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Welcome to the site. It's always good to have new writers here. Please familiarize yourself with the Format Rules. Your entry for Public Nudity was missing the category. I corrected the issue on that page, but please be sure to add the category to any future entries. Thanks. --Elerneron (talk) 02:19, 18 August 2018 (CEST)

The best thing about "Open" stories is collaboration. So feel free to edit my entries as well. There's always room for improvement and different ideas. If I ever do anything you really dislike you can always just revert to an earlier version. But yeah I felt that scene needed to be expanded and tweaked a little. I'll always try to keep your writing style intact whenever I do edit something. Villenia (talk) 23:38, 29 December 2019 (UTC)

Notsooldpervert

Yeah, I figured, with the age of the group, the boys probably wouldn't have sex with her. Oh well, at least they'll be groping and exposing her like she's their personal little plaything lol. Perhaps after the camping trip, you'll take a crack at a different path, or maybe pick up the one where the 18 yo is in the theater with a middle school class. For that matter, I like all three of the girls that have been started already lol. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:18, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

Not sure how embarrassed the budding exhibitionists are going to be when they're nude, but that's a fun angle. I do hope there's lots of sex, and not just groping and fondling. That can be a big part of it, but I'd still like to see those pussies dripping cum. Like the 12 yo on the sunbathing in the backyard path, for instance. Someone's picked up the plot where she gets locked out and the postman shows up, which has potential. There's also the one where the boy next door watches her masturbate, and he runs off. I'd love to see her run into the lad's mother, who gets a kick out of the girl's adventurous spirit, and plays with her a little before talking her into boosting her son's confidence by spending the day with him naked. Works better if he's not home sick though, like home schooled (since it's already established school is still in session). Oooh, talk her into being the model for his sex-ed, with hands on practical experience! For the 18 yo, I like the one where she's in the theater with the middle school kids and they gang bang her, but I'd prefer the one where the boys take the initiative and she just lets them do what they want (the more boys join in, the more eager the other boys are to join in). The path where she gets the Nudist License making it legal for her to go wherever she wants naked has a lot of potential. For the 24 yo that hasn't been started yet... Obviously the side characters will often be the young ones. Maybe she's a single mom (had a kid in her teens so the boy is old enough to show interest?)? Or maybe she's a teacher who has a new Nudist License? I dunno, there's potential there, but I like the lolis better so I haven't given it much thought. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:33, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

For the 24 yo, I was going to suggest she had the kid at like 14-15 so it would be about 10 now. The other option would be the younger sibling. My sister has a 25 yo, a 14 yo and a 12 yo. Obviously she's not 24, but if the oldest had to take in the youngest... another option would be Aunt/Nephew. Something happened to the mom and he had to go live with her, or at least stay the summer. Maybe mom got a new job overseas and will be gone a year so he's staying with Aunt who has been a nudist for years and keeps "forgetting" she has company now. I look forward to your depiction of their embarrassed nudity exciting and arousing them so much they eagerly dive into their own lust lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:13, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

They were just suggestions; write the story your way (; As for incest, I'm all for it. One of my favorite stories on here is Incest Seduction by Villenia. Brother, or Dad. My only idea for the brother is to be naked and masturbating on his bed when he walks in lol. Keep an eye on those discussion pages, I tend to drop suggestions there. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:48, 28 December 2019 (UTC)

Had a thought about your ENF story related to the space station. What if... future society has lost a lot of its nudity (and possibly sex) taboos. One of the colony ships got lost, and was recently recovered after drifting for a century or two. Now these 21st century people. fresh out of cryo-stasis, are having to adjust to 23rd or 24th century society, and aren't quite prepared for the new relaxed norm. Transparent clothes, or casual nudity even in public. No age of consent. No taboo against incest since they've perfected genetic therapy to fix things. Now here's a girl, who led a sheltered life back on earth, and now there are semi naked (or completely naked) people everywhere, and she's socially pressured to join in. It's perfectly "normal" but she's still mortified. Perhaps she's hazed a bit as her peers convince her that casual groping and/or casual sex, even with people she's just met is so normal that you're weird if you don't do it. Every gathering she goes to with her new friends she's pressured into nakedness, casual groping, and sex (possibly with multiple partners). Only after several months (and possibly pregnancy), she finds out only the casual nudity is "normal" and they tricked her into becoming a slut. Just a thought that ran through my head. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:01, 27 January 2020 (CET)

