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Regarding future plans:
'''Regarding future plans:'''


Since the route with Emilia / Sven was the only option that got any votes in the now-deleted poll, I'll obviously start off with that before doing anything else. I planned for the scene to unfold inside the house, not necessarily because it HAS to happen there, but rather because it wouldn't really make sense for any of the other options to happen inside the house.
<s>Since the route with Emilia / Sven was the only option that got any votes in the now-deleted poll, I'll obviously start off with that before doing anything else. I planned for the scene to unfold inside the house, not necessarily because it HAS to happen there, but rather because it wouldn't really make sense for any of the other options to happen inside the house.


I more or less have decided how the route for returning the toy to the chest will plan out, which'll mean - minor spoilers - that some of the schoolboys are locked out to that route as well. Same goes for dog-walking. The scenes for grocery store and the park are up in the air, and open for suggestions. Really haven't thought much about them.
I more or less have decided how the route for returning the toy to the chest will plan out, which means - minor spoilers - that some of the schoolboys are locked out to that route as well. The same goes for dog-walking. The scenes for the grocery store and the park are up in the air and open for suggestions. Really haven't thought much about them.</s> This stuff's done and/or saved for another day.


However, since everyone in the village is locked doing their own thing, some other people such as Heidi, Henry, Milka, and Emilia's parents, won't be available for many scenes either. I have plans for them elsewhere.
This page allows to choose either one of the other girls as the primary character, in addition to Sven, and maybe even more. (Not a priority for me. Just a fun idea while I focus on Emilia.)


Lastly, for "Follow Sven" route, he doesn't necessarily HAVE to find Emilia, and can end up doing something / finding someone else entirely, but this is not a priority for me at the moment. Just an idea I had. --[[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 01:08, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
This is because everyone in the village is locked doing their own thing. Other people, such as Heidi, Henry, Milka, and Emilia's parents, won't be available for Emilia's scenes either, which opens them up for their own routes.  For "Follow Sven" route in specific, he doesn't necessarily HAVE to find Emilia. He can end up doing something / finding someone else entirely. --[[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 16:24, 24 January 2022 (CET)
 
 
 
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I figured nothing would happen with Sven while the parents were home, so he might run into her at the park while looking for her and try to "scare her straight". If she's not supposed to refuse, he could insist on her following through on her new interests with him. One thing leads to another with him trying to prove she ''doesn't'' really want it, and her trying to prove she ''does'', then bingo, loli womb full of bother's cum! lol The other routes are still open, just ignore the ones that don't lead to Sven first. After all, I practically rolled dice to decide who got her cherry. Just write whichever one leads to Sven, then you can explore the other options. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:56, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
I figured nothing would happen with Sven while the parents were home, so he might run into her at the park while looking for her and try to "scare her straight". If she's not supposed to refuse, he could insist on her following through on her new interests with him. One thing leads to another with him trying to prove she ''doesn't'' really want it, and her trying to prove she ''does'', then bingo, loli womb full of bother's cum! lol The other routes are still open, just ignore the ones that don't lead to Sven first. After all, I practically rolled dice to decide who got her cherry. Just write whichever one leads to Sven, then you can explore the other options. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 01:56, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
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Minor differences aside, those are the ideas I had in my mind as well when I first put up the poll myself. I must admit though, the idea of Edward seeing his 11 year old son bone the girl he himself wants to do wasn't on my list of ideas, but it sounds more fun than Emilia just doing it with his son in peace. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 15:53, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
Minor differences aside, those are the ideas I had in my mind as well when I first put up the poll myself. I must admit though, the idea of Edward seeing his 11 year old son bone the girl he himself wants to do wasn't on my list of ideas, but it sounds more fun than Emilia just doing it with his son in peace. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 15:53, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
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In regards to "gods" meddling in affairs, I could see elders around town taking it upon themselves to enforce certain rules, being as superstitious as they must be, as well as punishing those who break them. Lots of potential there. --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 02:05, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
In regards to "gods" meddling in affairs, I could see elders around town taking it upon themselves to enforce certain rules, being as superstitious as they must be, as well as punishing those who break them. Lots of potential there. --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 02:05, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
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Definitely something that could happen, as I want to also explore options where the girls have to face some punishments. Having more fleshed out rules for how the girls can be punished and by who could also work, with additional milder punishments for minor misdemeanors instead of there being just "use me as you please" star forcefully cursed upon them. Luckily it's still a work in progress. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 10:38, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
Definitely something that could happen, as I want to also explore options where the girls have to face some punishments. Having more fleshed out rules for how the girls can be punished and by who could also work, with additional milder punishments for minor misdemeanors instead of there being just "use me as you please" star forcefully cursed upon them. Luckily it's still a work in progress. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 10:38, 24 August 2021 (UTC)


