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Typo in TDTL1 in the 9th paragraph second sentence: you used "he" instead of "she" when talking about Kate hugging her dad.

She didn't seem to notice, or if she did, she didn't care, she didn't want me to die, so he hugged me tight and didn't let go.

Thanks unknown person --PrincessKittens (talk) 07:27, 1 March 2022 (CET)

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	She didn't seem to notice, or if she did, she didn't care, she didn't want me to die, so '''he''' hugged me tight and didn't let go.		She didn't seem to notice, or if she did, she didn't care, she didn't want me to die, so '''he''' hugged me tight and didn't let go.


			Thanks unknown person --[[User:PrincessKittens\|PrincessKittens]] ([[User talk:PrincessKittens\|talk]]) 07:27, 1 March 2022 (CET)