Yeah, I figured it was too late for that with the current story. Just thought it might be interesting for one of the others. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 07:35, 27 January 2020 (CET)

I chose the Venusian Colony because it was the only open air one. On platforms in the sky, but still open air with a wind that can cause plenty of accidents. Of course with her budding nudist lifestyle, that won't really matter will it? lol As for the one who gets tricked... I'll work on a character concept. I thought the one with the twin (triplet) brothers might work, but that one will probably be more fun keeping it "in the family". --Notsooldpervert (talk) 08:37, 12 February 2020 (CET)

It's the monster girl thing. While interesting to read occasionally, it's not really my kink, so I keep making requests with the human girls. I do like fantasy settings, but the higher tech settings leave more leisure time for the girls to get in trouble with lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:26, 13 February 2020 (CET)

Hmmm.... That could work. It was fallout shelters for cold war era nuke drills. Now they're used for storage of old or outdated sports equipment and school furniture, like old wood desks that are no longer used. There's tables and boxes of outdated text books lining the hall that they have to maneuver around or climb over. Hellloooo upskirt lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:53, 15 February 2020 (CET)

Ah! Well the likelihood of having time to check it out thoroughly isn't very high. They have less than an hour to continue to unlock the rest of the buildings. Though it would, from a security standpoint, make sense to do what you're going to down here, so you don't get caught with a naked loli by a teacher that arrives before school starts. Maybe some bedrooms, a kitchen, and a dining hall. That's assuming it was actually meant to be a real shelter, and not just a storm shelter kinda deal. Not sure about labs and stuff, since it's just a grade school. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:50, 15 February 2020 (CET)

Wow! There's already several good stories started that I'd like to see finished. Some are too huge so it's unlikely (Disciplinary Action for instance). I like your Loli ENF Adventure story (for a couple of different paths, actually), and Public Nudity has several that are heading for something really fun. Villena's Incest Seduction is pretty hot, too. You've about got me sold on the girl who is exposed but doesn't even notice/realize, even if she knows she should be careful (i.e. a short skirt with no panties, but she sits in very unladylike fashion showing her puss to anyone who even glances her direction). I also like the corrupting type stories, where the girl is innocent, and gets talked into sexual activities. Eventually she's a total nympho, but still completely naive and innocent (as in doesn't know it's wrong for a girl her age to eagerly strip down to be gang banged on camera at a frat party; she's just been groomed in such a way that it's a fun game to play that feels really good). Maybe even combine the two so that after she's used to being used for sex at the drop of a hat, she still doesn't realize her night shirt doesn't quite cover her pussy and ass, and of course she forgot panties and doesn't realize the affect it will have on the nearby male who can't help himself and fucks her full of cum. "Wow, what got you so excited?" "Nothing much, you're just really pretty."

I also like either complicit mothers (ala Frank McCoy where boys are taught masturbation is wrong so they should "practice" sex with their sisters (who are taught that good sisters let their brothers practice as much as they want, even if she's Ginny Weasley and is the only girl in a family with lots of boys). Or the girls are taught that if they love Daddy they'll help "relieve his stress". So either complicit, or completely ignorant to the point of stupidly oblivious (Mom sitting on the couch beside naked hubby and daughter, who is straddling Daddy in reverse cowgirl, cock obviously balls deep. Daddy groans and cum leaks out of her plugged puss. Mom kisses her on the head for being "such a sweet girl, always cuddling Daddy. Who wants popcorn? Need your drink refilled?") Yeah, I have some notions that could turn into ideas. Or I can just offer more guidance for the stories already in progress. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 06:04, 8 March 2020 (CET)

