Talk:April's Punishment/Part 10

Maybe instead of on her princess bed, fuck her right on the kitchen table while mom bustles around the kitchen making supper like it's an every day thing to happen. A call to the school will inform them of the loss of clothes for a week. That should be continued (or escalated) at home too.... say a month with no clothes? "Obviously" her home punishments "aren't working" yet, so for every load of cum she gets at school, Daddy fucks her twice lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:36, 9 December 2021 (CET)

Just wait until things escalate at school later in the week… The kitchen table thing reminds me of an old story I wrote a long time ago but have been thinking of rewriting recently. It’s about a girl who starts getting fucked by her older brothers and eventually her father. She starts to like it after a while, but I wanted to move on to other stories. I never made it to the dinner party where the neighbors are invited over and she gets passed around and fucked on the table while the rest of the family is eating like it’s totally normal. I randomly remembered that story last night. It’s called Fun with Naomi. It started out pretty good but kind of fell apart so I never kept going with it. I might dig it up and rework it a bit. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:26, 9 December 2021 (CET)

I love that story! I can't find it anymore though. There was a site a long while back that had your stories, and there was another series "Dave and His Boys" by someone else, that I loved. Tried to do an RP as Naomi, but it fell apart and just wasn't the same. I so wanted to see her get turned into the family fuck toy, never allowed clothes, never allowed to say "no". The RP I tried was on track to turn her into the town's fuck toy. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:31, 9 December 2021 (CET)

Yeah, I need to update it and post it here. I just found the original though. It’s on asstr.org on a writer named Lasiter’s page. You pretty much have to use a search engine to find it now that the site is all messed up. Lasiter has another good story that’s similar called Playing with the Boys or something like that. I always liked that one. If I remember correctly, I wanted Naomi’s father to lose his job and start pimping her out. Yeah, I definitely need to pick up that story again. I think I struggled with it at the time because it was in first person. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:37, 9 December 2021 (CET)

Lasiter! That was it! "Fun With Naomi" and "Dan and His Boys" were my favorites there. That one a guy drugs his girlfriend so his son can molest her. She starts figuring it out, and at one point is drugged, and wanders into the sons room where he's playing video games with the dad and younger brother and Dad takes the younger to the shower while the older boy is fucking her. Eventually she plays with the youngest while sober, then after lots of flashing and stuff, lets the older one and one of his friends fuck her. Eventually she sucks the youngest while Dad fucks her and they're making plans on what to do to his teenage daughter when she visits from her mother's.

Maybe with Naomi, instead of Dad losing his job and pimping her out, he pimps her to his boss to save his job. From then on that's how he earns raises and promotions. Promotions mean new bosses to fuck Naomi lol I do love the dinner party idea where Naomi doesn't even get to eat as she's passed from person to person to fuck. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:56, 9 December 2021 (CET)

I don’t think I’ve read that one. I’ll have to find it for later. Part 5 was literally going to be the diner party and the guy was going to offer money to take her home for his sons for the weekend. Yeah, I need to revisit that series. --Hgcollins (talk) 20:01, 9 December 2021 (CET)

Nice! Maybe the momoffers money to keep her for the weekend to "entertain her boys" while she has company, and maybe as "as a special treat" for the Dad's poker night buddies? Hmmm finish the weekend filming her being knotted by the family dog and and give a copy to her parents to prove how hard it made Naomi cum lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:10, 9 December 2021 (CET)