Talk:The Perverted Awakeness of the Mommy Miss Carly/camp story part 2

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Lots of editing here. Unwanted apostrophes, punctuation wrong, spelling mistakes and the tenses mixed up - to name only part of it

I do like the story though and I hope you approve of the changes.