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It sorta helps the whole interactive thing when you give your readers odd stuff the makes then say to themselves "huh, wait did that just happen" or "what the hell is that cop doing there?" it builds suspense then just when they feel like the whole story is about to end lusting/wanting for more then you proceed giving them a sigh of relief / assurance that there's more so they tend continue to read on in anticipation. Metaphorically speaking you feed the the stray cat and they almost always come back for more. | It sorta helps the whole interactive thing when you give your readers odd stuff the makes then say to themselves "huh, wait did that just happen" or "what the hell is that cop doing there?" it builds suspense then just when they feel like the whole story is about to end lusting/wanting for more then you proceed giving them a sigh of relief / assurance that there's more so they tend continue to read on in anticipation. Metaphorically speaking you feed the the stray cat and they almost always come back for more. | ||
--[[User:Icy.horse|Icy.horse]] ([[User talk:Icy.horse|talk]]) 08:52, 14 January 2021 (UTC) | --[[User:Icy.horse|Icy.horse]] ([[User talk:Icy.horse|talk]]) 08:52, 14 January 2021 (UTC) | ||
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Dont know if you're a guy or gal but that is neither here nor there. Anyway i'm terribly sorry i have to add a bit of humor to the last set of options hu just came to mind and you'll crack up. But dont worry your two options are yours to run with i just feel like maybe the boy might want more so.... Read my add-on option in a bit.. OMG i an going to fall over laughing! | |||
--[[User:Icy.horse|Icy.horse]] ([[User talk:Icy.horse|talk]]) 15:06, 14 January 2021 (UTC) | |||
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The request in bold (Request) is the generally accepted way for readers to indicate "hey, that looks like an interesting path, can you work on that one next?". Not every writer accepts it, and if you don't like it, you can just say so and I'll stop (though you might want to post a note at the front so other readers know not to). In fact, I do it for so many stories, I'm going to have to go back through the recent changes page to find which story you're talking about! lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:04, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Ah, right! Bored little girl! The cop would chase them off, and the mobster might kidnap her (or beat the teen up), the blind man would be humorous, but the last guy who's just passing through might be a closet pedo who wants a turn lol (maybe even a friend of her dad's who insists on a turn for not telling on her lol) --Notsooldpervert (talk) 21:07, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Yes i just thought damn annoying cop! Come to ruin all the fun in life. A buzzing fly comes to mind and i wanted to swat the little bugger. Anyways if you notice there is still a way for the two to get caught cause i had stated the cop was chasing the mobster so who knows maybe with the mobster option the mobster would fine the two as soon as the cop does or maybe the mobster decide to have a taste and all three got busted still lots of options that could involve him. Perhaps since he left maybe he's found the mobster hiding mg the bushes very close by and catches the two in the process.
That's the beauty of interactive stories you more or less limited to your imaginations. --Icy.horse (talk) 12:12, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
It sorta helps the whole interactive thing when you give your readers odd stuff the makes then say to themselves "huh, wait did that just happen" or "what the hell is that cop doing there?" it builds suspense then just when they feel like the whole story is about to end lusting/wanting for more then you proceed giving them a sigh of relief / assurance that there's more so they tend continue to read on in anticipation. Metaphorically speaking you feed the the stray cat and they almost always come back for more. --Icy.horse (talk) 08:52, 14 January 2021 (UTC)
Dont know if you're a guy or gal but that is neither here nor there. Anyway i'm terribly sorry i have to add a bit of humor to the last set of options hu just came to mind and you'll crack up. But dont worry your two options are yours to run with i just feel like maybe the boy might want more so.... Read my add-on option in a bit.. OMG i an going to fall over laughing! --Icy.horse (talk) 15:06, 14 January 2021 (UTC)