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Ok, there we go. What do you think? That seem roughly in line with the characters? I was having a hard time grasping the style before now, which is why this is the first thing I am contributing. I think this was about right. Only problem is, I'm not 100% on where things go from here. I think I might make the request to see you do either, or of the continuations from here, or even to have you do the anal route now that I'm satisfied with this route going off and now I want to see what your idea of Asha's natural reaction is. (I only need to see 1 of the 3, feel free to delete both the other requests as well after completing 1) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 23:51, 12 January 2019 (CET)
Ok, there we go. What do you think? That seem roughly in line with the characters? I was having a hard time grasping the style before now, which is why this is the first thing I am contributing. I think this was about right. Only problem is, I'm not 100% on where things go from here. I think I might make the request to see you do either, or of the continuations from here, or even to have you do the anal route now that I'm satisfied with this route going off and now I want to see what your idea of Asha's natural reaction is. (I only need to see 1 of the 3, feel free to delete both the other requests as well after completing 1) [[User:Jemini|Jemini]] ([[User talk:Jemini|talk]]) 23:51, 12 January 2019 (CET)
I was already headed in another direction which I just posted but I'll see if I can make a detour. I admit I'm a tease more often than anything. It's fun to take things to weird and different places. At the very least it served as some sort of inspiration here. :) [[User:Villenia|Villenia]] ([[User talk:Villenia|talk]]) 09:51, 13 January 2019 (CET)

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Ok, there we go. What do you think? That seem roughly in line with the characters? I was having a hard time grasping the style before now, which is why this is the first thing I am contributing. I think this was about right. Only problem is, I'm not 100% on where things go from here. I think I might make the request to see you do either, or of the continuations from here, or even to have you do the anal route now that I'm satisfied with this route going off and now I want to see what your idea of Asha's natural reaction is. (I only need to see 1 of the 3, feel free to delete both the other requests as well after completing 1) Jemini (talk) 23:51, 12 January 2019 (CET)

I was already headed in another direction which I just posted but I'll see if I can make a detour. I admit I'm a tease more often than anything. It's fun to take things to weird and different places. At the very least it served as some sort of inspiration here. :) Villenia (talk) 09:51, 13 January 2019 (CET)