Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Exposed: Revision history

10 January 2018

• curprev 06:3006:30, 10 January 2018‎ TodNaturlich talk contribs‎ m 7,014 bytes +236‎ Refactoring
• curprev 06:3006:30, 10 January 2018‎ TodNaturlich talk contribs‎ m 6,778 bytes 0‎ Tod Naturlich moved page Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Exposed to Disciplinary Action/Disciplinary Office/First Week/Tihana/Office/Exposed: Refactoring

1 December 2017

• curprev 06:1506:15, 1 December 2017‎ TodNaturlich talk contribs‎ m 6,778 bytes −17‎ Fixed links.

1 October 2017

• curprev 19:5719:57, 1 October 2017‎ DrAlithe talk contribs‎ m 6,795 bytes −3‎ I see now that you are mostly writing in present tense which while harder is still fine. I should note that somethings in the girls speech are messed up, however, since this may be a choice I have left them in.
• curprev 19:4619:46, 1 October 2017‎ DrAlithe talk contribs‎ m 6,798 bytes +6‎ Some minor issues in spelling and grammar only thing of importance is that you have a habit of switching tenses within the story. Typically, people write in past tense for everything except speech. Unfortunately, for you, I am bad at editing those out.

28 September 2017

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• curprev 06:1106:11, 28 September 2017‎ Jemini talk contribs‎ 6,502 bytes +6,502‎ Created page with "She had gone into her punishment apparently presuming a diaper would be the worst of her troubles in response to her infractions. She was quite boisterous and defiant at first..."