Talk:Yes/Chad/Have Gwen help you take Mina's cherry

I'm having issues getting inspired to write the sex scene. I'll try to work myself up to it, and get back to this later tonight unless someone else actually feels inspired and wants to write the sex scene for me LOL. That was sort of a joke; but if someone does feel like writing the sex scene for me I wouldn't mind - but during the scene Chad should get the growing feeling that he is being watched. I already have the options written out, but they are currently hidden as a comment. --Elerneron (talk) 15:42, 16 January 2017 (CET)

You write a lot of good stuff for this site! I don't think anyone is demanding any expectations from you with time or constant perfection. This is your character and story thread; I think the best thing is write what you can, even if you don't feel it's your best work. We can give feedback and make helpful adjustments after :) --Jackmaster (talk) 16:35, 16 January 2017 (CET)

On a different note, I know you said you'd like other people to write as well; I've got an idea for a couple of main characters (twins) that could be fun and interesting to see play out, but I wanted to run it past you before just adding the, to your story. Would the power work if the ring were to be shared between two people? Would there be an caveats to be aware of? If you're happy with it, I'll start work on a story stream with those two; with not receiving any feedback on EOTW I've kind of lost steam with it, so hopefully this might get me writing again. --Jackmaster (talk) 16:35, 16 January 2017 (CET) (on another different note, can I shamelessly plug The End of the World as we Know it!; if you like the concept or enjoy the story please help with choosing some directions for me to go with it :) -feel free to delete the plug if you don't want it taking space on the talk page)

This is Elerneron's story, but by my understanding of what he has laid out the ring is currently unable to share its power as it is now, but the ring is subject to its own power and therefore that little limitation can be easily changed. Jemini (talk) 16:47, 16 January 2017 (CET) Edit: As for the sex-scene, I know I have wound up writing the majority of the sex scenes in your stories. I am actually quite interested to see how yours turn out. You keep saying you are bad at them, but, well... 1. You never get better if you don't try, and 2. You have read plenty of work by other people and it is a truism that I hold to that reading helps you improve as a writer. Not quite to the same extent as practice, but there is something of an osmosis effect. (My advice, the sex scene with Gwen was fast, fittingly so, but these circumstances seem to call for a much slower sex scene. Actually, it calls for a slow and sensual sex scene, witch is actually an area I have difficulty with myself. My slowest sex scenes tend to be teaching or discovery sessions for 2 virgins, or a non-virgin main character and virgin pre-pubescent character. Two teens who are fully into it going about it slow and sensual would be hard, but I am already starting to get some ideas about how Mina might act.)

Sorry I meant if the ring was to be passed between two people? --Jackmaster (talk) 17:31, 16 January 2017 (CET)

It's shaping up good :) --Jackmaster (talk) 10:14, 17 January 2017 (CET)