User talk:Notsooldpervert
Jemini
Oh, by the way, about your votes in the world building for my new story, I take it you want these to count for your final results at the end of all the voting? In order to do that, you will need to go through a single path from the beginning and select them each like that. If you want to just hit the ones you can on the start page though, I will combine them down the path. (as it stands you have just made 3 different path starting votes) Jemini (talk) 05:07, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
Eh, I'm gonna likely be off for a little while. Just start voting down the line (assuming the option you want is not blocked by factors from previous votes such as is the case with relationship, although I am pretty sure I know which one you want on that track,) and I will fill it in on the combined story line when I get time and mental energy. Jemini (talk) 06:05, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
Ok, I just got the route where the MC is an adult and the "partner" is in elementary school done from both directions (so you can get there with either option selected first.) I am guessing you are going to want the parent/child option, but I don't know if you are going to want to make the MC no longer a virgin first so that we don't have to mess with all that mess. Jemini (talk) 22:11, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
Well, since she is in elementary school now you don't really need to adjust the sex-ed settings at all for that, although it might help to specify the exact intensity of her virgin status as it ranges from the extremes of has never seen another human being's genitals and doesn't know boys and girls are different, to the other extreme of having done all manner of sexually depraved thing but has avoided PIV sex. I am sure you intend for it to be closer to the former than the latter. Also, it bears pointing out that the MC is still a virgin, so if you select parent/child with him still being a virgin that will throw it into a line of questioning that you won't get if you have him set as having had sex. Jemini (talk) 01:05, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
That's possible I guess, but it would make more sense to go with the one where you donate to an impotent friend and knew the daughter existed. They usually do not consider the sperm donor to be the legal father in cases like that. Jemini (talk) 01:59, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
I just completed the new descriptions on the parenting styles. I re-wrote the attached relationship, turning it into an "emotionally dependent" relationship, and changed the spin on it a fair amount from the way it was before. These are supposed to be extremes after all. You may still want that result, but I thought it fair to warn you it is a little different now from what it was when you originally voted for it. Jemini (talk) 00:17, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
Just finished filling all your requests in the "no guest room" route. I would like to focus on only one of the two routes for now, so if you are still interested in the route where she has her own room then please let me know so that I can complete that route instead. And yes, it will be an either/or thing. I will only do the "go with these settings" route for one of them unless someone else comes in and requests the other. Also, have you given any thought to helping me with the clerical work on this project? I have boiled down the creation of pages on the parents' relationship options to an incredibly simple level that almost anyone can do so long as they can remember which one they are filling, all you would need to do is just add the correct number to the end of the value labeled "PP" in each entry and that's the whole difference between one page and another. I set it up to be incredibly simple for ease of repetitive entry, and I was going to re-think some other sections (such as partner's sex-education) to use the same method. Jemini (talk) 00:11, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
Well, the whole point of the world building story was to make it so the player could specify things exactly to their liking in the world building portion and create just about any scenario they wanted, and then I would write it. The recommendation to not go too liberal with it was just a recommendation, it does not mean I won't make a story that gets too liberal. That said, I am pretty sure I could work with the settings you just suggested to play up the lingering stigma against sex with children. Would you like to do this with the partner settings you already have? Jemini (talk) 06:01, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
About your question on pictures, what seems to work is first downloading the image to your computer and then subsequently uploading it to the site on a page explicitly dedicated to only that picture. After that, you link the page into the appropriate place in the story you want that picture to show up. That's the way Elerneron does it himself, and that's the way I learned from him to do it as well. (actually, I kinda doubt the external link method would even work in the first place beings it didn't work that way even before the filter was added.) Anyway, I think there was a guide for this on the home page... -goes to look- Ah, yes, here it is.
Jemini (talk) 21:48, 14 September 2017 (CEST)
Please take another look at the main page of the Daycare Manager story. Daycare manager pre-draft Please note, it says that requests are not accepted in this story. I know I do that in almost every other story I do, so it can be confusing, but for this one I'm asking for people outside the writing staff to not even touch the story outside the discussion section. There is a reason for this, we can't be prioritizing areas that do not make sense yet in terms of setting up the game build. So, even if requests are pointless anyway. Because of the format of what we're doing, every option will be either filled or deleted by the end anyway, and we will get to them in an order that makes sense. So, requests are pointless to begin with. Jemini (talk) 21:06, 25 June 2018 (CEST)
It's Ok. Like I said, I understand the confusion, you were just falling into old habits. At any rate, if you have something to say, you can still contribute feedback in the discussion tab. Jemini (talk) 13:00, 26 June 2018 (CEST)
Twinklestar
Thank you...any and all criticisms, help, editing, and perverted suggestions, additions and comments will be gratefully accepted.
