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Ideas... maybe. Actually ''writing''... not so much lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 05:52, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
Ideas... maybe. Actually ''writing''... not so much lol --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 05:52, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
Haha, I'll do what I can and hope I won't disappoint. Too much. --[[User:Green|Green]] ([[User talk:Green|talk]]) 06:04, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

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Nice! Gotta love loli creampie. Maybe when you move on to Halloween, we can see glimpses of her several days of "training" how to seduce men/boys as flashbacks or something. Maybe alter her costume so that it's sheer and if you look close you can see her naked body underneath? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 15:44, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Great idea! I'll definitely put that in. I'm happy for any feedback or ideas you have. --Green (talk) 05:23, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Only ideas I have is the see through costume so everyone can see what a budding nympho she is, lots and lots of cum in that tiny pussy as she literally whores herself for extra/better candy, and... I dunno, maybe end the night at a costume party where she's the entertainment? After a night of whoring herself out for a little bit of sugar, she gets her first gang bang. Her Aunt can act as a "fluffer" getting the men/boys hard as many times as possible, but it's Jacky's night so every one gets sent to cum in her pussy, ass, mouth or hose her down. With a commemorative video that gets sent to her parents lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:36, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Not gonna lie that sounds pretty hot. I like how you think. --Green (talk) 05:39, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Best part is, she doesn't even realize she's a whore. It's just a fun new "game" her Aunt taught her, when in reality it took her less than a week to go from innocent tomboy to cum addicted whore begging for an endless stream of cocks to keep her womb full. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:44, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

You should write that next part! You're really good at it. I'm jealous. --Green (talk) 05:51, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Ideas... maybe. Actually writing... not so much lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 05:52, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Haha, I'll do what I can and hope I won't disappoint. Too much. --Green (talk) 06:04, 19 August 2021 (UTC)