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*That was quick: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Play_at_reluctance_for_a_bit,_but_be_easily_talked_into_it (Well, this is better than you thought, no problem at all) | *That was quick: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Play_at_reluctance_for_a_bit,_but_be_easily_talked_into_it (Well, this is better than you thought, no problem at all) | ||
*I may be in trouble, but that's fuckin' hot: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Subtly_try_and_question_if_she_has_started_having_her_periods (If that is the case then you better come clean. Admit what you did then ask her again) | *I may be in trouble, but that's fuckin' hot: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Subtly_try_and_question_if_she_has_started_having_her_periods (If that is the case then you better come clean. Admit what you did then ask her again) | ||
*Good to know: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/If_that_could_be_the_case_then_you_better_come_clean._Admit_what_you_did_then_ask_her_again (But you want to believe her, so you will act accordingly. It's her fault if she's lying.) | |||
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Revision as of 04:27, 25 January 2016
So, since I have opened this up to be a place to make requests to my stories, I am going to implement a system of placing all conversations with a specific person under the same heading with their name. I will request that you put up your material under your own heading witch can be done by placing two equals signs "==" to either side of your name witch you username after writing that in. If you forget to do so, it is Ok, I ought to be able to correct that myself. However, it will be helpful if you can either sign your name to your comments or put the heading in yourself.
Update to the policy on making requests
There is no actual rule restricting the number of requests you can make at any one time, but the priority with witch I will get to filling requests is the inverse of the number of requests being made by the same person. In other words, if you make less requests I will get to you sooner. I will recommend 3 as the go-to default, with 2, 3, and 4 being treated essentially the same if it is a one-odd thing, but it will affect the priority if you make a habit of always requesting 2 or 4 every round. If you make only 1 request, I will probably move you to the front of the line. If you make 5 or more, you will probably be back-burnered until I feel like processing you sometime a fair bit later.
Also, multiple people requesting the same option is another thing that raises priority.
New update on my approach to this writing
FYI: Now that I have been working on this for a while and am starting to experience some level of burn-out with the same topics coming up, I am now for my own sake placing a higher priority on requests that are different from the areas getting requested heavily. I have also been filling in some unrequested options my self without requests for this purpose despite there being requests still on the list, and that will likely continue as well.
The current list of areas that have been shifted to low priority due to being visited so frequently as to burn me out a little are as follows.
1. Jack in Melony's room (Jack's perspective)
2. Jack in Tiffany's room (Jack's perspective)
3. Jack at the Lanes' (Jack's perspective)
4. Jack in the park
Any request from these four areas will be treated with lower priority, but this does not mean I won't get it done. I might just need to do some other entries first and then I will get options from these four categories once I have gotten my momentum up.
Also, since I have seen some people expressing frustration with the difficulty in getting a notification when something is changed, I will begin documenting it here whenever I change something, not just filling requests.
Now accepting requests for Hot Summer Job
Hot Summer Job, started by Villenia, is a story I have been eyeing for a while and now I feel I have figured out the mood of the story enough to contribute to it at my own standard for quality that fits in with the rest of the feel of the story. As such, I am now willing to accept requests for that story as well as 2T4U.
Recent unrequested updates from Jemini
Jemini (talk) 07:39, 30 December 2015 (CET)
- Your older brother Aaron
- And he is rousting you out of bed excitedly like he normally does
- Point out that Jack is in the shower
Edits list (edits of posts that already existed)
- Don't give up, you set out to find some child porn and now you want to find it!
