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You know I'm quite surprised and impressed by how much backstory and continuity has been created with this idea, just by making all the bios, I always hated making bios during my degree, always felt it took me away from the actual story. Now I finally understand, it might be something most normal readers never see, but man does it create amazing back story and character continuity. | You know I'm quite surprised and impressed by how much backstory and continuity has been created with this idea, just by making all the bios, I always hated making bios during my degree, always felt it took me away from the actual story. Now I finally understand, it might be something most normal readers never see, but man does it create amazing back story and character continuity. | ||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 04:09, 4 March 2020 (PST) | [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 04:09, 4 March 2020 (PST) | ||
Oh yeah, I definitely enjoy it. I often wind up being the one to write the bios and backstory for exactly that reason, but I've been trying to step off now for this one since it seems you're on a roll here. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 13:12, 4 March 2020 (CET) | |||
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Feel free to make your own girls lol or if you want to help you can help with Andrew Martel. All I got in my head is he is involved with the rival school and is with Ms. Franklin to get inside Lamptons. But I just can't get the drive to write him up. | |||
I also need to think up a story for the Dark Elves. I put them in to show that fantasy stuff is permitted, just not sure where I want to go with it, the huge age gap is due to elven life span, they mature and learn at a much slower pace than humans, 10 years is = to 1 for a human. Half-Elves, and Dwarves are a 5 - 1 ratio. Halflings, Fury's, Orcs and other normal lived races are a 1 - 1. Goblins and other shorter lived races are a 1 - 5 so a 1 year old Goblin would look and act like a 5 Year Old Human. Again half races would lessen the dynamic maybe a 1 - 2 or 3 for a Half-Goblin, and a 3 - 1 for a half Dwarf. [[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 04:21, 4 March 2020 (PST) | |||
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Since we're doing the whole "magic" route, I thought of a new character (actually 2.) | |||
Posting here for input and in hopes that one of you will flesh it out further | |||
"[https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/6aa54de7-7fce-44e3-9b3f-530eb6aa3b24/d3f95aj-ba59bd2d-db40-4ef3-8a9c-2578b22425d3.png/v1/fill/w_900,h_1028,q_80,strp/jody_crowley_looking_mean_by_triedge06_d3f95aj-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTAyOCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzZhYTU0ZGU3LTdmY2UtNDRlMy05YjNmLTUzMGViNmFhM2IyNFwvZDNmOTVhai1iYTU5YmQyZC1kYjQwLTRlZjMtOGE5Yy0yNTc4YjIyNDI1ZDMucG5nIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTkwMCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19._R6GnAhc0wBrhTfhNm91ZIGJw_i2Q34ryohGC3G0vp8 Jody/Jodie Crowley]": Her father Allister/Aleister Crowley, dabbled in black magic prior to her birth because he was seeking immortality due to a non-curable degenerative disease. In a last ditch effort, Allister made a deal with a demon. However, said demon didn't complete his part of the deal and he died anyways. Or so we thought. The demon had corrupted Allister's wish and deposited his soul into the body of his daughter Jody on her eighth birthday. | |||
Aleister is in full control of the body, Jody is just a spectator. Aleisterhas extensive magical knowledge and is capable of conjuring up a penis at will. The demon however, has told Allister that there is a catch to his new vessel. In order for his soul to remain bound, he must deflower a fertile virgin once every four years; BUT, if Jody's vagina is penetrated, at all, she will regain of her body and Aleister's soul is forfeit. | |||
TL;DR: the soul of a middle aged man is in the body of a 16 year old, ''he'' is a futanari and can use magic. In order for the girl to regain control of her body, she needs to be subdued and raped and due to being a bystander for so long, she has the mental capacity of an 8 year old. (People would've noticed the personality change, but because of Allister's use of magic on them, they pay no need. Both the Moon and the Oloth families know something is "off" but they aren't sure why.) | |||
--[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 00:24, 6 March 2020 (CET) | |||
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Interesting idea however, futanari and Transgender is not something I'm willing to deal with and is listed in the baned content. | |||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 15:32, 5 March 2020 (PST | |||
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We definitely need more students, but right now I'm just about burned out from writing all these bios. | |||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 16:20, 5 March 2020 (PST | |||
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Understandable, but I kind of invisioned MC going after a "virgin", but come to find out that her cherry has already been popped. (Memories have been wiped of the event) The moons' catch wind and we devise a plan to capture Jody and knock the body unconscious. MC fucks the comatose body. | |||
Now that Jody is in control, she tells of the last 8 years of hell that she's had to live through. No futa sex scenes really, just Jody telling of her father's doings in the past. But, remember, she still has the mind of an 8 year old, so she'd end up explaining it from a child's POV. | |||
But like I've said, this is your story, you can change it up a bit. --[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 01:24, 6 March 2020 (CET) | |||
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Make her bio, but leave the Futa stuff out. Though you will have to think of how it got past the Moons, they are Goddess is sex and the schools protectors. Once the initial bio is written I'll go over it and streamline it, and make it fit with the rest of the continuity. Also the father's name is a direct reference to an actual person, I would suggest a different but similar last name. | |||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 16:27, 5 March 2020 (PST) | |||
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Jem, Telgar, I hope I did ok on the bios. I'm no author, and I right whatever I'm thinking but sometimes it sounds better in my head than it does on paper. --[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 05:36, 6 March 2020 (CET) | |||
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No problem a good start if Jemini doesn't get to it I'll work on it when I wake up in a few hours. | |||
[[User:Telgar|Telgar]] ([[User talk:Telgar|talk]]) 02:09, 5 March 2020 (PST) |
Latest revision as of 05:28, 6 March 2020
You know I'm quite surprised and impressed by how much backstory and continuity has been created with this idea, just by making all the bios, I always hated making bios during my degree, always felt it took me away from the actual story. Now I finally understand, it might be something most normal readers never see, but man does it create amazing back story and character continuity. Telgar (talk) 04:09, 4 March 2020 (PST)
Oh yeah, I definitely enjoy it. I often wind up being the one to write the bios and backstory for exactly that reason, but I've been trying to step off now for this one since it seems you're on a roll here. Jemini (talk) 13:12, 4 March 2020 (CET)
Feel free to make your own girls lol or if you want to help you can help with Andrew Martel. All I got in my head is he is involved with the rival school and is with Ms. Franklin to get inside Lamptons. But I just can't get the drive to write him up.
