Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 26th, 2021/Mommy's Mark - An unexpected visitor/Emilia shows her friends/Heidi makes a distraction for Emilia/Emilia goes home

love it Emilia loving her spade and i mean im surprised in no moment there she mentioned or think about the dog licking her when she was getting excited on the bed? before goinf to the bathtub when she was thinking of what happened that day or when they saw the dog being too excited when they got back since that would make emilia get worried of her mom realizing that she didnt walk the dog or that the dog licked her, it would have been funny if the dog in the excitement did one of those hump jump dogs do when they are excited to Emilia in front of Laura. ok about the options i think 1 and 3 are the ones i would like the most since as good as 2 would be i dont think it would make sense in this path where Emilia has been a sub and never a dom. so i think she would sacrifice again not for their friend this time but more for the carnal pleasure of what happened before. Great work as always love it --Xephion (talk) 03:05, 27 October 2022 (CEST)

I'll hide my uncensored opinion because I don't want to come across as angry towards you as an author. I'm only angry at Laura as a character. Like seriously, good job in writing content that draws emotion out of me, especially towards a fictional character. That's a rare thing indeed, so props to that.

But just out of interest... Is Laura doing this on purpose and being a child-abuser, a "domestic abuser" consciously, or is your version of Laura really too much of a moron to realize Emilia's corruption IS her fault from start to freaking finish? Like seriously, this is what I meant when I said she's so strict and even abusive. What a soul-crushingly evil woman. Laura marked her own daughter with black, using fear and guilt as a weapon, gaslit her, manipulated her, broke one of the strictest rules in the game and got away with it on technicality... And now she is acting like Heidi is the bad guy? What an evil, evil cunt. I pray she gets her comeuppance somewhere down the line because she seriously deserves it. I'll even allow rape and murder if she will! (joking 🤣) -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 04:46, 27 October 2022 (CEST)

Oh, and please don't do the first option. Heidi isn't a kind of character to just lay down and take shit from an abuser. The third and second option make much more sense. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 04:50, 27 October 2022 (CEST)