- Ask Jack about the white stuff(further editing planned in the future)
- Ellen Gunderson
- Tell your mother that Missy is next (added some options for a perspective change)
Other stories contributed to by Jemini
Elerneron
Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions, or need any help please feel free to contact me on my Talk Page. Feel free to remove this welcome notice if it bothers you. So you don't feel left out. ^_^ --Elerneron (talk) 18:54, 4 October 2015 (CEST)
I deleted the page that you marked for deletion. It seems to me that you could have moved the page to the new heading if you had wanted. If you wish to do so in the future, the move option is under More just to the left of the search bar. --Elerneron (talk) 22:12, 11 October 2015 (CEST)
I didn't have any specific ideas on Jack's sexual experience. I was going to let storytelling decide most of that. So whatever you want to do is fine with me. --Elerneron (talk) 07:11, 16 October 2015 (CEST)
I moved your talk page extensions to sub-pages of your talk page for organization (and to keep it clear that it doesn't require a category when I use the site tools to look for uncategorized pages.). You can make sub-pages of any page, including user pages and user talk pages. --Elerneron (talk) 20:43, 30 December 2015 (CET)
Please note that you will not receive notifications of changes to sub-pages of your talk page by default like you would your talk page itself. I don't know if that is a problem for you, but I thought I should mention it. --Elerneron (talk) 15:00, 5 January 2016 (CET)
Thanks for the compliment on Fairly OddParents: Timmy's Awakening. I'm a pretty big fan of the show, and the potential for sexual mayhem is through the roof with the base concept. I was torn between it and a few other cartoons I know really well like Phineas and Ferb, American Dragon Jake Long, Jimmy Neutron, and Ben 10 (Original). The freedom of the setting won me over even though some of the others would probably be more popular. American Dragon and Ben 10 in particular have much more inciting graphics, but I hate how Jake and his friends talk, and Ben 10 has been done to death ... and cousin incest isn't as appealing to me as immediate family incest. I would have gone for Danny Phantom, but I'm not as familiar with the toon as I'd like to be before I would start writing for it. I almost did it anyway just because of Dani (Danny's hot younger female clone, rowr)and Jazz and Maddie didn't hurt either. Maybe I should find more episodes and bone-up . . . there are a LOT of hotties in that show. Anyway, thanks again. --Elerneron (talk) 05:11, 6 January 2016 (CET)
You've been forgetting to add the category to story pages quite frequently recently. Maybe pause before you save a new page, and make sure you've added it to get yourself back in the habit? --Elerneron (talk) 15:53, 8 January 2016 (CET)
TerryAce
So, first off, thanks for the rehaul. You're right. Yours does flow a lot better. Any way.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/%E2%80%9Cfort%E2%80%9D/Take_down_your_pants_and_approach_with_your_cock_out (Try and get a better view of her pussy to narrow down her age)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Morning/You_had_better_check_if_her_innocence_is_still_in_tact (you need some light)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Well,_this_is_better_than_you_thought._No_problem_at_all (Hell, after that exchange, you bet you actually COULD just rape her and even get away with it) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/%E2%80%9Cfort%E2%80%9D/Get_her_attention_and_scare_the_shit_out_of_her (ask her who she is and what she's doing)
COMPLETED
- And let's see where this goes: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Bandit_in_the_park/Call_out_and_get_their_attention (well, let's get her cleaned up)
- And finally: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning_at_Lane%27s/You_bet_Brittany_will_resist,_pre-empt_her_by_restraining_her_before_you_try_to_put_it_in (Same as above, but rough her up a bit as well)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Ask_about_Samantha (suggest she needs a "big brother")
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Go_look_in_on_your_daughters (Check in on Brittany)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Emily/Day_-1/Mid-day/Boy_%2B/That%27s_good (pleasure yourself before nodding off)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Bandit_on_the_nature_trail/Tie_him_off_and_investigate_the_bushes_yourself (Take down your pants and approach with your cock out)
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Emily/Day_-1/Mid-day/Boy_%2B/Pleasure_yourself_for_a_while_before_nodding_off_to_sleep (fall asleep naked on top of the covers) -- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/You_finish_your_shower_frustrated (Wake up Missy) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Matthew/Morning/Look_in_on_Brittany (go in and take a close look) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Emily/Day_-1/Mid-day/Boy_%2B/Fall_asleep_naked_on_top_of_your_covers (run down to meet him, acting like a child) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/“fort”/Take_down_your_pants_and_approach_with_your_cock_out (get her attention and scare the crap out of her) https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Well,_this_is_better_than_you_thought._No_problem_at_all (Try and get on Samantha's good side) 2T4U/Matthew/Morning/Go in and take a closer look. (you had better check and see if her innocence is still intact)
Notsooldpervert
I'm here too ~~Notsooldpervert
2T4U Requests
Loving this so far.
- Hmmm, let's see what we're working with: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Missy/This_opportunity_of_a_soundly_sleeping_sister_is_turning_you_on (Before pleasuring yourself, you have got to try and reveal her pussy)
- Bend her to my will: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Well,_this_is_better_than_you_thought._No_problem_at_all (You don't want to rape her, but you do want sex. Get aggressive with convincing her.)
- Let's see where this goes: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Ellen/Morning/Jack_suddenly_comes_in_and_interrupts_you (Call out and stop him and have him come in (Leave yourself exposed))
- Getting knocked up by Jack is turning her on: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Melony/Jack_intrudes/En-Cons/You_are_a_little_concerned_about_getting_caught (Complain you haven't gotten off yet and have him help you his way)
- MMMmmmm edit this location after the rewrite: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Raped_Melony/Missy_next/Tell_your_mother_that_Missy_is_next (Proceed Gently(Bring her to her room))
HSJ Requests
If you want me to do this differently, let me know.
