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:Any thoughts about what the friends should be like? I guess Weston and Randall would be the obvious choice, they're mentioned as Devin's friends on the [[A Loli's ENF Adventure/The Sorenson Family|lore page]], and minimal details were written [[A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/Food/No2|here]]. But it could be someone totally different. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 03:20, 4 August 2021 (UTC) | :Any thoughts about what the friends should be like? I guess Weston and Randall would be the obvious choice, they're mentioned as Devin's friends on the [[A Loli's ENF Adventure/The Sorenson Family|lore page]], and minimal details were written [[A Loli's ENF Adventure/Sally/Food/No2|here]]. But it could be someone totally different. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 03:20, 4 August 2021 (UTC) | ||
::Those two are fine. Maybe coming over for video games? Devin could move the system to the living room so they have more room, or something? Or Devin, in an effort to get Sally "back" for teasing him, invites her to play since they "need a fourth"? Sally can't refuse, and can't cover up. The two paths aren't mutually exclusive, either. After powering through his friends visit (whether they start groping the girl or not) he can decide it wasn't "punishment enough" and still go naked lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 14:26, 5 August 2021 (UTC) | ::Those two are fine. Maybe coming over for video games? Devin could move the system to the living room so they have more room, or something? Or Devin, in an effort to get Sally "back" for teasing him, invites her to play since they "need a fourth"? Sally can't refuse, and can't cover up. The two paths aren't mutually exclusive, either. After powering through his friends visit (whether they start groping the girl or not) he can decide it wasn't "punishment enough" and still go naked lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 14:26, 5 August 2021 (UTC) | ||
:::Well at this point in the story she's still only allowed to be naked upstairs, so moving the game system to the living room wouldn't work. But I do like the idea of trying to get her involved in a game. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 15:09, 5 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::I thought this was after a week of her forgetting to ''stay'' upstairs and otherwise be out in the open to drive Devin nuts --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 15:19, 5 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::Not being able to keep it upstairs was one of the other options, so I'm assuming she's been respecting that rule for the most part (thought it's probably safe to assume not perfectly) but the big problem is that Devin's room is ''also'' upstairs (right across from hers in fact) and, at least by Sally's understanding, that means is perfectly fine to visit him naked. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 19:48, 5 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
Friends option has been written. Decided the setup and introduction for the friends ran a little long so I didn't get too far into it. Having her join them for a game still seems like a good plan, but the first choice may change how that plays out exactly. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 16:14, 6 August 2021 (UTC) | |||
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Hmmm.... him going naked too could lead to all kinds of incestuous hi-jinks, but the friends coming over would be lots of embarrassment from multiple boys seeing her naked, and she can't run and hide or it gives the lie to her being a nudist. I'm fine with either, really. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:08, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, /Naked would definitely be the incest path but I still don't consider myself too good at writing that kind of stuff. I might give it a shot if no one else does, but I think I'll go for the other one first. For an ENF story it could really use some more scenes of Sally actually embarrassed, and this seems like a good way to do that. Of course if she just hid in her room or immediately got dressed, that would hardly be much fun, so I imagine she'll continue being stubborn about it.
- Any thoughts about what the friends should be like? I guess Weston and Randall would be the obvious choice, they're mentioned as Devin's friends on the lore page, and minimal details were written here. But it could be someone totally different. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 03:20, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
- Those two are fine. Maybe coming over for video games? Devin could move the system to the living room so they have more room, or something? Or Devin, in an effort to get Sally "back" for teasing him, invites her to play since they "need a fourth"? Sally can't refuse, and can't cover up. The two paths aren't mutually exclusive, either. After powering through his friends visit (whether they start groping the girl or not) he can decide it wasn't "punishment enough" and still go naked lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 14:26, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Well at this point in the story she's still only allowed to be naked upstairs, so moving the game system to the living room wouldn't work. But I do like the idea of trying to get her involved in a game. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 15:09, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- I thought this was after a week of her forgetting to stay upstairs and otherwise be out in the open to drive Devin nuts --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:19, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Not being able to keep it upstairs was one of the other options, so I'm assuming she's been respecting that rule for the most part (thought it's probably safe to assume not perfectly) but the big problem is that Devin's room is also upstairs (right across from hers in fact) and, at least by Sally's understanding, that means is perfectly fine to visit him naked. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 19:48, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- I thought this was after a week of her forgetting to stay upstairs and otherwise be out in the open to drive Devin nuts --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:19, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Well at this point in the story she's still only allowed to be naked upstairs, so moving the game system to the living room wouldn't work. But I do like the idea of trying to get her involved in a game. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 15:09, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
- Those two are fine. Maybe coming over for video games? Devin could move the system to the living room so they have more room, or something? Or Devin, in an effort to get Sally "back" for teasing him, invites her to play since they "need a fourth"? Sally can't refuse, and can't cover up. The two paths aren't mutually exclusive, either. After powering through his friends visit (whether they start groping the girl or not) he can decide it wasn't "punishment enough" and still go naked lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 14:26, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Friends option has been written. Decided the setup and introduction for the friends ran a little long so I didn't get too far into it. Having her join them for a game still seems like a good plan, but the first choice may change how that plays out exactly. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 16:14, 6 August 2021 (UTC)