Talk:Whodunnit/To the Doctor's office
Ok, I wasn't expecting that. And now the title makes a lot more sense. Since I love the idea of a child getting pregnant (and specifically how she got that way), I think this is the first story where that result is actually the beginning of the story. I wonder if you will follow with flashbacks to all the possible subjects, or if we are to join the girl and her mother into an investigation to find the one responsible?
One thing that still doesn't sit well with me is Angela's age. You say she's seven, but both in the previous chapter and on this one she's behaved a lot more like a preschool kid. If you hadn't given her an age, I would have guessed she was five, perhaps six at most.
Well, I'm ready to beging solving this mystery, so go ahead, I'll keep reading and trying to guess.
So far, without any other clues, we have the following suspects:
- The dad
- The uncle
- One of the cousins
- Friend at old school
- Friend at new school
--Tod Naturlich (talk) 08:53, 17 February 2018 (CET)
The age thing kinda tripped me up as well. Somehow I had to present her as a picture of innocence and naivete... while still having her body mature enough to get pregnant. --Purre (talk) 16:20, 17 February 2018 (CET)
Well, seven is already too young for a "normal" pregnancy, so it's likely Angela suffers some kind of hormonal imbalance that triggered early ovulation. If that's the case, there is a record of a 5-year-old girl getting pregnant, so you could set her age back is you really wanted. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 18:30, 17 February 2018 (CET)