Talk:Mother's Helping Hand/Sight/Virgin/kinder/Dannie/Ass/Office/Sex/mom/Yes

Dannie is referred to as a "preteen" numerous times in this narrative. Since he's only six years old, I didn't think that was accurate. To my mind preteen is a child between ten and twelve.

I made a lot of changes on this page and I hope you approve. I've no doubt I'll come back to it and change a few more things. That said, I do really like the whole premise of having a teenage boy fucking the little girl while his mother helps.

Santa

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At this time I have to request that you stop editing my work, I asked politly before that you not change description, dialog or anything else you hat was not specifically related to grammar, punctuation or spelling. Yet you continue to do so.

I write what I write for a reason and I want it there. I used pre-teen because that is the term I want to use. A pre-teen is anyone under the age of thirteen. --Telgar (talk) 18:49, 26 April 2020 (CEST)

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Technically true about pre-teen. It can be interpreted to mean anyone under 13, but that's not the general use. The general terms are "Infant" newborn-1 year old. "toddler" 2-4, "child" 5-10 or 5-12, "pre-teen" 10-12, "teen" 13-17, "young adult" 18-30. Jemini (talk) 18:56, 26 April 2020 (CEST)

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Yes, but as the writer, I choose to refer to anyone between 6 and 12 as a pre-teen. It is my choice how I want to use the term, and I ask that those choices be respected, especially since the term Tween had come to mean 10-12.

I choose to use pre-teen because I find it arousing and enjoyable to use that term at that instance, instead of "Child", "Young Girl" or Six-year-old". I specifically wanted pre-teen to be used at that time.

Now don't get me wrong, I have no problems if someone wants to point out, that they think the way I'm using pre-teen is incorrect. I will happily discuss it, however in the end I am the writer and how I choose to write something and what words I write are my choice. My objection is over someone choosing to change the words I used, because they felt it was the wrong word without discussing it with me first.

When I told Santa that I was okay with him editing the work, it was for spelling, grammar and punctuation. Not to delete or replace dialog, description or my specific descriptive word choices. Changes like that I find offensive and rude.

If someone feels what I wrote should be written differently, or doesn't work as written, they should say something in the discussion, get my input before making large summary changes to what I wrote. Just as you and I have done on several occasions. By working together, we made the work better and did so in a way that made both of us happy. Some suggestions were implemented and some were not. As we both came to an understanding as to why certain things were written and certain terms used.

--Telgar (talk) 20:12, 26 April 2020 (CEST)

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Yep, I think that's totally 100% fair. Jemini (talk) 13:46, 27 April 2020 (CEST)