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I'm not a fan of M/m, personally. Maybe a 5th grader gets in trouble, and he has to entertain the school during lunch by fucking one or both girls? His punishment is the embarrassment of doing it in public, and the girls aren't even being punished, really just told to do it lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 21:38, 11 December 2021 (CET)
I'm not a fan of M/m, personally. Maybe a 5th grader gets in trouble, and he has to entertain the school during lunch by fucking one or both girls? His punishment is the embarrassment of doing it in public, and the girls aren't even being punished, really just told to do it lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 21:38, 11 December 2021 (CET)
Yeah, I’m not a fan either, but sometimes I like including them. Maya’s Fantasy was about as close as I ever got to writing a boy story. A reader wrote into Lasiter asking for more boy stories and that way my response since I had an idea of an older girl corrupting her little brother.
--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 21:52, 11 December 2021 (CET)
I probably didn't read that one as I tend to avoid stories with that tag. Put them in stocks or strap them to a wall so that anyone who wants to can fuck them? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 17:29, 15 December 2021 (CET)
I like that. Maybe that one will be their punishment when they get sent to the high school. I scaled back the middle school punishment because I had having too much trouble with details and it was holding me back. I was just excited to get to the part with the science camp so I cut right to it. I added a day to the science camp, too. I can’t wait to see the girls kept up all night being shared around to different bunk beds. Maybe the boys try both girls out and start comparing them. Which girl has the best pussy or hottest body? I think they would hate that since they’re friends. I’m also looking forward to the 2 hour bus ride. Both girls are going to spend lots of time with the bus driver, I think. He’s not staying for the camp, so he needs to get his time in while they’re on the road…--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 18:19, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Part of me says ''just'' the bus driver, another part says quick break at a truck stop for him to fuck them and several men get to take a turn lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 19:02, 15 December 2021 (CET)
What a great way to keep things fresh for the bus ride back home. The bus has a minor overheating issue, so they have to stop for coolant at the bus stop. Yes, that will be great. April also has that loose tooth she’s worried about so she’s really trying not to suck cock. I think Tiffany will have to step up to help her friend on the bus ride. Of course, April loses it in the middle of a blow job later that night….--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 19:13, 15 December 2021 (CET)
One of the boys gets over eager and shoves into her mouth too hard, there goes the tooth, and it gets shoved down her throat making her swallow it. She doesn't even get to put it under her pillow lol Hmm... they don't have cash to pay for the amount of coolant they need... "April, you need to help out or we're never getting home." --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 19:22, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Yes, it’s perfect. Too perfect. Almost as if the whole situation was set up in the first place to torment the girls. Strange they seemed to still get back on time even though the bus was supposed to be late after stopping for over an hour. I’m sure the truck drivers that used them pooled together and made a nice donation to the school for the favor. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 19:37, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Make them late! It's April's fault for being too slow to help get them home! lol More punishment for her. Perhaps she gets a few days at the High School by herself? Ooohh no she gets to "apologize" to all the dads picking up boys (or moms if they want to use her too). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 19:46, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Of course, that will really ruin their day. I really would like to see April all by herself at the high school. Something is going to get ruined/ vandalized and she is going to get blamed for it. Nobody believes her (except Tiffany) when she says she didn’t do it. Maybe Tiffany tries to stick up for her and gets in trouble but doesn’t get sent to the high school. April has to spend a week just strapped to the wall and fucked. I’m getting a little ahead of myself, though. April and Toffany still have a few more days at the middle school. They’re going to be spending some special time in the teachers lounge getting passed around. They probably have a good time watching Tiffany and April 69 and get each other off and jerk off on them while they do. The chess club will be a blast for the boys who get to have their dicks sucked while they play.
Eventually things are going to have to get worse for them at home, too.
--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 20:09, 15 December 2021 (CET)
I wouldn't mind seeing female teachers using dildos on them. As for worse at home... Daddy can take her back to the park, naked this time, and fuck her in front of the kids. Maybe leave her spread on a picnic table for anyone else to take a turn that wants to (kids or parents). lol New city ordnance has some bdsm equipment installed at the playground to strap her into as a public display punishment (and no one speaks against it if people play with/use the display). --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 20:13, 15 December 2021 (CET)
Yes, that sounds perfect. After April gets in trouble again right after her week at the middle school, Daddy realizes she obviously hasn’t had enough public humiliation and he’s been too soft on her doing it all in private. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 20:30, 15 December 2021 (CET)
How long before the girls decide if they're going to get in trouble anyway, might as well do bad things to ''earn'' it? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 21:54, 15 December 2021 (CET)
I’m not sure. I’m having fun making the girls really hate it for now. But I think that actually sounds like a nice way to wrap this story up. The adults start realizing they’re doing bad things on purpose and then they drop with the formalities. Both families get together and have one big massive orgy. A nice sweet happy ending for two very tormented little girls. --[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 22:25, 15 December 2021 (CET)