COMPLETED
- Turn her into a little slut: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Melony/Jack_intrudes/Enjoy_it_to_its_fullest,_he_can%27t_rape_you_if_you_give_him_consent (Start really getting into it and fucking him back)
- A little different: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Invite_yourself_to_her_home (Ask about Samantha)
- Hmmm... interesting re-write: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Ellen_Gunderson (Try and satisfy your pussy)
- I'm undecided, so I'll take the middle route: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Melony/Jack_intrudes/Cons/Start_really_getting_into_it_and_fucking_him_back (You are a little concerned about getting caught, but not really. The fear of getting caught just makes it better}
- I'm torn. Aaron needs some loving too, but I like Jack: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Ellen/Morning/Try_and_satisfy_your_pussy (Jack suddenly comes in and interrupts you)
- Let's get the neighbor girl involved: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Ask_about_Samantha (Suggest that maybe she needs a “big brother”)
- I hear opportunities knocking: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Suggest_that_maybe_she_needs_a_%E2%80%9Cbig_brother%E2%80%9D (Play at reluctance for a bit, but be easily talked into it)
- We want them all to like it: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Melony%27s_room/F-Mel-Missy%28r%29/Switch/Push_it_in (Slowly fuck Missy while expressing your appreciation for your mother)
- I gotta know: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Stay_standing_like_this_till_things_settle_down (Ok, you HAVE to find out if she was fertile)
- I gotta know: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Ok,_you_HAVE_to_find_out_if_she_was_fertile (Subtly try and question if she has started having her periods)
- This looks fun, too: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/She_still_sleeping_soundly_in_her_bed,_just_like_you_expected (This opportunity of a soundly sleeping sister is turning you on)
- That was quick: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Play_at_reluctance_for_a_bit,_but_be_easily_talked_into_it (Well, this is better than you thought, no problem at all)
- I may be in trouble, but that's fuckin' hot: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/Subtly_try_and_question_if_she_has_started_having_her_periods (If that is the case then you better come clean. Admit what you did then ask her again)
- Good to know: https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=Hot_Summer_Job/If_that_could_be_the_case_then_you_better_come_clean._Admit_what_you_did_then_ask_her_again (But you want to believe her, so you will act accordingly. It's her fault if she's lying.)
BakaG
How's it going? I just added a page to 2T4U. Please tell me what you think of it. Especially whether it fits the characters properly.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Tell_him_why_he_can%27t_pee
10/15 - Thanks for looking it over. I plan to add a few more pages to one of the "find some clothes" path in the next few days, inspiration willing.
Also, yeah. I did get a bit ahead of myself there. I was in a groove and couldn't stop. Thanks also for dividing the page up. Lots of interesting options just waiting to be filled out now. :P
10/23 - This was both easier and harder than the last one. Enjoy my latest addition! I was going to do more but I figured that was a fine place to stop for a choice.
https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Aaron_Sissy/Attic
1/5/16 - Sorry for acting more like an editor than a writer. I keep asking my muse for inspiration but every time she throws a keyboard at me, yells "PTFO YOU FUCKING NOOB!", then slams the door in my face. :P
1/22/16 - And it's done. Went in a slightly different direction than I planned but I'm satisfied with it for now. Hopefully the next part won't take as long.
Fallen-King
Thank you for filling out my requests so far and thanks in advance for any more you do.
