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Okay i like the changes a lot is more natural it explains why he is mad at himself and is cute flirty bander at the end is cute, great work as always and i see Heidi is wining surprised since is the tamer of both options but i guess people just wanna see Heidi try to seduce Ludwig, i respect that. in my case my vote is for Emilia to be bold or Laura either way i think all 3 options are great. love it --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 09:31, 16 November 2022 (CET)
Okay i like the changes a lot is more natural it explains why he is mad at himself and is cute flirty bander at the end is cute, great work as always and i see Heidi is wining surprised since is the tamer of both options but i guess people just wanna see Heidi try to seduce Ludwig, i respect that. in my case my vote is for Emilia to be bold or Laura either way i think all 3 options are great. love it --[[User:Xephion|Xephion]] ([[User talk:Xephion|talk]]) 09:31, 16 November 2022 (CET)
Well, technically none of the options are mutually exclusive, and can happen at the same time. Still, my logic was that Laura already is taking full advantage of the game in her own way; watching, learning, and manipulating people around her, so while it's fun as an option to see what else she's doing around the town, she can't really escalate what she's already doing? If that makes sense. Emilia can get bolder in the other options too. πŸ˜‰ -- [[User:Innocent Ruin|Innocent Ruin]] ([[User talk:Innocent Ruin|talk]]) 09:47, 16 November 2022 (CET)

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You mentioned an epilogue after the blowjob scene, IR... and I couldn't help myself! There are truly so many possibilities from here, well beyond what I touched on. Laura could call a family meeting so she and Ludwig could try to "explain" all the symbols only for the kids to admit they know all about them. She could use what happened as an excuse to start exploring her options in the village for her own slave (at least that was my thinking before the "little mistress" you mentioned, although maybe that was still the idea, using this to justify her own activities). Ludwig could also step back into the game more actively. Very open from here! --Villenia (talk) 23:45, 14 November 2022 (CET)

Well, I will say that Laura doesn't have a slave/pet behind the scenes… yet! She could want herself one further down the line, but they don't exactly grow on trees lol. The "little mistress" line was just Gunnar being Gunnar, showing respect to Emilia. If you want to continue writing here, and I almost don't want to even say this, but there is a reason behind why Ludwig distanced himself from the game, which hasn't been explained, which ties to why Laura wants him to return to the game. I'm not sure if I want to put it on a talk page or anything like that due to not wanting to spoil a surprise (if you can even call it a surprise), but if you want me to, I can email it to you (provided your MediaWiki account here on ATF has been set to receive messages) so you can let me know if the idea is good or if it sucks, or whatever. Edit: or, alternatively, I can just have it revealed in the second part of the basement scene, where Milka finally gets stuffed in her last untouched hole. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 00:05, 15 November 2022 (CET)

You can reveal that however you wish, don't want to pressure you. I'm happy to hold off on exploring anything here too deeply until you do. Again, not like I don't have plenty of other paths open! lol --Villenia (talk) 01:32, 15 November 2022 (CET)

I'll reveal it through the basement scene then. Makes the most sense in hindsight. Not like it's a major plot twist or a huge revelation that completely alters his character or anything, just something to give him more backstory and a clear motivation for a guy who used to play an underage sex-game when he was a teen but over the years got opposed to it. Anyway, speaking of "pressure", it's most likely gonna take a while for me to get that stuff out, sadly. Work's gonna keep me busy from Wednesday until next week's Friday, so we'll see how much time I'll actually have to write anything new. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 10:53, 15 November 2022 (CET)

Okay i like the changes a lot is more natural it explains why he is mad at himself and is cute flirty bander at the end is cute, great work as always and i see Heidi is wining surprised since is the tamer of both options but i guess people just wanna see Heidi try to seduce Ludwig, i respect that. in my case my vote is for Emilia to be bold or Laura either way i think all 3 options are great. love it --Xephion (talk) 09:31, 16 November 2022 (CET)

Well, technically none of the options are mutually exclusive, and can happen at the same time. Still, my logic was that Laura already is taking full advantage of the game in her own way; watching, learning, and manipulating people around her, so while it's fun as an option to see what else she's doing around the town, she can't really escalate what she's already doing? If that makes sense. Emilia can get bolder in the other options too. πŸ˜‰ -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 09:47, 16 November 2022 (CET)