Talk:April's Punishment/Part 22

Nice! I'd love to see a scene where the boys dad has gone to work or out golfing or something, and the mom shows her own perversions. Like having them have sex in front of her, her fully clothed and petting her naked son while praising him and telling she enjoys watching him be all "manly" with April or something. Maybe have her suggest having April over the next time his dad goes on a business trip, or something. Tease him about liking to fuck little girls when really it's her that likes watching little girls get fucked? I dunno, just like to see more of the lady getting involved, even vicariously lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:36, 7 May 2022 (CEST)

Oh yeah, I like that idea a lot. They also have all the videos of April that were included in their auction lot. I was thinking of a family movie night or something, but I haven’t quite come up with anything I’m super into yet. --Hgcollins (talk) 08:13, 8 May 2022 (CEST)

Only thing that pops to the top of my head is family movie night then they all want to watch April get fucked. After they watch, the parents to go their own room to fuck, and April and Brad are left to their own entertainment. Then the next day Dad is out golfing and won't be home until supper since it's really business meetings on the golf course, and Mom makes her play about how "proud" she was of him last night and how "exciting" it was to see him fuck April so hard, etc. She leads him into letting her watch as many times as he can manage before his dad gets home, and Brad's enough of a "momma's boy" to be eager to make his mother happy. April's happy because the mom isn't mean about it and even encourages Brad to make April cum, too, as often as he can. Maybe send a note home with April that she'd be "willing" to watch her for a weekend when her husband isn't home to object if April's parents want a weekend away or something. In reality she has her own plans, whether it's using Brad and toys to make April cum as much as possible before sending her home, or she wants to suck Brad's cum out of April's pussy while Brad fucks and tries to knock up his own mother lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:07, 8 May 2022 (CEST)

I don't know exactly how you would do this, maybe Tiffany telling the story, but you should include Tiffany's weekend into the story ( probably should finish April's first, then figure out how to add hers lol) --RonaldMcDonald—talk 00:06, 9 May 2022 (CEST)

Switch perspectives? We've seen April's Friday night and Saturday morning/afternoon. Maybe do Tiffany's next, or even just switch to her Saturday night and have her grateful that the fat guy only did it once and was gone making arrangements for Saturday and Sunday when she woke up, but now she's naked in this guys house with guests arriving or whatever lol... hmmm... you wanted Tiffany to have a humiliating weekend, maybe it's her turn to do it with a dog as a crowd watches and films it? Depending on how perverse the crowd at the party is, one of them might have a sub that gets filled with dog cum and she has to suck the cum out of the older girl/woman's pussy while getting fucked by a dog herself? Just tossing shit out there now lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:32, 9 May 2022 (CEST)

So I was planning on switching perspectives, but I also like the idea of having a bunch of dialogue between Tiffany and April on Monday where she tells April everything that happened. It could be quite a bit more emotional that way, but I wouldn’t be able to describe things as easily. And I was definitely thinking the same thing with Brad’s dad out golfing for a while. Now that April is warming up to having sex all the time, for her 7th birthday, she asks to invite Tiffany and Brad over.--Hgcollins (talk) 01:22, 9 May 2022 (CEST)

Yeah, I think I’m probably just going to jump back to Tiffany’s weekend. I was going back in forth, but I have enough to just straight up write it. I’ll save that dialogue idea for Fun with Naomi. It fits that story a lot better anyways. I think I might start alternating again between the two. It’s becoming pretty clear that April’s Fantasy won’t end in two more chapters like I keep thinking since like, chapter 16… --Hgcollins (talk) 01:44, 9 May 2022 (CEST)