. Uncle Willy is a pretty shit father and doesn't much care what's going on, but there's no guarantee he wouldn't share what he came across just for a laugh. Uncle Dave and Aunt Clara might suppress something to keep from ruining the trip, especially if that something reflected poorly on their perfect daughter. Your dad would give you more rope than your mom, but not enough to hang yourself with. But with all that said, if you can weave a good story, go hard! --Villenia (talk) 12:59, 21 March 2023 (UTC)