So...you are saying we are going to have alot to talk about!!!!! So hot.
I like the fact that I can actually think and talk about this stuff... Yay. And WRITE STORIES ABOUT WITH PEOPLE WHO LIKE IT. I am really trying to focus on not being too gunho. I have read some really good beginnings that just fall flat. I am nit trying to throw shade ... I hope it doesnt sound like that...*shrug*
I guess i am happy about the interaction level so far. I will try to figure out the core of the story a little more. Anything you see missing?
As soon as i get to a place were i can find a way to start an account, I will. It will be better to able to group ideas together.
I like that idea. Like i said... In my writings men are usually the bad guy. I can be... A little more free er with my ideas.
Twinklestar (talk) 00:03, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
Completely just creamed myself. I have a lot more questions but they will come in due time. When this is not public.
I def dont want to alienate anybody. Like I hope not to offend anyone. Especially not you... :) but... Since this is public...I am more of a "romantic" Pervert...if that is such a thing... I am all for sex,cum,reluctance, pretty girly panties and all the other good things in life. I'm not even sure what my point was...
Twinklestar (talk) 01:09, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
What I am trying to say is... Your not wrong and i am not saying that's gross. I am saying you are very fun to talk to and interesting. I want to know more.
But as long as everyone is friends... Awesome. I have stepped into too many groups and caused silence.
Twinklestar (talk) 01:13, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
I am a member now.. but I can't seem to find anyone same name!
Twinklestar (talk) 06:21, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
I have friended you both... I didnt have a lot of time last night...i got....browsing..*blush* but i will get there..and i did make a discussion thread in the writers discussion...place for "our" story
Twinklestar (talk) 14:28, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
Sigh. I not sure how anything works..lol... Anyway.. Need to talk
Twinklestar (talk) 17:01, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
Tod Natürlich
Thanks for commenting on Disciplinary Action, I hope you continue to read it. One of the reasons I'm writing it is to get more practice, and it really helps to get feedback. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 06:23, 4 September 2017 (CEST)
This is what I love about requests, you never know what people are going to vote for. I actually had a good idea of what to do with Suzy, and a more or less developed story for the character with his sister. The options for chatting with the Headmaster and specially the one to patrol the school were added just as filler, since I expected to have something there eventually, but I thought they would be left unfulfilled for a long time. Then you come and request that one, and suddenly I'm motivated to write that section, it feels great! Thanks for reading, participating, commenting and pointing out my mistakes. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 04:59, 5 September 2017 (CEST)
Well, my main kinks are impregnation and loli, with a dash of reluctance (I don't like straight up rape, but I do enjoy convincing reluctant females, specially if they don't want to receive a dangerous creampie). Still, one of the reason I'm writing this story is to broaden my horizons, so I'm willing to write almost anything, even things I really don't enjoy, like anal sex, gay sex, pain and rape. So far I'm happy that with you as my only requester, it's unlikely I'll have to deal too soon with any of that. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 03:42, 6 September 2017 (CEST)
Yes, imagining a little girl that doesn't even know how babies are made is walking around with your seed in her womb, and maybe even your baby growing there is very hot. Still I don't think I could refrain myself from telling her that I'm trying to put a baby in her belly as I'm filling her, so she wouldn't be completely ignorant about it afterward. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 06:12, 7 September 2017 (CEST)
I'm guessing it also has something to do with immediate vs. delayed rewards. Even now (and much more in my youth), I have trouble waiting for a reward; I have to consciously force myself to accept that a big delayed reward will be better than a hasty immediate one, but in my fantasies I seldom have such restrain. In the fantasy to impregnate a girl, having her be conscious of what's happening and the consequences it will have at the moment of ejaculation is an immediate reward. On the other hand, inseminating a girl that doesn't know whats happening and waiting for her panties to get tight is a delayed reward. Both fantasies are extremely hot, and I'm sure there's a way to combine them. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 01:14, 8 September 2017 (CEST)
That is a nice idea. I already have a planned main route for Suzy and Ginny, and it does involve Suzy fighting, so this branch can easily be incorporated into that. It will have to wait untill we move to the next time section, since the fight won't happen on the first week of the school year. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 02:45, 10 October 2017 (CEST)
Hello! I'm very happy to see your name appearing again! How are you? --Tod Naturlich (talk) 01:31, 6 May 2018 (CEST)
