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Yeah but unlike being a slave to Ah-Hannab, Jack will probably make it pleasant. I stead of the horror show they are expecting. It's also why I jumped ahead on doing Ah-Hannab's write up. | Yeah but unlike being a slave to Ah-Hannab, Jack will probably make it pleasant. I stead of the horror show they are expecting. It's also why I jumped ahead on doing Ah-Hannab's write up. | ||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 16:29, 10 March 2020 (PST) | [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 16:29, 10 March 2020 (PST) | ||
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Well, all the stuff here on the religion write-up looks fine to me, I don't see much opportunity to add anything really. I might, however, wind up adding to the biography for the twins in terms of their family life based on this. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 01:40, 11 March 2020 (CET) | |||
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Great sounds good, did you check The order of Lust well. Their family wasn't members of the order, but it would be good to get your thoughts. | |||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 17:57, 10 March 2020 (PST) | |||
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Well, with this write-up I can go an entirely different route with the Deverux twins than I was planning. According to this, it would be perfectly in following with their religion for them to become slaves, and for them to desire punishment for their actions. In other words, it's not as much of an escape for them as I had first pictured. This... could get a little weird on the MC route. Jemini (talk) 00:18, 11 March 2020 (CET)
Yeah but unlike being a slave to Ah-Hannab, Jack will probably make it pleasant. I stead of the horror show they are expecting. It's also why I jumped ahead on doing Ah-Hannab's write up. Telgar (talk) 16:29, 10 March 2020 (PST)
Well, all the stuff here on the religion write-up looks fine to me, I don't see much opportunity to add anything really. I might, however, wind up adding to the biography for the twins in terms of their family life based on this. Jemini (talk) 01:40, 11 March 2020 (CET)
Great sounds good, did you check The order of Lust well. Their family wasn't members of the order, but it would be good to get your thoughts. Telgar (talk) 17:57, 10 March 2020 (PST)