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Your take on Sally's nudist home life seems to be a bit spicier (or a lot spicier depending on choices!), which is fine of course, but it would probably be jarring for anyone to jump between the two, so having come to a place where a time-skip seems warranted, I decided I better to make my own page and keep the two paths separated. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 08:30, 31 July 2021 (UTC) | Your take on Sally's nudist home life seems to be a bit spicier (or a lot spicier depending on choices!), which is fine of course, but it would probably be jarring for anyone to jump between the two, so having come to a place where a time-skip seems warranted, I decided I better to make my own page and keep the two paths separated. --[[User:BraveNudeWorld|BraveNudeWorld]] ([[User talk:BraveNudeWorld|talk]]) 08:30, 31 July 2021 (UTC) | ||
I know what you're saying, a lot of what I'm writing isn't strictly in the ENF genre which is often more lighthearted and innocent and focused more strictly on embarrassment. I don't think there's anything wrong with overlapping genres or interests though. Like you said, it's all about what the reader chooses, so I think it's okay for very different story arcs to be in the same list of starting points. Even though I've strived for it in many of my other stories, it's virtually impossible for open format CYOA to have perfect continuity, and I don't think anyone will be bothered by one character having very different adventures. | |||
In any case, I'm also happy to move/separate my arcs somehow if they're too jarring or don't fit. You can also rewrite them or tone them down. I'm open to whatever. --[[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 21:36, 31 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
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While mom joining her in nudism would be fun (especially for Devin), it doesn't really fit with the established story of Mom trying to make her give up. Only way I see it is reverse psychology and trying to shame Sally into stopping by copying her. Of course, that could backfire as they egg each other on to more and more daring acts while nude to "prove" the other is just faking it to be stubborn (and perhaps mom comes to enjoy it after all lol). --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:40, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
There are a couple ways you could go with mom being naked. Sally's obliviousness was inherited from her mother so she might have just had her own bought of forgetfulness. But Ava trying to psych out her daughter would probably be the most fun. --Villenia (talk) 23:41, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Your take on Sally's nudist home life seems to be a bit spicier (or a lot spicier depending on choices!), which is fine of course, but it would probably be jarring for anyone to jump between the two, so having come to a place where a time-skip seems warranted, I decided I better to make my own page and keep the two paths separated. --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 08:30, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
I know what you're saying, a lot of what I'm writing isn't strictly in the ENF genre which is often more lighthearted and innocent and focused more strictly on embarrassment. I don't think there's anything wrong with overlapping genres or interests though. Like you said, it's all about what the reader chooses, so I think it's okay for very different story arcs to be in the same list of starting points. Even though I've strived for it in many of my other stories, it's virtually impossible for open format CYOA to have perfect continuity, and I don't think anyone will be bothered by one character having very different adventures.
In any case, I'm also happy to move/separate my arcs somehow if they're too jarring or don't fit. You can also rewrite them or tone them down. I'm open to whatever. --Villenia (talk) 21:36, 31 July 2021 (UTC)