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Nicely done! I wonder if the other Sarah is going to have an even worse day, and find out that the last spare uniform her size just went to the wrong girl? Will she get a size too small, or a size too big? Will the "almost a doctor" wonder why our Sally let him see her naked and feel her up when there was nothing wrong with her? lol And of course the shorts are loose enough she can keep flashing Mr. Vice all afternoon. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 15:52, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | Nicely done! I wonder if the other Sarah is going to have an even worse day, and find out that the last spare uniform her size just went to the wrong girl? Will she get a size too small, or a size too big? Will the "almost a doctor" wonder why our Sally let him see her naked and feel her up when there was nothing wrong with her? lol And of course the shorts are loose enough she can keep flashing Mr. Vice all afternoon. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 15:52, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | ||
:Thanks! Just out of curiosity, I know I sledge-hammered the point at the end, but how far did you read before you knew what happened? I hoped it wasn't super obvious to the reader right away, but I don't know how well I pulled it off. I'm not a mystery author, haha. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 18:25, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | :Thanks! Just out of curiosity, I know I sledge-hammered the point at the end, but how far did you read before you knew what happened? I hoped it wasn't super obvious to the reader right away, but I don't know how well I pulled it off. I'm not a mystery author, haha. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 18:25, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | ||
::When he started examining her I suspected. Pretty much had it figured when the clothes were too big lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 18:34, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Cool, that's about what I hoped. BTW, do you have any particular ideas for what happens at lunch? I didn't have anything specific in mind, it just seemed like a logical course of action. (Though obviously her loose clothing will probably come into play somehow or other). --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 20:45, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::Not really. Chose that because going outside or hiding in the library don't really fit either. As far as I'm concerned, skip ahead to where she's back in class. Only thing I can see happening is someone getting a peek at her boob through a gap in the buttons of the over-large shirt, or someone asking why they don't fit her (when they did an hour ago). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 22:38, 19 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::She hasn't got a boob, Ben just checked, remember? :D Getting a bit silly with the indents here. Feel free to help me brainstorm below. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 02:44, 20 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
I would actually think Library would more likely be the skip ahead option, since that seems like her best bet to avoid any mishaps with her ill-fitting clothes for now. But I guess I could write the lunch one that way too, perhaps she has a quick lunch and then wants to talk to Mr. Vice about her weird experience with the nurse before class resumes. That could be fun, but on the other hand, realistically that would probably mean he sorts out her uniform problem before she actually gets to attend class in it. Any thoughts? (That goes for anyone else reading too, of course) --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 02:44, 20 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
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Whew! It looks like I got carried away, this was almost double the length most of these have been. But I had an idea for how to get in a nice ENF scene and simultaneously set up more, so I had to run with it! --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 07:16, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
Nicely done! I wonder if the other Sarah is going to have an even worse day, and find out that the last spare uniform her size just went to the wrong girl? Will she get a size too small, or a size too big? Will the "almost a doctor" wonder why our Sally let him see her naked and feel her up when there was nothing wrong with her? lol And of course the shorts are loose enough she can keep flashing Mr. Vice all afternoon. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:52, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks! Just out of curiosity, I know I sledge-hammered the point at the end, but how far did you read before you knew what happened? I hoped it wasn't super obvious to the reader right away, but I don't know how well I pulled it off. I'm not a mystery author, haha. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 18:25, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- When he started examining her I suspected. Pretty much had it figured when the clothes were too big lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:34, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- Cool, that's about what I hoped. BTW, do you have any particular ideas for what happens at lunch? I didn't have anything specific in mind, it just seemed like a logical course of action. (Though obviously her loose clothing will probably come into play somehow or other). --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 20:45, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- Not really. Chose that because going outside or hiding in the library don't really fit either. As far as I'm concerned, skip ahead to where she's back in class. Only thing I can see happening is someone getting a peek at her boob through a gap in the buttons of the over-large shirt, or someone asking why they don't fit her (when they did an hour ago). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:38, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- She hasn't got a boob, Ben just checked, remember? :D Getting a bit silly with the indents here. Feel free to help me brainstorm below. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 02:44, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
- Not really. Chose that because going outside or hiding in the library don't really fit either. As far as I'm concerned, skip ahead to where she's back in class. Only thing I can see happening is someone getting a peek at her boob through a gap in the buttons of the over-large shirt, or someone asking why they don't fit her (when they did an hour ago). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 22:38, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- Cool, that's about what I hoped. BTW, do you have any particular ideas for what happens at lunch? I didn't have anything specific in mind, it just seemed like a logical course of action. (Though obviously her loose clothing will probably come into play somehow or other). --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 20:45, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
- When he started examining her I suspected. Pretty much had it figured when the clothes were too big lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:34, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
I would actually think Library would more likely be the skip ahead option, since that seems like her best bet to avoid any mishaps with her ill-fitting clothes for now. But I guess I could write the lunch one that way too, perhaps she has a quick lunch and then wants to talk to Mr. Vice about her weird experience with the nurse before class resumes. That could be fun, but on the other hand, realistically that would probably mean he sorts out her uniform problem before she actually gets to attend class in it. Any thoughts? (That goes for anyone else reading too, of course) --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 02:44, 20 July 2021 (UTC)