I'm glad you're back. I'm sorry everything got complicated with your life, I hope things get better and you're able to do whatever you want to do. Both sites have felt emptier without you since February, so I'm really glad to hear form you once more. --Tod Naturlich (talk) 01:45, 6 May 2018 (CEST)
Elerneron
As far as my Villainy story goes, feel free to suggest the type of main character you would like to see. All I have currently is the premise for the world (and of course some of the establishing characters) get as specific as you would like, and I'll see what I can do. --Elerneron (talk) 17:07, 19 December 2017 (CET)
How does Breacher suit you so far? Fell free to make changes or additions if you want . . . or ask me to. --Elerneron (talk) 00:26, 20 December 2017 (CET)
If you want to convert the formatting from a word processing program to work on the site, saving it as an html file should convert the story to a format that should look right on the site (depending on how the word processing program handles the conversion). Apparently, after a quick search, there is an option in Open Office to save as a mediawiki .txt file, but I've never tried it. Since the site is built on Mediawiki that would most likely be the optimal option. --Elerneron (talk) 02:10, 13 June 2022 (CEST)
Sorry to interject here, but if you're using Microsoft Office, there's a plugin to convert the formats. It can be downloaded directly from Microsoft HERE --MrPib (talk) 02:39, 13 June 2022 (CEST)
Lost - Regarding your Pokemon request
I don't accept requests anymore. Besides that, your idea doesn't interest me and it's not very well thought out. You just gave the idea of an aged-up and then age-regressed/time traveling Ash with no plan or endgame behind it.--Lost (talk) 07:22, 2 February 2018 (CET)
Grinsekats
Okay, reading your comments or requests lets me think we are distant cousins. You have the same naughty thoughts as me. Just give me some time, I write the stories, they just need to settle down in my mind. --Grinsekats (talk) 21:12, 25 May 2019 (CEST)
Imperial
Hello there, I've just made a suggestion that I hope would help with user retention and activity but due to its location I'm not sure enough users will see it to give a feedback.
It'd be great if you could give it at least a cursory glance. If the idea sounds stupid feel free to say so, I'm hoping we can brainstorm something better out of what I wrote. Thanks.
-- Imperial (talk) 06:27, 11 June 2019 (CEST)
NoGo45
Thank you for your feedback on the chapters I've been putting out lately. I didn't notice the first discussion tab was edited until after you had posted in the next, but do know that I appreciate it none the less and I'll look forward to what you'll have to say in the future. I will inform you though that for this specific route the plan is to have Claire maintain a masquerade of being completely casual about her actions within the realm of reason, so it won't end up as an all out gangbang free for all nor feature regular sex either, but things like groping, masturbation, even urination and anything else you can think of is still on the table if I think it will fit. --NoGo45 (talk) 20:44, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
Well my plan is to continue this path while trying to add on to the other 15 yo paths. I've already started adding onto the public pool branch and laid the groundwork for the older brother returning home option, and I'm even entertaining the idea of starting a branch on the 24 yo option. My focus for these will mainly be on exhibitionism, and maybe some ENF content, but I already have some more sexual ideas in mind. If you have any thoughts or advice I'd be happy to here them. --NoGo45 (talk) 21:41, 27 December 2019 (UTC)
You have some very good ideas there. I can't say much on the part of the other routes since they aren't my focus, but I can understand what you'd like to see. I too enjoy it when the girl in question happily gives into her lust and gets fucked silly, but exhibitionism and embarrassment always win the day for me, especially that sweet middle ground of loving the thrill of exposure while being terrified of actually being caught, but are unable to stop themselves from being more and more daring. For the 24 yo I was thinking a teacher who secretly strips at school, but I do like the parent idea as well, except for the fact the kid would have to be around 8 which would make it shota even though the entire story is classified as loli, so that might not work. I suppose she could have adopted an older kid who's just become a teenage, or perhaps be the legal guardian of a younger sibling also barely a teen. Other than a teacher or parent/guardian I can't think of any 24 yo routes right now. Thank you for the ideas though. --NoGo45 (talk) 00:05, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
Thank you for the advice on where to go with the 24 yo route, I'm gonna have to think it over some more. I also saw your feedback and request on the public pool route, but if you can bare with me for a little while I have an idea involving the inner tube that'll be real good, I promise. By the way, what's your thoughts on going down the 15 yo route of her brother returning home? I've already put the general idea out there in a previous chapter, unintentionally I might add, of how things could go, but what do you think? And incest, yes or no? --NoGo45 (talk) 00:29, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
I like your suggestion of a girl being tricked into becoming more and more promiscuous by her 'friends.' While it's a little too late to go back and edit the backstory so that casual nudity is the norm, otherwise the entirety of Sally's path would've been a waste of time, I could see that working for a 'backwater' settlement on another planet like a Martian colony, where rules and social norms there could be different from the other planets. I'll have to consider adding that to the setting. --NoGo45 (talk) 07:16, 27 January 2020 (CET)
