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Yeah, I’m not a fan either, but sometimes I like including them. Maya’s Fantasy was about as close as I ever got to writing a boy story. A reader wrote into Lasiter asking for more boy stories and that way my response since I had an idea of an older girl corrupting her little brother.  
Yeah, I’m not a fan either, but sometimes I like including them. Maya’s Fantasy was about as close as I ever got to writing a boy story. A reader wrote into Lasiter asking for more boy stories and that way my response since I had an idea of an older girl corrupting her little brother.  
--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 21:52, 11 December 2021 (CET)
--[[User:Hgcollins|Hgcollins]] ([[User talk:Hgcollins|talk]]) 21:52, 11 December 2021 (CET)
I probably didn't read that one as I tend to avoid stories with that tag. Put them in stocks or strap them to a wall so that anyone who wants to can fuck them? --[[User:Notsooldpervert|Notsooldpervert]] ([[User talk:Notsooldpervert|talk]]) 17:29, 15 December 2021 (CET)

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Nice! Maybe have a note where the school isn't responsible for lost or damaged clothing so they start from the house naked? With them starting to like sex and have their own orgasms, it's only a matter of time before they figure out that the "punishments" are just an excuse for people who find them arousing to have sex with them. They can start misbehaving on purpose for the ones they like attention from. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 16:15, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Yes, the girls are definitely starting to catch on. They’re both still too weirded out by sex to do things on purpose, but I’m thinking after this two weeks with all the rowdy boys, they’ll finally start realizing things aren’t so bad when they go back to their own school. Maybe they end up corrupting another little girl and get her in trouble, too. I’ll have to think about that one for a bit. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:01, 11 December 2021 (CET)

They also probably didn't know they could be "naughty" with each other. Now once they have time to think about it, the teacher has put that thought in their heads. Of course, two weeks at the middle school, I doubt they make it long before someone has them lick the cum out of each other. Oh look! Girls can make each other feel good with licks, too. I like the other girl angle. Maybe they frame her for something to get the attention off of themselves? Of course, it might come to light that they did so later, eliciting an even more extreme punishment for them lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:05, 11 December 2021 (CET)

At the middle school, I’m planning a full week of sex-ed where the girls have to demonstrate various things for the boys and of course, they’ll get to try things out of them, too. This will include having the girls do things with each other. Naturally, their going to learn lots of interesting things along the way. I’m particularly looking forward to their trip to the science camp where they spend nearly 3 days with a dozen or so boys and hardly get a moment to themselves. The girls don’t have any sleeping arrangements, so the boys end up trading them around at night. --Hgcollins (talk) 18:26, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Nice! Maybe the biology/health teacher lets whoever wants to try sex do it, but they have to do it right there in the class under her/his supervision? Is it just one grade getting the sex ed, or will they be in the biology room all day every day? lol Love the science club trip! Nerds who never get to be around girls? They better rest during the day when the boys are busy with activities, because I can totally see them taking turns all night, even waking each other up for their turn. Hmmm... maybe it's like a barracks, all the boys from every group in the same room, so it's not just the home group that gets turns. Of course, the teachers need something to do while the boys are all in their activities so they can keep them nice and warmed up. Then there's the bus rides there and back. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 18:35, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Yes, for the trip, I was thinking two different rooms with bunk beds. The girls get separated and don’t like that. But they can both hear each other’s moans from down the hall. Being forced to shower with the boy’s sports teams should be fun, too. Then there’s the chess club tournament, so more nerds they get to spend time with in between games. I’m not sure how that’s going to go down yet. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:14, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Now that I think about it, I really like the idea of them purposely getting into a little mischief together once their suspension is over, getting in trouble on purpose but things don’t always work out how they plan. Maybe the adults catch on to what they’re doing and they start teasing the girls instead. --Hgcollins (talk) 19:55, 11 December 2021 (CET)

Your threat to tease them after they get in trouble on purpose made me think of them being sent to class naked with a vibrator strapped to their pussy. The kind women wear under their clothes for their partner to tease them in public? Anyway, they're sitting in class under constant stimulation, and every time they disrupt class with an orgasm, it adds another day of that punishment. The teacher can put their name on the board and every time they disrupt class, she adds another mark beside their name. After 5 marks, they get sent to the office (only to come back half an hour later with the vibrator still on and a freshly fucked pussy). All kinds of fun to be had with that "Of course I already erased a mark for you being naked today! Stop trying to get extra marks taken off!" --Notsooldpervert (talk) 20:38, 11 December 2021 (CET)


That would be a great way to escalate things. Perhaps this is even a new thing they’ve wanted to try out and the girls are the pilot program. I’ve also considered bringing a boy back in at some point, but I haven’t really found a good reason to yet. --Hgcollins (talk) 21:05, 11 December 2021 (CET)

I'm not a fan of M/m, personally. Maybe a 5th grader gets in trouble, and he has to entertain the school during lunch by fucking one or both girls? His punishment is the embarrassment of doing it in public, and the girls aren't even being punished, really just told to do it lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:38, 11 December 2021 (CET)


Yeah, I’m not a fan either, but sometimes I like including them. Maya’s Fantasy was about as close as I ever got to writing a boy story. A reader wrote into Lasiter asking for more boy stories and that way my response since I had an idea of an older girl corrupting her little brother. --Hgcollins (talk) 21:52, 11 December 2021 (CET)

I probably didn't read that one as I tend to avoid stories with that tag. Put them in stocks or strap them to a wall so that anyone who wants to can fuck them? --Notsooldpervert (talk) 17:29, 15 December 2021 (CET)