Talk:Dirty Talk/Three Brats/June 21st, 2021/Caught Off Guard/Emilia listens to Sven and goes to his room

I tweaked a couple small things. It's the first time Laura has met these other girls, let alone the reader (depending on the branches they've followed). But it's hard to believe Emilia would risk getting caught with her brother by a stranger who is in her house, so I added a throwaway line about Milka putting on a voice. If Emilia actually thinks it's her friends in the hall then she might be more inclined to force herself on Sven looking for more game-related clout with her besties. But if it's a stranger I would think she'd stop regardless of whether she thinks the door is locked. --Villenia (talk) 19:49, 22 November 2022 (CET)

The idea of getting caught could also be the the thing that excites and emboldens her to continue, if she's into that. Wouldn't be that far-fetched if you ask me. She could be thinking her friends are ALSO in the hallway, and use that as justification for continuing too. Either or, honestly, or just to tease Sven. Still, fair points all around. I'm personally leaning towards Emilia stopping her advances for the reasons you mentioned. Cheers for the edits! 👍 -- Innocent Ruin (talk) 21:28, 22 November 2022 (CET)

hello all im still here reading just being busy with pain (getting better i believe) and pokemon but i love this story and what you all done ill try to write more often but no promises