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Your take on Sally's nudist home life seems to be a bit spicier (or a lot spicier depending on choices!), which is fine of course, but it would probably be jarring for anyone to jump between the two, so having come to a place where a time-skip seems warranted, I decided I better to make my own page and keep the two paths separated. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 08:30, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
Your take on Sally's nudist home life seems to be a bit spicier (or a lot spicier depending on choices!), which is fine of course, but it would probably be jarring for anyone to jump between the two, so having come to a place where a time-skip seems warranted, I decided I better to make my own page and keep the two paths separated. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 08:30, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
I know what you're saying, a lot of what I'm writing isn't strictly in the ENF genre which is often more lighthearted and innocent and focused more strictly on embarrassment. I don't think there's anything wrong with overlapping genres or interests though. Like you said, it's all about what the reader chooses, so I think it's okay for very different story arcs to be in the same list of starting points. Even though I've strived for it in many of my other stories, it's virtually impossible for open format CYOA to have perfect continuity, and I don't think anyone will be bothered by one character having very different adventures.
In any case, I'm also happy to move/separate my arcs somehow if they're too jarring or don't fit. You can also rewrite them or tone them down. I'm open to whatever. --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 21:36, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
Isn't that kinda the ''point'' of CYOA? Choosing different adventures and paths for the same character? Seeing how they change, and grow during the story and witnessing what they experience; the good with the bad? I like the spicier version, though I am finding I enjoy the ENF segments as well. I blame it on my creampie fetish, wanting to see that puss filled to overflowing lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 22:29, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
It's fine. I mean you were the one who started doing the WeekX thing in the first place, so I just made a [[A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/ClothingOptional|new page]] to keep my nudism branch separate. There's nothing wrong with paths diverging in content, like Notsooldpervert said, I just reconsidered having them reconnect at a hub (which previously seemed like a good idea) since it would be a bit startling if one moment Ava is reluctantly letting Sally go naked upstairs and then suddenly calling her a dirty slut in the next (or vice versa, for that matter). I do realize anyone who likes the story will probably jump around and read multiple branches, but on principle I feel one should also be able to follow a single branch without encountering major inconsistencies. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 00:00, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

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While mom joining her in nudism would be fun (especially for Devin), it doesn't really fit with the established story of Mom trying to make her give up. Only way I see it is reverse psychology and trying to shame Sally into stopping by copying her. Of course, that could backfire as they egg each other on to more and more daring acts while nude to "prove" the other is just faking it to be stubborn (and perhaps mom comes to enjoy it after all lol). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:40, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

There are a couple ways you could go with mom being naked. Sally's obliviousness was inherited from her mother so she might have just had her own bought of forgetfulness. But Ava trying to psych out her daughter would probably be the most fun. --Villenia (talk) 23:41, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

Your take on Sally's nudist home life seems to be a bit spicier (or a lot spicier depending on choices!), which is fine of course, but it would probably be jarring for anyone to jump between the two, so having come to a place where a time-skip seems warranted, I decided I better to make my own page and keep the two paths separated. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 08:30, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

I know what you're saying, a lot of what I'm writing isn't strictly in the ENF genre which is often more lighthearted and innocent and focused more strictly on embarrassment. I don't think there's anything wrong with overlapping genres or interests though. Like you said, it's all about what the reader chooses, so I think it's okay for very different story arcs to be in the same list of starting points. Even though I've strived for it in many of my other stories, it's virtually impossible for open format CYOA to have perfect continuity, and I don't think anyone will be bothered by one character having very different adventures.

In any case, I'm also happy to move/separate my arcs somehow if they're too jarring or don't fit. You can also rewrite them or tone them down. I'm open to whatever. --Villenia (talk) 21:36, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Isn't that kinda the point of CYOA? Choosing different adventures and paths for the same character? Seeing how they change, and grow during the story and witnessing what they experience; the good with the bad? I like the spicier version, though I am finding I enjoy the ENF segments as well. I blame it on my creampie fetish, wanting to see that puss filled to overflowing lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:29, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

It's fine. I mean you were the one who started doing the WeekX thing in the first place, so I just made a new page to keep my nudism branch separate. There's nothing wrong with paths diverging in content, like Notsooldpervert said, I just reconsidered having them reconnect at a hub (which previously seemed like a good idea) since it would be a bit startling if one moment Ava is reluctantly letting Sally go naked upstairs and then suddenly calling her a dirty slut in the next (or vice versa, for that matter). I do realize anyone who likes the story will probably jump around and read multiple branches, but on principle I feel one should also be able to follow a single branch without encountering major inconsistencies. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 00:00, 1 August 2021 (UTC)