I was looking over the 2X30 path for Emma and I'm curious, what are some of the reasons you picked the Venusian option? Also, given the basis of Emma's character is "budding exhibitionist" the idea we've discussed before of a girl's 'friends' tricking her into becoming a slut wouldn't work well with her (I'm actually considering creating a girl specifically for that kind of scenario, feel free to offer some character concepts), so what are some of the things you wish to see with this route? --NoGo45 (talk) 08:14, 12 February 2020 (CET)
You know I was looking over the few 'Monster Girl' options I expand on when inspiration strikes and I've noticed you've never commented on one of them , which has me wondering if it's the fantasy setting you don't care for or the idea of it being a monster girl. It's fine if you aren't interested, I write these stories for my own pleasure equally as much as for others, it's just that I'm curious to your thoughts on the subject. --NoGo45 (talk) 08:48, 13 February 2020 (CET)
I'm working on tunnel route for Sally and I'm a bit stuck on what these old, locked up underground rooms should be. Care to lend a hand? The general idea is that they've been untouched for many decades (think the late 70s-early 80s latest) and that they could either be long forgotten about, subject specific classrooms or some sort of secret Cold War era labs or bunkers from when the school's back lot was once government property (remember, small town, dark secrets). Of course any alternate backstory(s) are also welcome. --NoGo45 (talk) 23:44, 14 February 2020 (CET)
I was thinking more along the lines of each room having something special about it that Vice could take advantage of to have some fun with Sally. For example, there could be an old science lab with chemistry equipment and an emergency shower which he could use by tricking Sally into spilling some "chemicals" (really just water) on herself and she'd have to quickly undress and run to the shower. That probably wont be an option (pipes that old wouldn't have clean water in them) but that's kind of what I'm going for. Stripping wont defeat the purpose of her shortened skirt since she promised to try it out for the day and could just slip it back on like that. The tunnel chapter's already written I'm just trying to fill out the options at the end. --NoGo45 (talk) 19:02, 15 February 2020 (CET)
Random question, but how would you feel about "collaborating" on a new story? I have quotes there because what I mean is, what if you give me a story idea you think I'd be good with, give as much a detailed description as you want, then guide me along what you'd most like to see, kind of like now only giving a more specific direction to see the story/paths take. I know my updates are sporadic and bounce around between three different stories and multiple different paths for each already (I live in hope that others might take a liking and start adding on to them), but it's just a thought I had and it'd be interesting to work under someone else's specific guidelines rather than my own. You know by now I love exposure and ENF, but I'm also on board with lolicon (straight or lesbian), straight shotacon, incest, loli on shota, yuri, really it'd be easier to list what I don't like. And I swear I haven't forgotten about the darker sci-fi loli idea we've discussed, I will add that in eventually, promise. Anyways, just give it some thought and let me know what you think, I'm sure you got some good ideas we'd both enjoy. --NoGo45 (talk) 05:43, 8 March 2020 (CET)
Hope you don't mind my asking, but did you have any specific ideas in mind for the path where Emma goes down to the lake? My original choice was the forest or footpath and how to go from there, so I haven't given the lake much thought and don't know what kind of options to provide (don't want them to be too generic or anything). Also, I know I don't update a frequently, but any ideas you might have for my existing paths would be most welcome and appreciated as I find it much easier to create chapters when I have something to work from, as opposed to making it up as I go like normal lol. --NoGo45 (talk) 03:52, 3 September 2020 (CEST)
If it's age difference you like then I can have her cross paths with someone in the forest or on the footpath easily, then have her "accidentally" have a nip slip or something. I myself like both age difference and same age when it comes to loli ENF and exhibitionism, but something about her being seen naked or whatnot by a boy her age just seems more "exposing" (pardon the pun) to me. Still, I can do age difference exposure no problem. --NoGo45 (talk) 04:38, 3 September 2020 (CEST)
Anything specific you'd like to see between Sally and Quinn in the next chapter? I'm going to continue it either way, but I wouldn't mind some other opinions. --NoGo45 (talk) 00:35, 23 September 2020 (CEST)
Hey there, I'm ready and willing to start the next Loli ENF chapter and have Sally run around bottomless but I'm a little stuck on how to proceed and where to go with it. Any suggestions on it? Or any other routes while I'm at it? --NoGo45 (talk) 01:01, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Glad to hear from you man, with all that was going on in the world was kinda worried with you going so quiet. Actually due to unforeseen real world circumstances, all my public stories are in indefinite hiatus. --Telgar (talk) 23:34, 25 April 2020 (CEST)