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Nice! Maybe have a note where the school isn't responsible for lost or damaged clothing so they start from the house naked? With them starting to like sex and have their own orgasms, it's only a matter of time before they figure out that the "punishments" are just an excuse for people who find them arousing to have sex with them. They can start misbehaving on purpose for the ones they like attention from. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:15, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Yes, the girls are definitely starting to catch on. They’re both still too weirded out by sex to do things on purpose, but I’m thinking after this two weeks with all the rowdy boys, they’ll finally start realizing things aren’t so bad when they go back to their own school. Maybe they end up corrupting another little girl and get her in trouble, too. I’ll have to think about that one for a bit. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:01, 11 December 2021 (CET)

They also probably didn't know they could be "naughty" with each other. Now once they have time to think about it, the teacher has put that thought in their heads. Of course, two weeks at the middle school, I doubt they make it long before someone has them lick the cum out of each other. Oh look! Girls can make each other feel good with licks, too. I like the other girl angle. Maybe they frame her for something to get the attention off of themselves? Of course, it might come to light that they did so later, eliciting an even more extreme punishment for them lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:05, 11 December 2021 (CET)

At the middle school, I’m planning a full week of sex-ed where the girls have to demonstrate various things for the boys and of course, they’ll get to try things out of them, too. This will include having the girls do things with each other. Naturally, their going to learn lots of interesting things along the way. I’m particularly looking forward to their trip to the science camp where they spend nearly 3 days with a dozen or so boys and hardly get a moment to themselves. The girls don’t have any sleeping arrangements, so the boys end up trading them around at night. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:26, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Nice! Maybe the biology/health teacher lets whoever wants to try sex do it, but they have to do it right there in the class under her/his supervision? Is it just one grade getting the sex ed, or will they be in the biology room all day every day? lol Love the science club trip! Nerds who never get to be around girls? They better rest during the day when the boys are busy with activities, because I can totally see them taking turns all night, even waking each other up for their turn. Hmmm... maybe it's like a barracks, all the boys from every group in the same room, so it's not just the home group that gets turns. Of course, the teachers need something to do while the boys are all in their activities so they can keep them nice and warmed up. Then there's the bus rides there and back. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:35, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Yes, for the trip, I was thinking two different rooms with bunk beds. The girls get separated and don’t like that. But they can both hear each other’s moans from down the hall. Being forced to shower with the boy’s sports teams should be fun, too. Then there’s the chess club tournament, so more nerds they get to spend time with in between games. I’m not sure how that’s going to go down yet. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:14, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Now that I think about it, I really like the idea of them purposely getting into a little mischief together once their suspension is over, getting in trouble on purpose but things don’t always work out how they plan. Maybe the adults catch on to what they’re doing and they start teasing the girls instead. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:55, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Your threat to tease them after they get in trouble on purpose made me think of them being sent to class naked with a vibrator strapped to their pussy. The kind women wear under their clothes for their partner to tease them in public? Anyway, they're sitting in class under constant stimulation, and every time they disrupt class with an orgasm, it adds another day of that punishment. The teacher can put their name on the board and every time they disrupt class, she adds another mark beside their name. After 5 marks, they get sent to the office (only to come back half an hour later with the vibrator still on and a freshly fucked pussy). All kinds of fun to be had with that "Of course I already erased a mark for you being naked today! Stop trying to get extra marks taken off!" --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:38, 11 December 2021 (CET)


That would be a great way to escalate things. Perhaps this is even a new thing they’ve wanted to try out and the girls are the pilot program. I’ve also considered bringing a boy back in at some point, but I haven’t really found a good reason to yet. --Hgcollins (talk) 21:05, 11 December 2021 (CET)

I'm not a fan of M/m, personally. Maybe a 5th grader gets in trouble, and he has to entertain the school during lunch by fucking one or both girls? His punishment is the embarrassment of doing it in public, and the girls aren't even being punished, really just told to do it lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:38, 11 December 2021 (CET)


