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I mean something that lets the reader know what the story is about before they dive into it. A synopsis plus links to the start of the story and any other resources you choose. Life Of A 13 Year Old, Generations, and The Family Cox are good examples. Life Hacks does it too, but jumps directly into the story at the same time. Smooth Operator, when I checked it last night, felt like it started too abruptly, like without even the meager introduction of a list of choices we didn't have any background for what was going on or who these people were or why we should care. [[User:Claws61821|Claws61821]] ([[User talk:Claws61821|talk]]) 02:55, 23 February 2019 (CET) | I mean something that lets the reader know what the story is about before they dive into it. A synopsis plus links to the start of the story and any other resources you choose. Life Of A 13 Year Old, Generations, and The Family Cox are good examples. Life Hacks does it too, but jumps directly into the story at the same time. Smooth Operator, when I checked it last night, felt like it started too abruptly, like without even the meager introduction of a list of choices we didn't have any background for what was going on or who these people were or why we should care. [[User:Claws61821|Claws61821]] ([[User talk:Claws61821|talk]]) 02:55, 23 February 2019 (CET) | ||
Okay I gotcha, that makes sense I'll work on that, I'll take a look at those examples you gave me so it give me an idea of how I should open up an introduction. [[User:BluePanda|BluePanda]] 20:03, 22 February 2019 (CET) |
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the Request message with your name signed (which is coded by 4 tilde symbols "~" in a row) is the common method on this site for requesting that the author or authors working on a story fill in that branch of the story. It means someone is interested in seeing what you are going to write for that branch rather than being interested in writing it themselves.
In my case, I posted the request because I was actually interested for writing in that story with the "Male Teen Wolf" perspective because I like the scenario you set up. However, I felt a need to get more of a sense of the environment and situation you were setting up first, so I requested the two things that could give me the most information. (I think the route where you find Gabby and ask what's got her upset will probably lend more info than the one with the person crying in the bathroom, but I requested both.) Jemini (talk) 05:33, 14 February 2019 (CET)
Oh! Neat, I didn't think anyone would like what a wrote, I just started writing again after a long hiatus from my private collection of writings, then I found this section of the site and the muse took me. BluePanda 15 February 2019
The twin 6 year old cheetahs on your character sheet page, Lucy and Zoey Cooper. Are 1 of them a mis-naming of Kayla, the 6 year old cheetah girl in the closet with the rabbit boy? If not, why is Kayla not on the list?
Woops, forgot to change her name on that page. Alrighty done. BluePanda 21 February 2019
I have two questions that I realize may seem rather rude... Why did you move the entirety of the Male Teen Wolf branch of A World of Cubby Sex to a new story (Smooth Operator); and why does this new story have no proper introductory landing page? Claws61821 (talk) 11:30, 22 February 2019 (CET)
Nah it's not rude, I'm probably the rude one here, I felt that the story was getting a little big and still expanding that I would need to start organizing sections my way (still trying to think of how to do that), "The World of Cubby Sex" felt like a place for short sex stories. Also I like to draw and having this new drawing tablet thought later down the road I might start adding pictures to show each character as they appear. I'm not sure what you mean by "proper introductory landing page" can you link me to a few to show me examples. BluePanda 14:23, 22 February 2019 (CET)
I mean something that lets the reader know what the story is about before they dive into it. A synopsis plus links to the start of the story and any other resources you choose. Life Of A 13 Year Old, Generations, and The Family Cox are good examples. Life Hacks does it too, but jumps directly into the story at the same time. Smooth Operator, when I checked it last night, felt like it started too abruptly, like without even the meager introduction of a list of choices we didn't have any background for what was going on or who these people were or why we should care. Claws61821 (talk) 02:55, 23 February 2019 (CET)
Okay I gotcha, that makes sense I'll work on that, I'll take a look at those examples you gave me so it give me an idea of how I should open up an introduction. BluePanda 20:03, 22 February 2019 (CET)