Yeah no plans at this time. The version here was just a copy of the main story. --Telgar (talk) 00:58, 26 April 2020 (CEST)
Thanks the request for Gigis Adventure. I wasn't quite sure where I might have taken that "pool path" especially since she is supposed to be curious, and yes her mother is a major "B", but for sure I will write something along those lines. --Icy.horse (talk) 21:39, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
Hey lets take this to the stories talk page your talk page is astronomically huge on post. I will also make a request section on there to make those easier. --Icy.horse (talk) 03:06, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Naked in Public Request
If you want you can get started on your idea. (I might make a boy version of your scenario though.) For the template, you can use my template if you want just under Penis you can put "Dry Vagina" or "Wet Vagina" or whatever to signify she doesn't have a penis. You don't have to apologize about boys doing nothing for you, girls do nothing for me either (well outside them making fun of a boy's privates or slightly dominating them!) --Arclos (talk)
Thank you for letting me know I had some stuff that didn’t really fit the stories description. I have decided to add more to the story. Instead of the plane crashing they make it to their location and that takes the story to Charlie having a relationship with Miley. Thank you again. —-Horneygirl (talk) 01:30, 28 December 2020 (EST)
Hey, does the request mean you are staking that path to write? Or you are requesting that path be written? I had originally planned it to be a more humorous branch than the other choices but anything's good. --Green (talk) 09:27, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for letting me know! And thanks for the input, I'll definitely keep that in mind. --Green (talk) 12:23, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
I have still been writing my stories on paper, and from there I put them on this site. I loved the ideas you gave me, but currently I am working on finishing up one at this time. In the future real soon I will use some ideas like you suggested. ---Horneygirl (talk) 11:05 6 February 2021 (EST)
I've already informed Jemini on how to do the polls, but for reference: <poll show-results-before-voting> Question? Option 1 Option 2 Option 3 </poll>
It looks like this:
You are not entitled to view the results of this poll.
--MrPib (talk) 23:58, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
User Rights
You have been granted rights as a Trusted Contributor. This will allow you to do a bit more on the site, including moving pages without creating redirects and deleting pages among others. I hope this little powerup is helpful. --Elerneron (talk) 11:31, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
BraveNudeWorld
Hi, haven't seen you on in a little while. I wrote a couple more pages for Sally's adventure. (Here and Here) Feedback and requests for where to go next are always welcome. No pressure of course if you've gotten bored with that story. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 21:36, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
Cool, I'll try and get to one of those requests shortly. The interactive element (and knowing for sure at least one person is reading) does make it more fun. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 21:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
I'll probably work on the classroom scene first, in the mean time, question for you on the park one: Did you have anything in mind for how naked Lori's scene plays out? The basic concept I had was that she talked to her mom, and can away with the (likely incorrect) idea that she now has permission to go naked in public. But that's about it. How that interaction played out and what happens after is to be determined. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 04:06, 28 May 2022 (CEST)
Yes, it absolutely is (hilarious). But I'm not sure if I want to go quite that far, because for one thing, this is supposed to be an ENF story. But heck, I'm down for heading in that direction and seeing where it takes us. Thanks for the feedback. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 09:52, 28 May 2022 (CEST)
At the risk of taking this too seriously, I can't see her reacting that way based on how I've been writing her. She's already at least half-convinced herself she really wants to be a nudist. If she somehow got all the kids in town on board, and grudging approval from adults, I think she would be completely sold on the idea and never want to get dressed again. It would essentially be a a happy ending, if it got to that point. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 03:56, 29 May 2022 (CEST)
Did you have anything in mind for who should join chat and what happens next? Because honestly I didn't have much planned. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 06:48, 12 January 2023 (CET)
Hmm. DrippingMommy is certainly one of the more likely people to appear, but I'm not sure how to get to a scenario like you describe from where we are, based on how I see the characters. First, some unstated background: DrippingMommy's main kink is incest. That's why she was very interested to learn Sally had a brother. And for Sally's part, getting talked into more explicit pictures is possible, but I don't see her being interested in "trading". Especially not with DrippingMommy, to be honest. With a another kid, sure, if she had the chance. Maybe even with one the guys if they were good-looking, but I can't see her being into milfs.
