Talk:Step daughters/Asexual/1st Wednesday/Naughty snack/Blindfolded/Sandra knows not

Since the set-up was more or less for you to babysit them for the afternoon, which I interpreted as being after school (likely until their mom gets home from work or something,) this might be a good time to call it by their mother coming home after you've had time to clean up a bit. There can be an option to stay here or go home, and then we can have the consiquence scene where the girls say whatever they're going to say whether you're there or not. (And then if you stay, you can be asked by the mother to shower the girls again tomorrow, this time getting in earlier so it's longer. Maybe she even admits it's the sex-related aspects that make her actively uncomfortable with showering her daughters, or at least that it's something she actively dislikes with some hinting that's the reason. (I can handle that part, I'm good at saying things indirectly while it's very obvious what's being said.) And then possibly finishing off with some kind of comment about being fine with you sleeping over anytime just so you can shower the girls in the morning.)

Of course, this is your story ultimately, I don't want to take too much control away and would rather follow your template for scenes (with some interpretation of course) in order to keep you involved. I've accidentally taken over too many projects, and it frankly gets boring after the original writer steps off the project, so I want to keep encouraging you here. I'm confining myself to the role of just helping you achieve your vision, so view this as just a suggestion, mostly based on things I'd pulled from what was already said and established in the story. This is just what I think would logically happen next. (another option is to change the earlier dialogue to say afternoon and evening when you are asked to babysit instead of just afternoon, or there can also be a comment about the mother being late.) Jemini (talk) 20:56, 6 July 2020 (CEST)