User talk:BakaG

Welcome

Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy yourself here. Feel free to start contributing whenever you like. I'm trying to avoid some of the issues over at Create Your Own Story, so the rules are slightly different. Hopefully I've made them a bit more clear, though. Again, it's good to see that you've made it. --Elerneron (talk) 16:07, 3 October 2015 (CEST)

Well, here's hoping you get your muse back. Cheers! --Elerneron (talk) 01:46, 5 October 2015 (CEST)

No worries. I'm sure if you get things too out of character either myself or Jemini will pop in to make suggestions. All of 2 Taboo 4 You should be transferred at this point, except for some contradictory material, so have at it. BTW Jemini is the lead on 2 Taboo 4 You now, as he has put a lot more into it than have I.--Elerneron (talk) 11:22, 12 October 2015 (CEST)

Your addition seems in character to me. I seem to remember starting a similar story arc . . . not sure where that went. BTW, I moved some of your messages on my talk page to the 2T4U feedback section. That's really where anything related to the story should go. --Elerneron (talk) 20:18, 13 October 2015 (CEST)

I have just received permission from Platypus to advertise All the Fallen Stories at the top of the All Adult Stories section of the Create Your Own Story site. I'm still having problems making posts with external links, so I was wondering if you'd do me a favor and add thisunder the pedo disclaimer there:

For those who wish to read or write such stories, a lolicon/shotacon website has created a similar wiki story system catering to underage stories.  Please feel free to vist [https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Main_Page All the Fallen Stories].

Probably best with a space between the two. --Elerneron (talk) 21:50, 13 October 2015 (CEST)

Never mind, I posted it with a non-link link. If no one has done so when you get this could you change it to a real link? --Elerneron (talk) 22:54, 14 October 2015 (CEST)

External links are just surrounded by braces, with a space then what you want to display thus: [https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Main_Page All the Fallen Stories] --Elerneron (talk) 07:04, 16 October 2015 (CEST)

You can dismiss the announcement by clicking on the word dismiss to the right of the announcement. As long as you allow cookies from this site, you won't see that particular announcement again. --Elerneron (talk) 02:30, 13 February 2016 (CET)

Jemini

I just checked out your additions, it looks perfectly fine. I might edit it though, not because there is anything wrong, but because it seems to have moved on while ignoring some potential for more options to be available. (I had some other complaints before editing this, but when I read it a second time to consider how I might edit it, witch of course made me consider it harder, I realized it was fine.) --Jemini (talk)

Anyway, glad to see you contributing. I was getting a little bored being the only one since Elerneron took a back-seat to focus on world development while I was the one making most of the story entries. Working together on something like this can be rather fun. I work better when my ideas are bouncing between myself and other people. --Jemini (talk)

I just edited Aaron's profile to include his sexual knowledge. I am going to also be doing the same thing with every human character under the age of 12. (Might also include the sexual history of characters over 12, but haven't decided yet.) That is another thing we are going to be needing to keep on the same page about, especially now that there is more than one person who is really editing this thing. --Jemini (talk)

No problem. Your writing is probably some of the best I have seen from other contributors. I think you may have seen some of the content on the original version back on the old site, I believe Ellen's content is still from one of the not-so-great authors who went on with this who was especially guilty of rushing things and not leaving space for others to provide options. Yours at least is simple enough to just divide, some of his is of a level that the entire thing just needs to be scrapped and re-written.

Anyway, I have been doing this long enough that I have developed something of an eye for decision points. I will probably edit your posts by dividing them in the future, but your content itself is good enough I doubt I will ever wind up actually changing anything. Your stuff is great. It is also great we have different tastes, it will allow the story to be more filled out with varying options. --Jemini (talk)

Hey, thanks for editing my stuff for grammar, but I haven't seen any more story entries from you in a while. Are you planning on continuing with the Sissy Aaron line any time soon? Jemini (talk) 03:16, 5 January 2016(CET)

Lol, I have been there. I find that your creative juices start to flow a lot more freely if you just focus on writing anyway for a little while. There is a slight decrease in your writing quality, but if you keep at it then that decrease will not be THAT bad. (also, you can go back and edit your stuff if you are not satisfied with the quality.) So, unless you just have too much on your plate to try this, my recommendation would be to just write something, even if it's crap, beat yourself up over it being crap for a while, then kick yourself when you realize what you SHOULD have written, then go back and edit it. Jemini (talk) 19:56, 5 January 2016 (CET)

I have decided to temporarily suspend filling in votes for 2T4U due to my burn out. I have made notes of this on my talk page, but I decided to back this up here. You can feel free to make requests for Hot Summer Job or God's Compensation though.Jemini (talk) 20:22, 28 March 2016 (CEST)

EDIT: Never mind, you were not the target for that last edit.Jemini (talk) 20:22, 28 March 2016 (CEST)

I am still a little out of it for that story, but there ought to be plenty that we can do in the direction you are thinking. I would say the best way to get on to the teammate idea would be to have Jack go out to the teammate's house in the same way he went to Brittany's house. Basically, take the scene where he decided to walk over to Brittany's and write in the name of the teammate he decided to walk over to. (maybe a teammate who he knows to be gay? That could lead to some interesting goings on. Especially if they also had a little sister who's cloths they would be using for the brother. That could get interesting. Actually, I think you have just given me inspiration. I will start writing up the ground-work for the scene. What do you think of a gay team-mate with male-female twin younger siblings and they get together and encourage the kids to switch cloths? Both of us could write scenes for the encounter gearing Jack one way or the other in terms of witch sibling he becomes interested in. Jemini (talk) 20:07, 30 May 2016 (CEST)

Ok, I've got it. I have added the Blake family to the main list of profiles. You can add having Jack go over to his friend Gary's house at this point. (They will be fine, just finish your cereal.) I still have some things to finish up in the Blake family profiles, but this should be enough for you to work with. Jemini (talk) 21:07, 30 May 2016 (CEST)