Maybe I'll jump to another path while I ponder that, but if you have any further thought feel free to share. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 10:39, 12 January 2023 (CET)
Hmm, good question. LidKicker69 is the one who seems to get going hard for her pics, so I suppose it would be in character for him to do like you suggested and basically catfish Sally as a child nudist. He no doubt has a nice collection of pictures too. But honestly, maybe this is just a path someone else would have to write. Don't know if I could get into it personally. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 07:45, 13 January 2023 (CET)
Thanks for the two requests. It's been a really long time since I touched the school path, so I'll have to think on where that was even supposed to be going, but it might be fun to jump back to that branch for a while if I can come up with something. I'll likely do at least one more on the nudist/chatroom branch first though. As always feel free to share any ideas suggestion about what might happen next in the discussion pages. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 11:08, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
Request
I see you adding a request to my story, Sexy Fun Times/Five/Girl/Breakfast/Jenny/Garden/Home/Show but I don't know how to see what you are requesting.
I have searched all the links I can find with no success.
Hope (talk) 11:11, 22 November 2021 (CET)
HG Collins
Thank’s for the inspiration. I started this story a while ago and completely forgot about it somehow until a month or so ago. There’s so many possibilities. Their parents definitely know about what goes on and I’m working on exploring that aspect next. I love the idea of having April get sent to a high school. Maybe she gets sent to a Jr. High first as part of her “training” to take bigger cocks. I ended up accidentally making her friend Tiffany a bit more of a trouble maker than April and corrupting April a bit, but I’m thinking of making April get in trouble more often for smaller things because she is the cute one while Tiffany “somehow” gets away with them. I’m pretty excited for this story so if you have any other thoughts, definitely send them my way.
--Hgcollins (talk) 00:30, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Yes, I love it. This is definitely one of the more fun stories to write for sure. It seems like a relatively popular genre with stories I’ve read here and elsewhere, but for some reason punishments are still pretty under-explored, especially concerning girls. I remember finding lots of boy punishment stories a while back, but was kind of dismayed with the small amount of stories with girls getting punished. I like the few I found on ATF, but overal it’s only a small handful of authors really. So I’m really glad I rediscovered this one and got enough inspiration to keep writing it.
--Hgcollins (talk) 01:18, 6 December 2021 (CET)
Agreed, I like seeing lolis get themselves into compromising situations, particularly if there is a sense of realism when it comes to their emotions about the situation, even if the scenario itself is a bit over the top. At any rate, I tend to write pretty quickly and go back through and polish things up later. If you find any glaring errors before I can get to them, please feel free to make corrections.
--Hgcollins (talk) 02:05, 6 December 2021 (CET)
I don’t know if you saw, but I updated my author page to include links to a few of my favorite writers from the asstr days. Since you have to really know what you’re looking for to even find them, I figured it would be convenient even for me to just to have easy to find links.--Hgcollins (talk) 20:27, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Yeah, I think a lot of people lost the motivation when ASSTR started having problems. It kind of started when the author feedback stuff broke. Lassiter was great about sending updates to everyone regularly with comments about the stories. It’s a big part of what kept people excited to write, I think. Then I think 6 months or so later is when everything started melting down. I was hoping to create my own account there at one point, but new account creation was down even before that. I have to say ATF is really great, though. It’s a little tougher for anyone less technically minded since its a wiki, but I hope it keeps going for a good while.
--Hgcollins (talk) 22:06, 10 December 2021 (CET)
I probably need to take a break soon because I’ve been writing like a maniac. But this next version of April’s punishment is going to be incredible. I don’t want to talk it up too much, but let’s just say things are going to escalate very quickly in the next part.
--Hgcollins (talk) 22:24, 10 December 2021 (CET)
That’s not a bad idea. At the very least, I have Lasiter’s old email and can reach out there. But I think I am CC’d on a few emails so I’ll check. I pretty much decided I’m going to take my time with Naomi’s story and blow though April’s when I’m bored during the day. That’s a better way to enact some form of quality control, too. I’ve already taken like 5+ years to revisit Naomi's story so taking my time with it can’t hurt.