Not really. Just thought there might be an opportunity like her getting splashed so her white top was now transparent or something. Maybe lying down on the dock to look at some ducks or fish or something (and also flash her pussy to whoever might be behind her and look up her skirt). Oops, she lay down on a wet spot, and now her stiff nipples are visible. Oh whatever will she do? lol I thought about the forest or path myself, but didn't know who might be out there. Since I'm a huge fan of age difference, I pretty much ignored the playground, even though that would be the easiest to have someone see her lack of panties. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:18, 3 September 2020 (CEST)

Well, the exposure to kids her own age is amusing. It's what generally comes afterward that's more fun with older boys lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 04:51, 3 September 2020 (CEST)

Not really. Just figured the mean girl would tell everyone, the one with a crush on her would keep it secret, and I couldn't decide on keep the skirt or lose it going back to the teacher lol. Picking the one she has a crush on gives options, where she'd be willing to go further than normal to make her crush happy. She's also at the back of the room, so the only ones who should see her are Quinn and the teacher at the front, so even if she lost her skirt, Quinn would get an eyeful, and the teacher would know to watch carefully so he'd get one with her sitting in front of his desk. Maybe Quinn's reaction is surprise, but he obviously likes what he sees, and sets it up for him to try for more later in the day (like the boys from the playground getting a good look in the library later). I'd be fine with any of the options, really, except the mean girl. The boy who has a crush on her would get good wank material out of seeing her naked, and it would still alert the teacher she's going commando. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:54, 23 September 2020 (CEST)

I'm at a loss on that one. How about the path where Sally got there early, she's on her way home to let her friend look at her naked, and owes a favor to Mr. Vice that she has to cash in at his house the next day after willingly letting him keep the nude photos he took of her? I'll bump the page so you can find it easier in the recent changes page. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:12, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Booty5

Thanks. The Loli Enf story was what first drew me to this site. I'm still getting used to the formatting stuff, so thank you for being patient. (I'm probably formatting this wrong, I just know it). If there is any branch in the story that you'd like me to focus on, let me know. I have a few ideas, but it won't take me too long to get through them.

User Rights

You have been granted rights as a Trusted Contributor. This will allow you to do a bit more on the site, including moving pages without creating redirects and deleting pages among others. I hope this little powerup is helpful. Don't know how I missed you for so long. Better late than never, though, right? Sorry about that. You should have had trusted when we first changed over. --Elerneron (talk) 23:48, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

BraveNudeWorld

Hey, random question about A Loli's ENF Adventure (Sally's world in particular). Was it your intent that Devin's friend Randall is the mailman's son? I noticed that on one of the pages you wrote, Ava asked Randy (mailman) how "Ellie and Jr." are doing. I assume "Jr." refers to a son with the same name, so is that in fact the same kid Devin is friends with? (Or if it's just a coincidence, would you have any objection if I decided to "retcon" this and say they are father and son?) --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 05:22, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Cool. I feel smort now. =) But anyway, good to know because it could come up in one of the branches I'm thinking of writing. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 18:21, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

ROCuevas

Hey, hope you are doing well. Wanted to ask if it's possible to be able to add to A Loli's ENF Adventure? I would like to add my own fun to it as I'm quite enjoying the story of Sally but I'm interested to add to other characters.

Thank you. Though how does one add to it? When I click on it, it says I need permission. So I'm confused there. Still thank you. I hope to add good choices to this series.

DrAlithe

I do plan on working on the in-town path some more just been slammed with the horrors of adult life. If I'm lucky I'll find time to rewrite the scene I already have and get it out this weekend assuming it isn't too cold outside while I de gel my fuel line. As a side note, never trust people to transfer account info properly else you'll get diesel instead of kerosene for fuel. DrAlithe (talk) 07:06, 20 January 2022 (CET)