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[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 07:54, 6 March 2020 (PST)
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 07:54, 6 March 2020 (PST)
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As for mind migic on the Moons, that won't work, they are "Gods". Yes de-powered God's, but still God's. The abilities of a mortal mind mage, especially one weekend to the point he has to possess another being, just won't work on them, neither should the abilities of a mere Demon, so something else, something bigger is hiding him from them. Anything else would be mere plot armour or weaken them.
As for mind migic on the Moons, that won't work, they are "Gods". Yes de-powered God's, but still God's. The abilities of a mortal mind mage, especially one weakend to the point he has to possess another being, just won't work on them, neither should the abilities of a mere Demon, so something else, something bigger is hiding him from them. Anything else would be mere plot armour or weaken them. Detecting possessed students and wards to prevent Demons or other evil entities from entering the school ground's would be magic 101 level stuff.
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 08:00, 6 March 2020 (PST)
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 08:00, 6 March 2020 (PST)

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Hmmm... could work this in with the Sarah Harper storyline, making it so she was Allister's most recent victim. It would resolve a few things, one of those being how she was dating a guy for three months even with the school's strict rules on male involvement, another being how it is that the MC's mother with all her connections has not been able to find this boy yet. Answer, it's because it was actually a girl who seduced her and maybe the demon implanted false memories on her. Also, since the MC's mother is on the hunt for the attacker, it would eventually lead them to her. And, since the attack was recent, that means that the next one won't be for a while.

The one issue is that she was sexually assaulted when she was 12, but it could be argued she did not loose her virginity during the attack. Maybe the man who assaulted her had a huge cock that couldn't fit her pussy so forced her to perform oral. That would definitely fit for the trauma without having her loose her virginity. Jemini (talk) 05:58, 6 March 2020 (CET)


The man that assaulted Sarah may have only been able to do oral and anal sex and had to leave before he got to actually taking her virginity, as he was saving it for last.

Also there is no prohibition against the high school girls dating boys in town especially the Jr. and Sr. girls, the school even hosts mixers with the other local high schools. They just have a curfew.

There is also one very large elephant in the room, how did Alister an evil possessing entity with a demon attached to his soul get past the Moons? Telgar (talk) 21:15, 5 March 2020 (PST)


-shrug- it might have been an oversight. You have several magical entities (the Drow race) and several humans with the ability to use magic.

The magical energy that Allister has can be overlooked as there are other Witches, not sure about having a second suppressed soul or a demon though.

Right! Allister has mind altering magic, it might not fully work in the Moon family or the Drows. They know something is off about Jodie, they just aren't sure what is it that is out of the ordinary --MrPib (talk) 06:39, 6 March 2020 (CET)

Another thing, the demon needs another "willing" virgin this year. Allister got the body at age 8, the demon allowed 4 years to get used to the body and came back at age 12 and would then come back this year.

(brainwash/mind alteration are within his power. The demon didn't specify that Allister had to find a girl who was actually willing) --MrPib (talk) 06:45, 6 March 2020 (CET)

What I'm saying is he could have already assaulted Sarah, that would make her his victim for this year. Not some other girl. Jemini (talk) 15:51, 6 March 2020 (CET)


I think what Mr.Pib is suggesting, and the timing, ironically works, is make both assaults be Alistair's Demon. The first one didn't take her virginity, so they had to find someone else for that year, so it came back for her this time. The special place is that rest stop, however since it tried and fails last time it created a loophole that let the Demon try with her again away from the special place.

This would link the two characters back story some more and give more ammo for the investigation, as another girl was raped at that rest stop on that day.

One thing to consider, if we go with this, that potentially takes some of the negativity and tragedy away from Sarah's background. The miscarriage was less an Innocents death and more the prevention of a "Damion", which now makes the punishment of the Twins worth less as they were not responsible for the death of an innocent life. Telgar (talk) 07:54, 6 March 2020 (PST)


As for mind migic on the Moons, that won't work, they are "Gods". Yes de-powered God's, but still God's. The abilities of a mortal mind mage, especially one weakend to the point he has to possess another being, just won't work on them, neither should the abilities of a mere Demon, so something else, something bigger is hiding him from them. Anything else would be mere plot armour or weaken them. Detecting possessed students and wards to prevent Demons or other evil entities from entering the school ground's would be magic 101 level stuff. Telgar (talk) 08:00, 6 March 2020 (PST)