Update: I sent him an email. He used to check that one every couple of weeks so we'll see what happens. It didn't come back to me right away, so at the very least it was delivered. --Hgcollins (talk) 23:18, 10 December 2021 (CET)
I don't know if I said this before, but thanks for reminding me what a great story Fun With Naomi is. I completely forgot just about everything about it, but the more I look back on it, the more I'm super into it. I just reread the part where they force her to put her panties on when it's full of the brother's cum. I completely forgot all those amazing details. Plus how she keeps calling her pussy a kitty is pretty adorable. I'm writing the next part right now and I'm looking forward to her first trip with the CEO.
--Hgcollins (talk) 04:58, 13 December 2021 (CET)
Ha ha, It's funny you should mention that. At this point I can tell you that she doesn't like the term "Open for Business" in regards to her kitty. I was actually planning on giving her a rather nice weekend with the CEO (which she will still have) but it seems she has been a little naughty and has done--or should I say said a little something to make her daddy very mad. I am just now in the middle of writing this unexpected turn of events, but I must say he does seem quite mad indeed. I won't spoil anything more, but I will say that Naomi is having a little bit of trouble coming to terms with the all the finer details of what it means to be the family's little sex toy. Her daddy does seem to have the situation under control however, or at least he will very soon. --Hgcollins (talk) 05:43, 13 December 2021 (CET)
Shit, I'm nearly done with Naomi part 5, but then I realized the voice is totally off and only sounds faintly like Naomi. In my head she's supposed to be only a year or two older than in the story, but I totally wrote it like she is a teenager or something. I literally reread parts 1-3 to help me get into the right voice. I need to go to bed because I do actually have a life. --Hgcollins (talk) 08:53, 13 December 2021 (CET)
Thanks, I had to go back and rewrite everything pretty much to make it sound right, but it was worth it. Naomi is definitely having a hard time adjusting for sure, but all that character development was pretty fun to write. It’s fun stuff like that that makes me want to keep going. Her attitude isn’t going to go away right away since she’s upset about having to go with her dad’s boss for the weekend, but she is going to have a little more fun than she expected. I’m sure she will have quite a bit more adjusting to do too as time goes on.--Hgcollins (talk) 16:58, 13 December 2021 (CET)
It sure would be a shame if Naomi got lots of new clothes on her trip and then when she got home, her brothers convince her that THEY are allowed to tell her when she can wear clothes and not just Daddy. She wants to show off her fancy new clothes anyways so she puts on a fashion show for her brothers and has fun until their dad walks in and finds her fully clothed. --Hgcollins (talk) 17:16, 13 December 2021 (CET)
Oh yeah, I like the surrogate idea. Naomi obviously knows that not all girls have to do what she does and it would be extra humiliating to be the girl men are allowed to touch. I sort of had an idea of Naomi with an inexperienced younger girl, not necessarily training her, but something. Maybe the younger girls father makes her strip naked and he looks at her while he fucks Naomi. I’d like to put Naomi in kind of a “motherly” type of role at some point. I don’t have a solid idea fleshed out yet, but I’ve got some time before I get there anyways. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:09, 15 December 2021 (CET)
There was that one executive at the dinner party that was really rough and Naomi hated him. I want to bring him back for sure. I like to think he has a daughter he wishes he could fuck. He sort of brings her along when he has Naomi and maybe uses her to groom his daughter by making her watch. Then maybe he starts training her to be his little slut just like Naomi. Surely she isn’t the only one that gets pimped out in exchange for back door deals. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:32, 15 December 2021 (CET)
I like that, especially if Naomi is sent over to their house and makes friends with her first in between having to please her father and feels a little protective. Then she’ll feel powerless to help when she has to watch her friend take a cock for the first time.--Hgcollins (talk) 19:17, 15 December 2021 (CET)
By the way I wanted to ask, have you read Naomi part 6 yet? I kind of got the idea when you mentioned the Dan and the Boys story. I decided to have Naomi’s mom give her daughter a break while showing her how a little girl is supposed to behave. I’m not 100% sold on the ending of part 6, but I think I’m happy enough with it. I’ve moved on to part 7 but I’m taking a little more time to edit it and get it right.
--Hgcollins (talk) 20:13, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Yeah, I only use it sometimes for the humiliation aspect and I obviously kept it really mild. The first version didn’t have it at all. At the end of the day it doesn’t really affect the story at all so it’s not the end of the world if I leave it or take it out.
