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This story is shaping up to be somewhat interesting. I would like to see character profiles on the women's side. No girl I want to see the story of in particular, just want to see the profiles. Especially for the sake of Cole and Allen since they are going to be interacting with these girls and women. It would help a great deal to know their ages and some pieces of their background so I know who they are interacting with. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 03:33, 9 February 2017 (CET)
This story is shaping up to be somewhat interesting. I would like to see character profiles on the women's side. No girl I want to see the story of in particular, just want to see the profiles. Especially for the sake of Cole and Allen since they are going to be interacting with these girls and women. It would help a great deal to know their ages and some pieces of their background so I know who they are interacting with. [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 03:33, 9 February 2017 (CET)
Ok, well, with the women's profiles in now it is looking like this may not be the best story for shared participation. I could be wrong about that, I will have to see how things start to shape up, but I am just seeing too much in the backgrounds that results in people having rather complicated sexualities and interpersonal relationships, and that means that skilled writers will have to really watch and get the feel before participating and unskilled writers would only mess things up royally. That said, still interested to see where you take this assuming you have a grand plan for how all these complex relationships are supposed to come together. Otherwise... well... I guess it is up to you whether or not you want others participating. If you do though, I would suggest toning those down a little. (Not that I'm one to talk, that's sort of one of my weaknesses too. I am working on it though, trying to simplify it a bit on a story I am participating in.) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 12:48, 9 February 2017 (CET)

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This story is shaping up to be somewhat interesting. I would like to see character profiles on the women's side. No girl I want to see the story of in particular, just want to see the profiles. Especially for the sake of Cole and Allen since they are going to be interacting with these girls and women. It would help a great deal to know their ages and some pieces of their background so I know who they are interacting with. Jemini (talk) 03:33, 9 February 2017 (CET)

Ok, well, with the women's profiles in now it is looking like this may not be the best story for shared participation. I could be wrong about that, I will have to see how things start to shape up, but I am just seeing too much in the backgrounds that results in people having rather complicated sexualities and interpersonal relationships, and that means that skilled writers will have to really watch and get the feel before participating and unskilled writers would only mess things up royally. That said, still interested to see where you take this assuming you have a grand plan for how all these complex relationships are supposed to come together. Otherwise... well... I guess it is up to you whether or not you want others participating. If you do though, I would suggest toning those down a little. (Not that I'm one to talk, that's sort of one of my weaknesses too. I am working on it though, trying to simplify it a bit on a story I am participating in.) Jemini (talk) 12:48, 9 February 2017 (CET)