Talk:The Perverted Awakeness of the Mommy Miss Carly/camp story part 2

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Lots of editing here. Unwanted apostrophes, punctuation wrong, spelling mistakes and the tenses mixed up - to name only part of it

I do like the story though and I hope you approve of the changes.

Editing permissions for this story are Closed. This means no edits whatsoever are permitted; not spell, grammar, or content. I have therefore reverted all edits back to the original author's version. Be careful to check the story permissions before making edits on a story. --Elerneron (talk) 12:59, 24 October 2022 (CEST)

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