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Maybe_the_hospital_could_hold_some_fun_times%3F (You could start curing the terminal patients)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Missy/This_opportunity_of_a_soundly_sleeping_sister_is_turning_you_on (Jack yourself off over her face)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Drop_your_towel_and_show_them_both_what_you_think_Aaron_probably_wanted_to_show_Missy (Invite them to shower with you)
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany's_room/pussy/Re-position_and_try_to_penetrate_her_again (Ok, sure. Try to ram it in again)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany's_room/pussy(C)/Fix_the_angles,_find_something_to_put_under_her_to_prop_her_up (She needs a distraction so she will loosen up, try talking to her a bit about how much she likes the idea of you fucking her “tickle hole.”)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany's_room/Try_convincing_her_to_suck_it (Suggest she should kiss it to make it better)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/pussy/propped/Talk_to_her (stop moving and see how Tiff is doing with your dick in her)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Suggest_she_should_kiss_it_to_make_it_better (Have her continue from where she left off)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Try_and_fuck_that_toddler_ass (Say nothing and keep trying to push in)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Call_out_and_stop_them,_you_gotta_hear_more_about_this (Soften your tone and assure him, but keep asking)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/pussy/propped(d)/See_how_she_is_doing (You may have just cum, but you really want to fuck her and you don't care if it hurts)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Ass/Say_nothing_and_keep_trying_to_push_in (Command her to stop clinching)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Ass/Command_her_to_stop_clinching (Bribe her with some candy)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Make_everyone_breakfast (Wait for the rest of your family to come)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Take_Bandit_out_on_a_morning_walk (Head down the nature trail)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Ask_about_Samantha (Suggest that maybe she needs a “big brother”)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Walk_Bandit_on_the_nature_trail (Tie him off and investigate the bushes yourself)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Suggest_that_maybe_she_needs_a_%E2%80%9Cbig_brother%E2%80%9D (Play at reluctance for a bit, but be easily talked into it)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Bandit_on_the_nature_trail/Tie_him_off_and_investigate_the_bushes_yourself (Take down your pants and approach with your cock out)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Soften_your_tone_and_assure_him,_but_keep_asking (No, it's not nothing and you want to find out. (Suspect something dirty)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Fiona%27s/Play_at_reluctance_for_a_bit,_but_be_easily_talked_into_it (Well, this is better than you thought, no problem at all)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/“fort”/Take_down_your_pants_and_approach_with_your_cock_out (Poke her cheek with your dick)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/nature_trail/“fort”/Take_down_your_pants_and_approach_with_your_cock_out (Grab her head and shove your dick in her mouth)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Order_them_both_to_strip_naked_right_here (Drop your towel and show them both what you think Aaron probably wanted to show Missy)
Doggod
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/doubts/Tell_her_if_she_sucks_your_dick,_you_will_make_her_pussy_feel_good_too (Proceed while talking, stick a finger inside)
COMPLETED
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany's_room/Try_convincing_her_to_suck_it (Suggest she should kiss it to make it better)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany's_room/pussy(C)/Fix_the_angles,_find_something_to_put_under_her_to_prop_her_up (Get her to suck it and finish in her mouth)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Suggest_she_should_kiss_it_to_make_it_better (have her continue from where she left off)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/Have_her_continue_from_where_she_left_off (Reach down and start playing with her pussy while she sucks)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Excuse_Missy_and_keep_on_with_Aaron (You want to have a threesome with Aaron and one of your sisters)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Try_and_fuck_that_toddler_ass (Say nothing and keep trying to push in)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/After_bite_and_kiss/Reach_down_and_start_playing_with_her_pussy_while_she_sucks (Tell her if she sucks your dick, you will make her pussy feel good too)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Tiffany%27s_room/Go_grab_that_toddler%27s_naked_ass_and_use_her_body_to_get_yourself_off (Jerk your prick against her crack)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/No,_it%27s_not_nothing_and_you_want_to_find_out._(suspect_something_dirty) (Order them both to strip naked right here)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Morning/Beating_off/Go_to_your_grade-school_sister_Missy%27s_room (Fuck! Your baby sister Tiffany is always rubbing her cunt! Maybe she would like some dick!)
- https://stories.allthefallen.ninja/index.php?title=2T4U/Jack/Shower/Confront_both/Order_them_both_to_strip_naked_right_here (Drop your towel and show them both what you think Aaron probably wanted to show Missy)
SA
I do have my heart set on making something happen between Missy and Bandit but I am not that good of a writer. Also sorry if this isn't how Im meant to use the talk feature I've never used a system like it before so yeah.
26/11/15: Ok i will get round to that at some point. Sorry for any inconvenience
19/12/15: Sorry it took me so long. Life hit hard but I changed it a bit. I hope the changes are ok. I just wanted to get bandit involved with the action and I SHOULD have made it so he can get involved with any of the other characters.
22/12/15: I suck at writing so sorry for that. Any advice on changes for the better and how I could write future chapters without fucking up?
I'll agree with that. I eventually want to see all the girls become cum hungry sluts eagerly spreading their legs for cock: Man or boy's, human or not. ~~Notsooldpervert
Villenia
Feel free to contribute however you like. I find collaborative writing inspiring. No sense stifling anyone's creativity. But I'll try to inch that branch along if that will help you out.
SkankWriter
I want to do something else, but it should have the option of matching up, how would you word it?
You can go ahead and change it, no problem. I guess it just didn't come off to me as how the curse worked, from previous entries, but change what ever you need to. Hopefully, the Ellen/Tiffany bit isn't too bad though
Define touch...is the licking okay if that is all it is? --SkankWriter (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2016 (CET)