Talk:DT:MOTH\Tyler at school.: Difference between revisions
No edit summary |
No edit summary |
||
| Line 4: | Line 4: | ||
I'm assuming she whispered it as he walked out the door. He couldn't actually hear her at that point. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 19:35, 31 July 2021 (UTC) | I'm assuming she whispered it as he walked out the door. He couldn't actually hear her at that point. --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 19:35, 31 July 2021 (UTC) | ||
The small text denotes whispering. P.S. What do you mean ''was'', I'm still working on it. --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] ([[User talk:Blackdragon25|talk]]) 23:37, 31 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
Revision as of 23:37, 31 July 2021
Might I suggest a template with a picture of a clock? If you have a lot of scenes at school you can use that to do nothing but the bell rings for time shifts and scene changes, like when she tells him to read and then suddenly school is done for the day. Just a way to break the flow of the conversation to show a shift is all. Clock with the bell ringing, then teacher telling them that's all for today here's you assignment. Might make it a tad less abrupt (not that anyone wants to read the whole day of elementary school lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 14:20, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
Did she really tell Tyler her panties were soaked? I suspect that should have been a thinks= line. P.S. I've mostly been ignoring the DT stories... the format is interesting, but I'm not really sold on it. This scene was pretty good though! --BraveNudeWorld (talk) 19:29, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
I'm assuming she whispered it as he walked out the door. He couldn't actually hear her at that point. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 19:35, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
The small text denotes whispering. P.S. What do you mean was, I'm still working on it. --Blackdragon25 (talk) 23:37, 31 July 2021 (UTC)