More interested in seeing the story move foward then the other options to be honest, not on the poll though. Have you given any thought as to when she'll have her first ovulation. 09:08, 25 August 2021 (UTC)~
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More interested in seeing the story move foward then the other options to be honest, not on the poll though. Have you given any thought as to when she'll have her first ovulation. [[User:Uv001|Uv001]] ([[User talk:Uv001|talk]]) 09:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
 
I honestly didn't think of putting it up as an option. Maybe in hindsight I should've? Anyway, it's what I plan to do soon anyway. To quote what I wrote earlier, ''"Having an option for too many individual males would be a bit of a strain as I do still want to stick to the story being at least somewhat traditional, with her "corruption" being the focus of the story."''
 
I'll write one option for her "first" and then move forward. I don't want to explore too many options here. Options in the poll that there's interest for will carry over to the future with some new options and follow-up content to the stuff that happens on this day.
 
As for menstrual cycle, it's something I've thought about because it's kind of a big deal in young girl's development, especially when the said young girl's getting creampied, but I haven't got any plans for it yet, so the answer at the moment is either later or maybe never. Probably "later", as it's a fun idea to explore. -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 10:38, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
 
I voted for the treehouse for the next path, thinking possible shota gang bang. Not sure if that's going to happen with that route though. I'm also ''very'' interested in her watching the girl fuck the dog, and curious what punishment her mother will come up with for her. Speaking of which, is she being punished for watching, or for wearing the star? Losing her cherry to the dog while Mom watches sounds kinda hot. Makes me wonder about Mom though. From what I understand, dogs pretty much need to be trained to fuck humans, so... Mom ''really '' likes "gardening", huh? That said, I'm fine with moving on to the next day, and all of those scenes aren't necessarily exclusive to her first day, either. Second day could include the shota gang bang, and maybe it takes several days for her to get curious "what is mom ''doing'' in the garden all this time? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 18:49, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
 
Well, with a treehouse, a lone girl getting caught in a possession of a sextoy / wearing a star by a bunch of young boys… Not too sure how many ways there is for that scene to unfold in a pornographic story! Her cherry being popped by one of them wouldn't be the end of it for sure.
 
I'll write the dog scene at one point no matter what, because there's already be interest for it. (I'm included in the interested parties lol.) Perhaps it'll happen on day two instead then.
 
Oh, and the mother does genuinely love gardening. She's got a big and beautiful garden where she's got herbs, berries and potatoes growing up. Not too unusual around here where I live as almost every damn backyard used to have something, and that's the case for where this story takes place. That's not to say she doesn't have secrets though… -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 20:01, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 15:24, 24 January 2022

Regarding future plans:

Since the route with Emilia / Sven was the only option that got any votes in the now-deleted poll, I'll obviously start off with that before doing anything else. I planned for the scene to unfold inside the house, not necessarily because it HAS to happen there, but rather because it wouldn't really make sense for any of the other options to happen inside the house.

I more or less have decided how the route for returning the toy to the chest will plan out, which means - minor spoilers - that some of the schoolboys are locked out to that route as well. The same goes for dog-walking. The scenes for the grocery store and the park are up in the air and open for suggestions. Really haven't thought much about them. This stuff's done and/or saved for another day.

This page allows to choose either one of the other girls as the primary character, in addition to Sven, and maybe even more. (Not a priority for me. Just a fun idea while I focus on Emilia.)

This is because everyone in the village is locked doing their own thing. Other people, such as Heidi, Henry, Milka, and Emilia's parents, won't be available for Emilia's scenes either, which opens them up for their own routes. For "Follow Sven" route in specific, he doesn't necessarily HAVE to find Emilia. He can end up doing something / finding someone else entirely. --Innocent Ruin (talk) 16:24, 24 January 2022 (CET)



I figured nothing would happen with Sven while the parents were home, so he might run into her at the park while looking for her and try to "scare her straight". If she's not supposed to refuse, he could insist on her following through on her new interests with him. One thing leads to another with him trying to prove she doesn't really want it, and her trying to prove she does, then bingo, loli womb full of bother's cum! lol The other routes are still open, just ignore the ones that don't lead to Sven first. After all, I practically rolled dice to decide who got her cherry. Just write whichever one leads to Sven, then you can explore the other options. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:56, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Hell, with walking the dog added to the options, I'm kinda interested in seeing the dog be her first lol. If going inside leads to Sven getting his dick wet in her, ignore the request for now. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:59, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

First scenario you mentioned is a good idea, could work well with the idea of him following her around looking to stop her, only to end up doing her instead after realizing he wasn't going to be able to convince her otherwise. Things with Sven can pan out in different ways.

