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== School Activities ==
== School Activities ==


He’s in the school’s soccer team. He loves to play since he’s able to be as violent as he wants without being punished. He can’t wait to be older to be captain of the team.
He’s on the school’s soccer team. He loves to play since he’s able to be as violent as he wants without being punished. He can’t wait to be older to be captain of the team.


== Biography ==
== Biography ==


August was 7 when his mother died giving birth. This experience leave a deep scar in the little boy, who somehow took it as her abandoning him. Since then he's been afraid of others abandoning him, and tries to both keep other tied to him and at the same time keep them away.
August was 7 when his mother died giving birth. This experience left a deep scar in the little boy, who somehow took it as her abandoning him. Since then he's been afraid of others abandoning him and tries to both keep other tied to him and at the same time keep them away.


A few months ago he caught his father drunk, blaming his own obsession with [i]whores[/i] for the death of his wife, and in his mind decided to punish his sister for being such a [i]whore[/i].
A few months ago he caught his father drunk, blaming his own obsession with ''whores'' for the death of his wife, and in his mind decided to punish his sister for being such a ''whore''.


He didn’t expected to get such a thrill when forcing himself on her sister and touching her, feelings that confused his otherwise righteous anger. Nor did he expected her to actually accept his touch. Now he’s more confused than ever, but he continues to play with his sister.
He didn’t expect to get such a thrill when forcing himself on her sister and touching her, feelings that confused his otherwise righteous anger. Nor did he expected her to actually accept his touch. Now he’s more confused than ever, but he continues to play with his sister.


At school he always tries to be the top dog, feeling safer if others fear him. When he found out that a girl a year younger than him, [[Disciplinary Action/Characters/Seventh Grade/Diya|Diya Styles]], was the daughter of a prostitute, he directed all his efforts and underlings to make her life hell.
At school he always tries to be the top dog, feeling safer if others fear him. When he found out that a girl a year younger than him, [[Disciplinary Action/Characters/Seventh Grade/Diya|Diya Styles]], was the daughter of a prostitute, he directed all his efforts and underlings to make her life hell.

Revision as of 20:59, 1 October 2017

August Fine

Name
August Fine
Age
13
Birthday
February
Grade
Eight Grade
Description
A lonely and troublesome boy. He hides his insecurities in a mantel of bravado and bullying.

Family

Father – 35
Joram Fine
Sister –10
Charity Fine
Sister – 7
Bevvy Fine
Brother – 6
Judas Fine

School Activities

He’s on the school’s soccer team. He loves to play since he’s able to be as violent as he wants without being punished. He can’t wait to be older to be captain of the team.

Biography

August was 7 when his mother died giving birth. This experience left a deep scar in the little boy, who somehow took it as her abandoning him. Since then he's been afraid of others abandoning him and tries to both keep other tied to him and at the same time keep them away.

A few months ago he caught his father drunk, blaming his own obsession with whores for the death of his wife, and in his mind decided to punish his sister for being such a whore.

He didn’t expect to get such a thrill when forcing himself on her sister and touching her, feelings that confused his otherwise righteous anger. Nor did he expected her to actually accept his touch. Now he’s more confused than ever, but he continues to play with his sister.

At school he always tries to be the top dog, feeling safer if others fear him. When he found out that a girl a year younger than him, Diya Styles, was the daughter of a prostitute, he directed all his efforts and underlings to make her life hell.

WIP Suggestions accepted.