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Ok, well, with the women's profiles in now it is looking like this may not be the best story for shared participation. I could be wrong about that, I will have to see how things start to shape up, but I am just seeing too much in the backgrounds that results in people having rather complicated sexualities and interpersonal relationships, and that means that skilled writers will have to really watch and get the feel before participating and unskilled writers would only mess things up royally. That said, still interested to see where you take this assuming you have a grand plan for how all these complex relationships are supposed to come together. Otherwise... well... I guess it is up to you whether or not you want others participating. If you do though, I would suggest toning those down a little. (Not that I'm one to talk, that's sort of one of my weaknesses too. I am working on it though, trying to simplify it a bit on a story I am participating in.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:48, 9 February 2017 (CET)
Ok, well, with the women's profiles in now it is looking like this may not be the best story for shared participation. I could be wrong about that, I will have to see how things start to shape up, but I am just seeing too much in the backgrounds that results in people having rather complicated sexualities and interpersonal relationships, and that means that skilled writers will have to really watch and get the feel before participating and unskilled writers would only mess things up royally. That said, still interested to see where you take this assuming you have a grand plan for how all these complex relationships are supposed to come together. Otherwise... well... I guess it is up to you whether or not you want others participating. If you do though, I would suggest toning those down a little. (Not that I'm one to talk, that's sort of one of my weaknesses too. I am working on it though, trying to simplify it a bit on a story I am participating in.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:48, 9 February 2017 (CET)
Well to tell you the truth,i uses to have this story planned out. I had almost 2,000 pages. But after an incident that happened, I managed to lose the the story and the character sheets. So what i was doing was that i was going to replan on how the characters interact in the story and come up with a manageable backstory. But since im currently busy all the time, i could never get it done so what i was going to do is slowly but surely take each character fike and create a proper more manageable backstory for contributers to use. But im open for suggestions if you want to make the character's backstory-[[User:Maadman12|Maadman12]] ([[User talk:Maadman12|talk]])
Well, Katherine having her full powers as a goddess is one of the biggest impediments. Stories in a form like this tend to be of a wish fulfillment nature, her having her full powers as well as the expected opposition to sexual molestation of her children make her a significant obstacle on any path that does not involve her having the charm. Really, there is just too much undefined paranormal power coming up in this, all of it implied to be rather significant. It is ok if you want to define its peramiters though. At any rate, Katherine having her full power is something that is appropriate if you are the soul contributor and have a plan for a confrontation and how it might turn out, but it does not work quite so well if you are wanting others to participate. (since re-writes would be rather significant, on her especially, I had pass all that by you before possibly taking you up on the offer to re-write them myself.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 07:02, 10 February 2017 (CET)

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This story is shaping up to be somewhat interesting. I would like to see character profiles on the women's side. No girl I want to see the story of in particular, just want to see the profiles. Especially for the sake of Cole and Allen since they are going to be interacting with these girls and women. It would help a great deal to know their ages and some pieces of their background so I know who they are interacting with. Jemini (talk) 03:33, 9 February 2017 (CET)

Ok, well, with the women's profiles in now it is looking like this may not be the best story for shared participation. I could be wrong about that, I will have to see how things start to shape up, but I am just seeing too much in the backgrounds that results in people having rather complicated sexualities and interpersonal relationships, and that means that skilled writers will have to really watch and get the feel before participating and unskilled writers would only mess things up royally. That said, still interested to see where you take this assuming you have a grand plan for how all these complex relationships are supposed to come together. Otherwise... well... I guess it is up to you whether or not you want others participating. If you do though, I would suggest toning those down a little. (Not that I'm one to talk, that's sort of one of my weaknesses too. I am working on it though, trying to simplify it a bit on a story I am participating in.) Jemini (talk) 12:48, 9 February 2017 (CET)

Well to tell you the truth,i uses to have this story planned out. I had almost 2,000 pages. But after an incident that happened, I managed to lose the the story and the character sheets. So what i was doing was that i was going to replan on how the characters interact in the story and come up with a manageable backstory. But since im currently busy all the time, i could never get it done so what i was going to do is slowly but surely take each character fike and create a proper more manageable backstory for contributers to use. But im open for suggestions if you want to make the character's backstory-Maadman12 (talk)

Well, Katherine having her full powers as a goddess is one of the biggest impediments. Stories in a form like this tend to be of a wish fulfillment nature, her having her full powers as well as the expected opposition to sexual molestation of her children make her a significant obstacle on any path that does not involve her having the charm. Really, there is just too much undefined paranormal power coming up in this, all of it implied to be rather significant. It is ok if you want to define its peramiters though. At any rate, Katherine having her full power is something that is appropriate if you are the soul contributor and have a plan for a confrontation and how it might turn out, but it does not work quite so well if you are wanting others to participate. (since re-writes would be rather significant, on her especially, I had pass all that by you before possibly taking you up on the offer to re-write them myself.) Jemini (talk) 07:02, 10 February 2017 (CET)