I'm also not sure how many routes with "firsts" there really should even be. Two for now, maybe three? Sven is obviously the option number one here with probably one of the younger boys being the second. Having an option for too many individual males would be a bit of a strain as I do still want to stick to the story being at least somewhat traditional, with her "corruption" being the focus of the story. In that sense, options that she would still consider too perverted (such as bestiality) might be off the table for now and only come later. Not to say I don't have plans for the dog, I definitely do, but the idea of him being the first is one of those examples. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 08:57, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Well, I can think of three others besides Sven that would be easy. She goes looking for Heidi who isn't home, but one of the brothers or the father is with the readers getting the option of which one is there and sees her star. Perhaps more than one sees her star, but only one has the time and availability to go for it (like Dad sees it, but oldest brother does too, and he's not busy like Dad is at the moment lol) Lol even have her first time turn into a chain! Henry takes her to a secluded spot, breaks her in, Hannu finds them just as he's finishing, and this isn't his sister or the tomboy he doesn't want, so he asks for a turn. She's not supposed to say no, right (she's confused on when she's allowed to refuse). Just as Hannu finishes, here comes Edward! Her first time out of the gate she goes home a fucked out mess lol. The grocery, walking the dog, and returning the vibrator could all lead to one or more of the other boys closer to her own age. There's your three options for cherry popping. Sven, one of Heidi's relatives, or one of the boys near her own age that she runs into at random. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 13:13, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Minor differences aside, those are the ideas I had in my mind as well when I first put up the poll myself. I must admit though, the idea of Edward seeing his 11 year old son bone the girl he himself wants to do wasn't on my list of ideas, but it sounds more fun than Emilia just doing it with his son in peace. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 15:53, 21 August 2021 (UTC)


In regards to "gods" meddling in affairs, I could see elders around town taking it upon themselves to enforce certain rules, being as superstitious as they must be, as well as punishing those who break them. Lots of potential there. --Villenia (talk) 02:05, 24 August 2021 (UTC)

Definitely something that could happen, as I want to also explore options where the girls have to face some punishments. Having more fleshed out rules for how the girls can be punished and by who could also work, with additional milder punishments for minor misdemeanors instead of there being just "use me as you please" star forcefully cursed upon them. Luckily it's still a work in progress. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 10:38, 24 August 2021 (UTC)


More interested in seeing the story move foward then the other options to be honest, not on the poll though. Have you given any thought as to when she'll have her first ovulation. Uv001 (talk) 09:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

I honestly didn't think of putting it up as an option. Maybe in hindsight I should've? Anyway, it's what I plan to do soon anyway. To quote what I wrote earlier, "Having an option for too many individual males would be a bit of a strain as I do still want to stick to the story being at least somewhat traditional, with her "corruption" being the focus of the story."

I'll write one option for her "first" and then move forward. I don't want to explore too many options here. Options in the poll that there's interest for will carry over to the future with some new options and follow-up content to the stuff that happens on this day.

As for menstrual cycle, it's something I've thought about because it's kind of a big deal in young girl's development, especially when the said young girl's getting creampied, but I haven't got any plans for it yet, so the answer at the moment is either later or maybe never. Probably "later", as it's a fun idea to explore. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 10:38, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

I voted for the treehouse for the next path, thinking possible shota gang bang. Not sure if that's going to happen with that route though. I'm also very interested in her watching the girl fuck the dog, and curious what punishment her mother will come up with for her. Speaking of which, is she being punished for watching, or for wearing the star? Losing her cherry to the dog while Mom watches sounds kinda hot. Makes me wonder about Mom though. From what I understand, dogs pretty much need to be trained to fuck humans, so... Mom really likes "gardening", huh? That said, I'm fine with moving on to the next day, and all of those scenes aren't necessarily exclusive to her first day, either. Second day could include the shota gang bang, and maybe it takes several days for her to get curious "what is mom doing in the garden all this time? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:49, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

Well, with a treehouse, a lone girl getting caught in a possession of a sextoy / wearing a star by a bunch of young boys… Not too sure how many ways there is for that scene to unfold in a pornographic story! Her cherry being popped by one of them wouldn't be the end of it for sure.

I'll write the dog scene at one point no matter what, because there's already be interest for it. (I'm included in the interested parties lol.) Perhaps it'll happen on day two instead then.

Oh, and the mother does genuinely love gardening. She's got a big and beautiful garden where she's got herbs, berries and potatoes growing up. Not too unusual around here where I live as almost every damn backyard used to have something, and that's the case for where this story takes place. That's not to say she doesn't have secrets though… -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 20:01, 25 August 2021 (UTC)