Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 20th, 2021/Milka's Plan

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Wow wow wow wow wtf did i just saw... did Milka just cast magic??? or some type of ritual??? man that actually took me by surprised and more importantly did she just got a black club by doing this ritual/magic??? or the black club was just a metaphor of her becoming more animal like and not an actual club??? (you don't have to answer any of this questions and actually it would be better to just see how the story developed better than getting answer im just putting my thoughts out) and another question i have, didn't she gave up too quickly and pull out her trump card too quickly? i was thinking she would have more of a back and forth with him ad he kept getting angry to the point he gets really angry to maybe eve threat her with kicking her out or something and she having no other choice than doing what she just did (and yes technically he did got super angry but i don't know i feel the conversation could have been a bit longer with a stronger back and forth but that's just my opinion and is not necessary to be longer because the end result is the same and even if it feel a bit short she was provoking him too much and maybe she saw that she didn't stood a chance and use her trump card and she most likely still mad with what happened with Danny so it make sense that she wants to get a win after the L) well you are not the only one who likes the supernatural factor of the story btw so im really intrigue right now love it im eager to see more thank you --Xephion (talk) 11:15, 15 October 2022 (CEST)

wait no im stupid i just realized she said pink to provoke him she never was wearing a pink star i just assume she was like Emilia and Heidi probably think so too, no she is wearing a black club form the get go holy shit I'm not erasing my first impression since some of those are not entirely false question she didn't got the black club with magic but she either did that to get confidence to do this OR she did that to be more animal like and is funny to read my first impression now lol but still love it love it love it I'm super excited (because even if Emilia dad don't take this chance someone else in the house could But lets be honest Milka really doesn't wanna take another L) --Xephion (talk) 11:23, 15 October 2022 (CEST)


Yeah, zero magic or supernatural stuff involved in this scene. The song she sang is "Kissanainen" by Aki Sirkesalo, which literally translates to "Catwoman", and she just wanted to get a little freaky with it because she suspected it would help. Take a quick listen to it if you can. It's a very "sensual" song, even if you don't understand the words.

I could've dragged it out more, yes, but I thought it would make the most sense for her to be over with it quick. Slam the foot on the gas and see what it leads to. The back and forth will result from her revelation. She's by far not done with teasing. (Unless, of course, Ludwig just snaps instantly. That's basically the speedrun route.)

Anyway, this will not be a priority for me as long as I've still got the Stella/Emilia stuff to work on. I just wanted to write down these ideas while they were fresh in my mind. 😊 -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 11:35, 15 October 2022 (CEST)


yeah no problem is good to get the ideas out and i mean you have been putting a lot of path lately so do what you are enjoying the most im loving all of this paths thank you again for all this hard work you do. ill give the song a listen too --Xephion (talk) 11:45, 15 October 2022 (CEST)

I decided to take on your suggestion/request to expand on it a little. It's still not meant to be too long of an interraction, but some added context and "back and forth" felt like it could still work. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 01:04, 16 October 2022 (CEST)

Yes i saw great work i like it more the back and forth is nice and still lives the mind to wander the one new factor is that Emilia and Heidi re watching? honestly in the last interaction it seems they weren't watching i love it great work as always --Xephion (talk) 06:17, 16 October 2022 (CEST)

Very much agree that was too much info about Stella. I agree it's best to not spoil other branches but frankly this just flows better without it, so good choice! --Villenia (talk) 04:34, 31 October 2022 (CET)

Yeah, it gave away too much about her personality and tastes in hindsight. I still want to introduce her to this path, and once I do (if I do, that is) I want her to be "discovered" through that fun. -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 10:15, 31 October 2022 (CET)