Talk:Fun with Naomi

Nice. I miss Torrid Tales of the Taboo. Glad to see this story posted again. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 00:41, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I do too. Lasiter was really fun to work with but he got annoyed with asstr which is understandable. He said he may come back every once in a while, but he pretty much sent a goodbye letter to his contributors.--Hgcollins (talk) 01:28, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Well, I look forward to Naomi's parents and brothers turning her into a cock satisfying, cum guzzling bimbo who keeps her naked legs open all the time just in case someone wants to make use of her lol --Notsooldpervert (talk) 01:32, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I think this story fell apart in part 4, so I kind of just gave up on it. I think I'm just going to delete part 4 and keep going. She can lose her virginity on the dining room table right next to a bowl of potato salad for all I care. --Hgcollins (talk) 01:45, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Keep part 4 almost as is. Kick the brothers out, so it's just her sleeping with mom and dad, other than that, her virginity is still intact to lose next to the potato salad lol. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:06, 10 December 2021 (CET)

I'll keep the same idea but just shorten it and include it in part 4. I like the thing with the brother's friend but I'll save that for later, too. Still really stoked about the potato salad. Fancy diner with lots of executives and a crying girl with smeared mascara being passed around the table. She'll learn to like it later --Hgcollins (talk) 02:26, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Sorry, I thought part 3 was part 4. Part 3 ended fine, I don't remember part 4 lol Been too long. --Notsooldpervert (talk) 02:27, 10 December 2021 (CET)

Part 4 was the one Lasiter didn't like at the time and the reader response wasn't as good. I think I ran out of ideas as that point and the party idea came a lot later. He wanted me to keep going with it, but I was too busy writing Maya's fantasy at the time --Hgcollins (talk) 02:30, 10 December 2021 (CET)