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I'll keep the same idea but just shorten it and include it in part 4. I like the thing with the brother's friend but I'll save that for later, too. Still really stoked about the potato salad. Fancy diner with lots of executives and a crying girl with smeared mascara being passed around the table. She'll learn to like it later --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 02:26, 10 December 2021 (CET)
I'll keep the same idea but just shorten it and include it in part 4. I like the thing with the brother's friend but I'll save that for later, too. Still really stoked about the potato salad. Fancy diner with lots of executives and a crying girl with smeared mascara being passed around the table. She'll learn to like it later --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 02:26, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Sorry, I thought part 3 was part 4. Part 3 ended fine, I don't remember part 4 lol Been too long. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 02:27, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Part 4 was the one Lasiter didn't like at the time and the reader response wasn't as good. I think I ran out of ideas as that point and the party idea came a lot later. He wanted me to keep going with it, but I was too busy writing Maya's fantasy at the time --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 02:30, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Ah, well, so far so good. Maybe make a production of it? Dad gets to go first, after that her brothers can flip a coin for sloppy seconds. Meanwhile Mom is filming it all for "posterity" (and online sales lol). Maybe that's when they announce she's not allowed clothes at home anymore? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 02:51, 10 December 2021 (CET)
It's a huge production. Brothers are out of the house. Lots of work executives are present. The CEO gets to do the honors, everyone else gets their turn after. Then their father fills the new position as the Regional Director of Sales with stock benefits and a fat salary. I'm sure he'll thank Naomi later and allow her to be used for "special" shareholder events. Plus, what else will she have to do to secure that fat yearly bonus for her father? --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 02:56, 10 December 2021 (CET)
Ooohh... I can see her going on long vacations to all kinds of exotic locations. Without he family. They all go somewhere together, she's sent along with top bidding executives she's never met before getting on the plane. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 03:24, 10 December 2021 (CET)
My thoughts exactly. Maybe her brothers get jealous because she gets to go on so many fancy trips and receives extravagant gifts from wealthy men she’s “visited.” Then they take it out on her when she gets home. Maybe the CEO starts using her as a bargaining ship to close big deals. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 03:30, 10 December 2021 (CET)
All those pretty clothes they'll send her that she's not allowed to wear lol. Yeah... I can see bros getting jelly. Pay her back by always inviting friends over to use her, or make her do degrading things to post to the internet or something. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 03:50, 10 December 2021 (CET)
I'm betting the many strange men she meet will have lots of strange fetishes some of which she wont like. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 05:00, 10 December 2021 (CET)
First she's got to get used to and like ''normal'' sex. Of course she won't like fetish sex for a while. lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 05:27, 10 December 2021 (CET)

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Nice. I miss Torrid Tales of the Taboo. Glad to see this story posted again. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:41, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I do too. Lasiter was really fun to work with but he got annoyed with asstr which is understandable. He said he may come back every once in a while, but he pretty much sent a goodbye letter to his contributors.--Hgcollins (talk) 01:28, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Well, I look forward to Naomi's parents and brothers turning her into a cock satisfying, cum guzzling bimbo who keeps her naked legs open all the time just in case someone wants to make use of her lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:32, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I think this story fell apart in part 4, so I kind of just gave up on it. I think I'm just going to delete part 4 and keep going. She can lose her virginity on the dining room table right next to a bowl of potato salad for all I care. --Hgcollins (talk) 01:45, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Keep part 4 almost as is. Kick the brothers out, so it's just her sleeping with mom and dad, other than that, her virginity is still intact to lose next to the potato salad lol. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:06, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I'll keep the same idea but just shorten it and include it in part 4. I like the thing with the brother's friend but I'll save that for later, too. Still really stoked about the potato salad. Fancy diner with lots of executives and a crying girl with smeared mascara being passed around the table. She'll learn to like it later --Hgcollins (talk) 02:26, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Sorry, I thought part 3 was part 4. Part 3 ended fine, I don't remember part 4 lol Been too long. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:27, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Part 4 was the one Lasiter didn't like at the time and the reader response wasn't as good. I think I ran out of ideas as that point and the party idea came a lot later. He wanted me to keep going with it, but I was too busy writing Maya's fantasy at the time --Hgcollins (talk) 02:30, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Ah, well, so far so good. Maybe make a production of it? Dad gets to go first, after that her brothers can flip a coin for sloppy seconds. Meanwhile Mom is filming it all for "posterity" (and online sales lol). Maybe that's when they announce she's not allowed clothes at home anymore? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:51, 10 December 2021 (CET)

It's a huge production. Brothers are out of the house. Lots of work executives are present. The CEO gets to do the honors, everyone else gets their turn after. Then their father fills the new position as the Regional Director of Sales with stock benefits and a fat salary. I'm sure he'll thank Naomi later and allow her to be used for "special" shareholder events. Plus, what else will she have to do to secure that fat yearly bonus for her father? --Hgcollins (talk) 02:56, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Ooohh... I can see her going on long vacations to all kinds of exotic locations. Without he family. They all go somewhere together, she's sent along with top bidding executives she's never met before getting on the plane. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 03:24, 10 December 2021 (CET)


My thoughts exactly. Maybe her brothers get jealous because she gets to go on so many fancy trips and receives extravagant gifts from wealthy men she’s “visited.” Then they take it out on her when she gets home. Maybe the CEO starts using her as a bargaining ship to close big deals. --Hgcollins (talk) 03:30, 10 December 2021 (CET)

All those pretty clothes they'll send her that she's not allowed to wear lol. Yeah... I can see bros getting jelly. Pay her back by always inviting friends over to use her, or make her do degrading things to post to the internet or something. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 03:50, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I'm betting the many strange men she meet will have lots of strange fetishes some of which she wont like. --Hgcollins (talk) 05:00, 10 December 2021 (CET)

First she's got to get used to and like normal sex. Of course she won't like fetish sex for a while. lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:27, 10 December 2021 (CET)