--Hgcollins (talk) 20:27, 15 December 2021 (CET)
So I just posted the next chapter of A Sweet Escape last night and I ended up editing and posting two older stories, too. The more interesting one being Little Sister. It's been lots of fun writing, but I definitely need to limit myself. It's really easy for me to go completely nuts and write every second I have the chance. I was sick when I started, too so now it's getting a lot harder to just write constantly. There was only supposed to be one full on novel, but April and Naomi ended up becoming two and three. In the last few weeks alone, I have written somewhere around 40k words which is right around the average novel. I have no real intention of stopping, but I definitely need to start limiting myself to a chapter of each a week or something.
Now that I've said all that, I'm so excited to write what happens to Naomi in the next few chapters that we'll see how good I do at trying to pull back. I feel like an obsessed reader except over my own work. It' kind of weird, but that probably means I'm doing something right, I guess. --Hgcollins (talk) 04:08, 19 December 2021 (CET)
Okay, random idea. Over the next few chapters, Naomi is going to meet that Blake guy's daughter and become friends with her while she is getting shown the ropes by Naomi. For the new girl's "breaking in" I could either just have the dad do it or maybe he invites the execs over for dinner #2 where Naomi is a guest this time? Or maybe she gets to choose whether to be a guest? Or she is right there on the table with her friend? Not really sure. It's several chapters away for now...
--Hgcollins (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2021 (CET)
Yeah, I like the idea. I think there's a lot of opportunity to add a few reluctant men. I sort of hinted to it at one point in the dinner party scene where not all the men really wanted to fuck her, but did anyways. Jim definitely likes to have employees he can blackmail. I need to start keeping a list of ideas for Naomi, I think. I have this suspicion that it's going to end up being a full on 100k word novel. --Hgcollins (talk) 22:13, 9 January 2022 (CET)
Well, I finally completed my story, Maya's Fantasy. I feel like you probably did read it on Torrid Tales. Although the dynamic was a little different than most of my other work because it centered around the relationship between Maya and her brother and compared it to Maya's with her father. Regardless, I think you'll like the ending. Slight trigger warning for chapter 7, though. I debated cutting the parts out but I decided to leave it for the story's sake. --Hgcollins (talk) 11:04, 10 January 2022 (CET)
Damn, such a great idea. I’d definitely love to see her plastered up in one of those electronic billboards flipping through images of her in compromising positions.
--Hgcollins (talk) 00:40, 3 February 2022 (CET)
I finally got April to get herself in trouble on purpose! --Hgcollins (talk) 07:23, 23 April 2022 (CEST)
Yeah, such a shame she didn't think of that. Maybe she'll learn to lie better next time. --Hgcollins (talk) 03:37, 24 April 2022 (CEST)
Well, I posted Chapter 21 and the next two are going to follow the weekends of April and Tiffany. I’ve got April’s weekend figured out, but I’d there’s anything you think I aught to include as part of Tiffany’s weekend, let me know. I don’t really have any solid ideas at this point. --Hgcollins (talk) 01:32, 2 May 2022 (CEST)
Lol, Tiffany with a dog has certainly crossed my mind. I was picturing a super humiliating weekend for her since April’s been the one getting the brunt of it (like you said it’s April’s punishment). No reason why the guy can’t have family either. I just imagine Tiffany being dropped to school Monday dressed in the same thing with her hair a complete mess. --Hgcollins (talk) 01:55, 2 May 2022 (CEST)
Yeah, thanks. Something like that will definitely work. IDK why that was so hard to come up with. But regardless, ever since deciding to write both of their weekends, I just really want Tiffany's to suck. --Hgcollins (talk) 04:52, 2 May 2022 (CEST)
Hey, it’s been a while, but I wanted to get your take on something. So Naomi’s parents are obviously getting a new house since her dad’s promotion and bonuses for letting his daughter go on weekend excursions with the boss means they can easily afford it. But that had me thinking, she lost her door at her current house. But what about new one suck? Maybe she doesn’t get a room and has to put all her new clothes in the guest room? Idk. I can’t decide how much I want her home life to suck yet. --Hgcollins (talk) 03:54, 27 January 2023 (CET)
Oof, yeah that takes a lot out of you. I hope you’re starting to get your own life back, a little. At any rate, I think that makes sense. It’s still my favorite character to write even though I have so damn many (too many) now. I need to finish a damn novel before starting 3 more. Lol --Hgcollins (talk) 03:31, 28 January 2023 (CET)
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