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Did you mean to refer to Siobhan as Ellie's sister? (See red text) If you fix it, you may need to cut out the extra fluff.  
Did you mean to refer to Siobhan as Ellie's sister? (See red text) If you fix it, you may need to cut out the Tautology.


"what you and her <I><font color=green>aunt</font></I> are doing, totally oblivious to the miracle of life that just occurred inside of her. The exact same miracle of life you are about to create inside of her aunt as well"[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 20:49, 23 October 2018 (CEST)
"what you and her <I><font color=green>aunt</font></I> are doing, totally oblivious to the miracle of life that just occurred inside of her. The exact same miracle of life you are about to create inside of her aunt as well"[[User:MrPib|MrPib]] ([[User talk:MrPib|talk]]) 20:49, 23 October 2018 (CEST)

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Did you mean to refer to Siobhan as Ellie's sister? (See red text) If you fix it, you may need to cut out the Tautology.

"what you and her aunt are doing, totally oblivious to the miracle of life that just occurred inside of her. The exact same miracle of life you are about to create inside of her aunt as well"MrPib (talk) 20:49, 23 October 2018 (CEST)