I also need to think up a story for the Dark Elves. I put them in to show that fantasy stuff is permitted, just not sure where I want to go with it, the huge age gap is due to elven life span, they mature and learn at a much slower pace than humans, 10 years is = to 1 for a human. Half-Elves, and Dwarves are a 5 - 1 ratio. Halflings, Fury's, Orcs and other normal lived races are a 1 - 1. Goblins and other shorter lived races are a 1 - 5 so a 1 year old Goblin would look and act like a 5 Year Old Human. Again half races would lessen the dynamic maybe a 1 - 2 or 3 for a Half-Goblin, and a 3 - 1 for a half Dwarf. Telgar (talk) 04:21, 4 March 2020 (PST)
Since we're doing the whole "magic" route, I thought of a new character (actually 2.) Posting here for input and in hopes that one of you will flesh it out further
"Jody/Jodie Crowley": Her father Allister/Aleister Crowley, dabbled in black magic prior to her birth because he was seeking immortality due to a non-curable degenerative disease. In a last ditch effort, Allister made a deal with a demon. However, said demon didn't complete his part of the deal and he died anyways. Or so we thought. The demon had corrupted Allister's wish and deposited his soul into the body of his daughter Jody on her eighth birthday.
Aleister is in full control of the body, Jody is just a spectator. Aleisterhas extensive magical knowledge and is capable of conjuring up a penis at will. The demon however, has told Allister that there is a catch to his new vessel. In order for his soul to remain bound, he must deflower a fertile virgin once every four years; BUT, if Jody's vagina is penetrated, at all, she will regain of her body and Aleister's soul is forfeit.
TL;DR: the soul of a middle aged man is in the body of a 16 year old, he is a futanari and can use magic. In order for the girl to regain control of her body, she needs to be subdued and raped and due to being a bystander for so long, she has the mental capacity of an 8 year old. (People would've noticed the personality change, but because of Allister's use of magic on them, they pay no need. Both the Moon and the Oloth families know something is "off" but they aren't sure why.) --MrPib (talk) 00:24, 6 March 2020 (CET)
Interesting idea however, futanari and Transgender is not something I'm willing to deal with and is listed in the baned content. Telgar (talk) 15:32, 5 March 2020 (PST
We definitely need more students, but right now I'm just about burned out from writing all these bios. Telgar (talk) 16:20, 5 March 2020 (PST
Understandable, but I kind of invisioned MC going after a "virgin", but come to find out that her cherry has already been popped. (Memories have been wiped of the event) The moons' catch wind and we devise a plan to capture Jody and knock the body unconscious. MC fucks the comatose body.
Now that Jody is in control, she tells of the last 8 years of hell that she's had to live through. No futa sex scenes really, just Jody telling of her father's doings in the past. But, remember, she still has the mind of an 8 year old, so she'd end up explaining it from a child's POV.
But like I've said, this is your story, you can change it up a bit. --MrPib (talk) 01:24, 6 March 2020 (CET)
Make her bio, but leave the Futa stuff out. Though you will have to think of how it got past the Moons, they are Goddess is sex and the schools protectors. Once the initial bio is written I'll go over it and streamline it, and make it fit with the rest of the continuity. Also the father's name is a direct reference to an actual person, I would suggest a different but similar last name. Telgar (talk) 16:27, 5 March 2020 (PST)
Jem, Telgar, I hope I did ok on the bios. I'm no author, and I right whatever I'm thinking but sometimes it sounds better in my head than it does on paper. --MrPib (talk) 05:36, 6 March 2020 (CET)
No problem a good start if Jemini doesn't get to it I'll work on it when I wake up in a few hours. Telgar (talk) 02:09, 5 March 2020 (PST)