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The story follows a young man named Rei who becomes the babysitter for three little girls who move in next door to him. The story is somewhat interactive, with a few branching paths. | The story follows a young man named Rei who becomes the babysitter for three little girls who move in next door to him. The story is somewhat interactive, with a few branching paths. | ||
If you find any errors (typos, missing words, extra words, etc.), please feel free to correct them. '''Just be careful when correcting broken English | If you find any errors (typos, missing words, extra words, etc.), please feel free to correct them. '''Just be careful when correcting broken English.''' If the sentence in question is dialog for one of the younger girls, then I likely did it on purpose (as young children sometimes speak wrong). | ||
For comments, suggestions, etc. you can post those on this story's forum thread here: | For comments, suggestions, etc. you can post those on this story's forum thread here: | ||
Revision as of 18:02, 3 January 2020
[Author's Note]: This is my first attempt at writing a long sequential story. I've had plenty of practice writing contained, short narratives for my games, but nothing as involved as this.
The story follows a young man named Rei who becomes the babysitter for three little girls who move in next door to him. The story is somewhat interactive, with a few branching paths.
If you find any errors (typos, missing words, extra words, etc.), please feel free to correct them. Just be careful when correcting broken English. If the sentence in question is dialog for one of the younger girls, then I likely did it on purpose (as young children sometimes speak wrong).
For comments, suggestions, etc. you can post those on this story's forum thread here:
https://allthefallen.moe/forum/index.php?threads/the-babysitter-and-the-sisterly-trio.13147
I hope you enjoy the story!