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Revision as of 14:35, 26 March 2023

Thanks for the revisions again! The conversation at the beginning flows much better now. As for where I go from here, I plan to write the path where he tries to cut this off, but then I want to come back to write the path where he lets her take the lead to see how far this can go. This other path would be a bad end where either May tells Yulee what happens later or someone walks in on them in the act.

--LukeJ (talk) 14:35, 26 March 2023 (UTC)