Yeah, I’m not a fan either, but sometimes I like including them. Maya’s Fantasy was about as close as I ever got to writing a boy story. A reader wrote into Lasiter asking for more boy stories and that way my response since I had an idea of an older girl corrupting her little brother. --Hgcollins (talk) 21:52, 11 December 2021 (CET)

I probably didn't read that one as I tend to avoid stories with that tag. Put them in stocks or strap them to a wall so that anyone who wants to can fuck them? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:29, 15 December 2021 (CET)


I like that. Maybe that one will be their punishment when they get sent to the high school. I scaled back the middle school punishment because I had having too much trouble with details and it was holding me back. I was just excited to get to the part with the science camp so I cut right to it. I added a day to the science camp, too. I can’t wait to see the girls kept up all night being shared around to different bunk beds. Maybe the boys try both girls out and start comparing them. Which girl has the best pussy or hottest body? I think they would hate that since they’re friends. I’m also looking forward to the 2 hour bus ride. Both girls are going to spend lots of time with the bus driver, I think. He’s not staying for the camp, so he needs to get his time in while they’re on the road…--Hgcollins (talk) 18:19, 15 December 2021 (CET)

Part of me says just the bus driver, another part says quick break at a truck stop for him to fuck them and several men get to take a turn lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:02, 15 December 2021 (CET)

What a great way to keep things fresh for the bus ride back home. The bus has a minor overheating issue, so they have to stop for coolant at the bus stop. Yes, that will be great. April also has that loose tooth she’s worried about so she’s really trying not to suck cock. I think Tiffany will have to step up to help her friend on the bus ride. Of course, April loses it in the middle of a blow job later that night….--Hgcollins (talk) 19:13, 15 December 2021 (CET)

One of the boys gets over eager and shoves into her mouth too hard, there goes the tooth, and it gets shoved down her throat making her swallow it. She doesn't even get to put it under her pillow lol Hmm... they don't have cash to pay for the amount of coolant they need... "April, you need to help out or we're never getting home." --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:22, 15 December 2021 (CET)

Yes, it’s perfect. Too perfect. Almost as if the whole situation was set up in the first place to torment the girls. Strange they seemed to still get back on time even though the bus was supposed to be late after stopping for over an hour. I’m sure the truck drivers that used them pooled together and made a nice donation to the school for the favor. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:37, 15 December 2021 (CET)

Make them late! It's April's fault for being too slow to help get them home! lol More punishment for her. Perhaps she gets a few days at the High School by herself? Ooohh no she gets to "apologize" to all the dads picking up boys (or moms if they want to use her too). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:46, 15 December 2021 (CET)

Of course, that will really ruin their day. I really would like to see April all by herself at the high school. Something is going to get ruined/ vandalized and she is going to get blamed for it. Nobody believes her (except Tiffany) when she says she didn’t do it. Maybe Tiffany tries to stick up for her and gets in trouble but doesn’t get sent to the high school. April has to spend a week just strapped to the wall and fucked. I’m getting a little ahead of myself, though. April and Toffany still have a few more days at the middle school. They’re going to be spending some special time in the teachers lounge getting passed around. They probably have a good time watching Tiffany and April 69 and get each other off and jerk off on them while they do. The chess club will be a blast for the boys who get to have their dicks sucked while they play.


Eventually things are going to have to get worse for them at home, too. --Hgcollins (talk) 20:09, 15 December 2021 (CET)

I wouldn't mind seeing female teachers using dildos on them. As for worse at home... Daddy can take her back to the park, naked this time, and fuck her in front of the kids. Maybe leave her spread on a picnic table for anyone else to take a turn that wants to (kids or parents). lol New city ordnance has some bdsm equipment installed at the playground to strap her into as a public display punishment (and no one speaks against it if people play with/use the display). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:13, 15 December 2021 (CET)

Yes, that sounds perfect. After April gets in trouble again right after her week at the middle school, Daddy realizes she obviously hasn’t had enough public humiliation and he’s been too soft on her doing it all in private. --Hgcollins (talk) 20:30, 15 December 2021 (CET)

How long before the girls decide if they're going to get in trouble anyway, might as well do bad things to earn it? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:54, 15 December 2021 (CET)

I’m not sure. I’m having fun making the girls really hate it for now. But I think that actually sounds like a nice way to wrap this story up. The adults start realizing they’re doing bad things on purpose and then they drop with the formalities. Both families get together and have one big massive orgy. A nice sweet happy ending for two very tormented little girls. --Hgcollins (talk) 22:25, 15 December 2021 (CET)